Could Your Review My First Video Please

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I'm looking into providing video plr on my site. This is my first attempt!

The problem is I'm not going to do my own voiceover and looking into having the voiceovers done professionally, it seems it is going to cost a whole lot!

So is this video passable without voice? Does the music make you want to pull your hair out? Are the captions displaying long enough to read?

Here's the link

Any feeback appreciated.

Thanks
Tracey
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  • Profile picture of the author nick1123
    Tracey - the video looks nice and informative. The music isn't great but it's ok.

    Why not do your own voice overs?
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    • Profile picture of the author Tracey_Meagher
      Originally Posted by nick1123 View Post

      Why not do your own voice overs?
      My Irish drawl doesn't make for a professional video ... even more so for something that I'm selling as PLR!

      I see many videos and I can say this one is nice and the music is nice.

      I like't.
      Thanks Johnny
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  • Profile picture of the author gyar29
    Tracey,

    I think the video is great. No problem with the music, I just turned it down. Pretty informative for those that are not familiar with the subject matter.

    However, I've one issue with it. The "Description Text" keeps moving around. Which means that I've got to find it when you bring it up. I know that this may seem to be a personal taste issue, and maybe it is, but having to find your description text is, for me anyway, distracting. Especially when the background screen-shot is moving at the same time.

    Nevertheless, good job!

    Gene
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    • Profile picture of the author Tracey_Meagher
      Originally Posted by gyar29 View Post

      However, I've one issue with it. The "Description Text" keeps moving around. Which means that I've got to find it when you bring it up. I know that this may seem to be a personal taste issue, and maybe it is, but having to find your description text is, for me anyway, distracting. Especially when the background screen-shot is moving at the same time.
      Thanks Gene, this did occur to me but having them in the same place was blocking out some of the screen action at times ... the downside to captions. I will think about how I can improve this somehow.

      Originally Posted by longdrv4u View Post

      The music made me want to pull my hair out.
      lol ... I waited for somebody to say this
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      • Profile picture of the author gyar29
        Originally Posted by Tracey_Meagher View Post

        Thanks Gene, this did occur to me but having them in the same place was blocking out some of the screen action at times ... the downside to captions. I will think about how I can improve this somehow.
        Tracey,

        Perhaps keeping the caption in the same place until you must move it to keep from blocking the screen action, and then slow things down a bit when you do move it to let older slower eyes adjust.

        Gene
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  • Profile picture of the author longdrv4u
    Tracey,
    I liked the video it had good relevant information.
    Do the voice over yourself brand Tracy Meagher as the expert.
    The music made me want to pull my hair out.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mohammad Afaq
    This video is great. I really like it.

    I am not a video expert but I think that it would be better if you do your own voice over because this would make you an expert.

    or

    If you don't want to do your own voice over you can put the text in a specific place. (If you have Adobe After Effects it wouldn't be hard to do)
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  • Profile picture of the author docmac
    The video covered an interesting, need to know topic. It was easy to read with adequate time allowed. The music and screen changes actually helped keep my attention. The video was short, but left me wanting to see and know more.

    I think it was great...
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  • Profile picture of the author Tracey_Meagher
    Thanks for the feedbak everybody. I have lots to think about and some good ideas for improvment so far.
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