FINALLY finished blog and salespage - dont laugh plz

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Okay , I just finished my blog and sales page ..... This is my first ever sales page by the way and product... tell me what you think and some suggestions please , thanks

Niche Superhero - the salespage

the blog - Niche Strategy Tips - Harness The Power Of Niche Marketing And Become A Super Affiliate!
#blog #finally #finished #laugh #plz #salespage
  • Profile picture of the author waloosh
    Haha, except for the headache-creating background, I love them. The background has a nice tone to them... EXCEPT... not with all the circles and such.

    Everything else is really nice and looks great though.

    I'm only attracted to it because I'm a major geek. Comics, games, movies, you name it... Been there. So I like it a lot. Perfect theme in my opinion for people like me.
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    • Profile picture of the author buckz55
      lol thanks .... i tried to make the salespage short and to the point
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    • Profile picture of the author buckz55
      what would be the best move now on promoting the blog and sales page ?
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  • Profile picture of the author waloosh
    Any way you could change the backgrounds though? =D I'm still kinda dizzy from it. =(
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    • Profile picture of the author buckz55
      Originally Posted by waloosh View Post

      Any way you could change the backgrounds though? =D I'm still kinda dizzy from it. =(
      hehe idk i kinda like the background
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  • Profile picture of the author waloosh
    I like it too, but just needs to be toned down a little, lol. I'm not sure how to keep the design and tone it down. That's a big project

    Anyway, for promoting, I would say.. Submit it to every search engine you can. Go forum to forum and do the "secret advertising". Like some people you see on this site "please review my site" instead of paying the $20 to advertise their products. (No offense). Use the tiny buttons under your posts for social bookmarking. Furl, de.icio.us, technorati, and digg. Those are usually the best ones.

    If you have accounts with social networking sites, like MySpace, Twitter, etc, those are good places to advertise too. Especially when you have LOTS of friends.

    I would definitely stick with the theme if you're going to fully advertise. Just like you did on the site. Start the topic with something like "It's a Bird! It's a Plane!" that you used. I really like that, lol.
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    • Profile picture of the author buckz55
      Originally Posted by waloosh View Post

      I like it too, but just needs to be toned down a little, lol. I'm not sure how to keep the design and tone it down. That's a big project

      Anyway, for promoting, I would say.. Submit it to every search engine you can. Go forum to forum and do the "secret advertising". Like some people you see on this site "please review my site" instead of paying the $20 to advertise their products. (No offense). Use the tiny buttons under your posts for social bookmarking. Furl, de.icio.us, technorati, and digg. Those are usually the best ones.

      If you have accounts with social networking sites, like MySpace, Twitter, etc, those are good places to advertise too. Especially when you have LOTS of friends.

      I would definitely stick with the theme if you're going to fully advertise. Just like you did on the site. Start the topic with something like "It's a Bird! It's a Plane!" that you used. I really like that, lol.
      I have onlywire and can do all the basic free promoting stuff no problem .... But I really never used paid - advertising things like adwords ... how effective is that and what should my daily budget be toward that?
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  • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
    WOW!! Very creative idea to create a product based on the superhero concept.
    But I'm not convinced to pay $47 for that product. I need more explanation on how I'll benefit from it.

    My 2c..
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    • Profile picture of the author buckz55
      Originally Posted by ebizman87 View Post

      WOW!! Very creative idea to create a product based on the superhero concept.
      But I'm not convinced to pay $47 for that product. I need more explanation on how I'll benefit from it.

      My 2c..
      what more should I say ? could you give me some ideas on that ?

      appreciate your input though
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      • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
        Originally Posted by buckz55 View Post

        what more should I say ? could you give me some ideas on that ?

        appreciate your input though
        Well..I'm a visual guy and I expect graphical explanation with some screen shots on how your ebook might help me.I'm sure that most of the online consumers think the same but it depends.However I love technical based ebooks with proofs and analysis.Might be more persuasive if you add some pics or screen shots.

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        • Profile picture of the author buckz55
          Originally Posted by ebizman87 View Post

          Well..I'm a visual guy and I expect graphical explanation with some screen shots on how your ebook might help me.I'm sure that most of the online consumers think the same but it depends.However I love technical based ebooks with proofs and analysis.Might be more persuasive if you add some pics or screen shots.

          My 2c..
          this is probably a stupid question but can they be fake screen shots and pics? don't many people do that?
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          • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
            Originally Posted by buckz55 View Post

            this is probably a stupid question but can they be fake screen shots and pics? don't many people do that?
            Noo!! Don't do that.It might backfire if your customers found out that your shots are FAKE!! Why must you fake it? I'm sure that you can come out with a real one.If you're wondering how to add one, just take a picture of your table of contents and show your customer what's awaiting for them in the ebook. Or you're using a particular software to guide the customers on niche research just show it.

            Here's a sample site that might interest you.

            $7 Secrets | 7 Dollar Secrets | How I Made Over $3,000 in Only 7 days with a Simple 30-Page report.

            Good luck!!
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            • Profile picture of the author waloosh
              Originally Posted by ebizman87 View Post

              Noo!! Don't do that.It might backfire if your customers found out that your shots are FAKE!! Why must you fake it? I'm sure that you can come out with a real one.If you're wondering how to add one, just take a picture of your table of contents and show your customer what's awaiting for them in the ebook. Or you're using a particular software to guide the customers on niche research just show it.

              Here's a sample site that might interest you.

              $7 Secrets | 7 Dollar Secrets | How I Made Over $3,000 in Only 7 days with a Simple 30-Page report.

              Good luck!!
              I'm positive he wasn't asking how to make a fake screenshot... he was asking why he should provide screenshots when most people do actually fake them? Asking how a screenshot could be proof when a lot of them are total fakes.

              Anyway, @buckz, just take some screenshots of your ebook like ebiz suggested. It could look better for other people on this site too =)
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              • Profile picture of the author ebizman87
                Originally Posted by waloosh View Post

                I'm positive he wasn't asking how to make a fake screenshot... he was asking why he should provide screenshots when most people do actually fake them? Asking how a screenshot could be proof when a lot of them are total fakes.

                Anyway, @buckz, just take some screenshots of your ebook like ebiz suggested. It could look better for other people on this site too =)
                Guess I might have misunderstood his question then.Just checkout the WSO section and look for products on article marketing,SEO and niche research.Almost most of the products have some sort of screen shots displaying how the author earned $XXXX or the end results of using the product.Why do you think they're doing it?

                Because they want to PROOF it!! Certainly it'll help to persuade more customers.
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            • Profile picture of the author buckz55
              Originally Posted by ebizman87 View Post

              Noo!! Don't do that.It might backfire if your customers found out that your shots are FAKE!! Why must you fake it? I'm sure that you can come out with a real one.If you're wondering how to add one, just take a picture of your table of contents and show your customer what's awaiting for them in the ebook. Or you're using a particular software to guide the customers on niche research just show it.

              Here's a sample site that might interest you.

              $7 Secrets | 7 Dollar Secrets | How I Made Over $3,000 in Only 7 days with a Simple 30-Page report.

              Good luck!!
              Okay , the screenshot of his paypal account ... how can i make one like that when I have made no money lol
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            • Profile picture of the author zerofill
              What would kick that into gear is some visuals in comic book form.

              If you had a few different places with a comic book look like:



              I think some shots with your character like that would look pretty cool. Probably like 3 of them....

              Maybe telling a story and a frame like a comic book...like above.. sprinkled in...that followed along with the story/plot. Ending with a hard sales pitch.
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              • Profile picture of the author waloosh
                Originally Posted by zerofill View Post

                What would kick that into gear is some visuals in comic book form.

                If you had a few different places with a comic book look like:



                I think some shots with your character like that would look pretty cool. Probably like 3 of them....

                Maybe telling a story and a frame like a comic book...like above.. sprinkled in...that followed along with the story/plot. Ending with a hard sales pitch.
                I was thinking that too! I just couldn't figure out how to say it in words! lol Yeah, making the site look like a giant comic book may be really appealing.

                Except, now that I think about it... It may also drive people away. Like serious people. They'll look at it and think they ended up on the wrong site. It could be a good idea in a certain area, but I wouldn't go too far with it.
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                • Profile picture of the author zerofill
                  Originally Posted by waloosh View Post

                  I was thinking that too! I just couldn't figure out how to say it in words! lol Yeah, making the site look like a giant comic book may be really appealing.

                  Except, now that I think about it... It may also drive people away. Like serious people. They'll look at it and think they ended up on the wrong site. It could be a good idea in a certain area, but I wouldn't go too far with it.
                  Yeah...your only going to be able to use about 3 of them...and the copy is gonna have to be damn good...

                  This is one of those...it will sell it like crazy or flop over dead...
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                  • Profile picture of the author waloosh
                    Originally Posted by zerofill View Post

                    Yeah...your only going to be able to use about 3 of them...and the copy is gonna have to be damn good...

                    This is one of those...it will sell it like crazy or flop over dead...

                    That's no exaggeration. This site could be one hell of a money maker by looks alone.
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    • Profile picture of the author hyperlite
      Sales page looks pretty cool but a little cheesy. It also could be longer. It's tempting to go short and to the point, but I dont think that works very well. You have to convince someone to open their wallet and spend 50 bucks. Thats not easy to do. You should have more specifics and testimonials. I wouldn't pay for it the way it is.
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  • Profile picture of the author jpminvestments
    I like the way the site looks. Think adwords would be a waste of time. The competition in that market is pretty tough and bid prices are even tougher. I would try ezinearticles or maybe offline traffic to start.
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  • Profile picture of the author ex9to5guy
    great looking site....i wish i can get my site up...how long did it take you to do? did you write the ebook yourself? and what software did you use to make it?

    congrads on the site
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  • Profile picture of the author Josef_Benjamin
    gredat job man. Leave it like it is, tweak later, no promote the basterd.
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