New Product Web Site Critique Please :)

by Tofegorat 4 replies
This is my first attempt at an online business so any comments or criticisms are appreciated

puresoymask.com

Thanks!
#main internet marketing discussion forum #critique #product #site #web
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  • Profile picture of the author lotsofsnow
    Nice web site.

    I would not put the order part in the side bar.

    And I would give it more "meat".
    (What are the benefits? Why use soy mask? etc.)

    Also a phone number and postal address would add creditability.
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  • Profile picture of the author ezminisites
    I like your site however, just for future reference... this might be a better post for the product review forum. If your thread disappears from here just see if it got moved there OK? Don't panic though...

    Cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author giliav
    Hi,
    I would add a clear call to action (maybe a big button or banner) saying something like "Limited stock available. Make sure you order yours now! click here".

    I don't see any eye catching action on the top fold or even the entire page so you're not using our focus area there to sell your product.
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    Gilad.
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