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Review My New Squeeze Page Please?

by SeanSupplee
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Hi Warriors,
Always great to get feedback from follow IMers would you please take a moment and look over my new squeeze page I just made at...
Secret Traffic Reports FREE Month Trial

I am not sure if it is to veg or has enough information to make someone want to opt in to the list.

Thanks!
Sean Supplee
#optin #page #review #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author johnlagoudakis
    Definitely needs more information.

    What's the main benefit to the subscriber (this needs to be in the headline, oh... and don't put "Squeeze Page" in the headline)

    Then list a few other benefits (bullet points are good).

    "First month free"... this is a turn off if you want to get an opt-in. Just give them something free and once they opt in then you can give them a continuity offer.
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  • Profile picture of the author KillinTheTime
    I agree with John in saying that it looks like it needs a bit more information to give some incentive to have people sign up. The graphics and picture do look great though.
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  • Profile picture of the author tommygunn
    Personally, even if there was more information, I'd be very skeptical of entering my information in a site like this. I want to know who has my information, I want to know I can trust them. I would suggest a personal video slapped in there, with a persons face doing the talking. Hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author Don Schenk
    Sean,

    What is it supposed to be selling? The girl? The money?

    What is your USP? (One that no one else in the world offers)

    Why would anyone want to sign up?

    Why should they?

    What will they receive?

    "Grab The First Month Free" Grab a month of what? A month with the girl? A month helping her count her money? I'm clueless.

    Where is your benefit laden headline? One that answers the question, "Why should I opt in?"

    John is correct. It deffinately needs to give more information.

    I hate to be critical, but you asked. John and I are responding with something we are hoping will help.

    :-Don
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  • Profile picture of the author chris.crittenden
    I would go with Don and Johns idea. I couldn't of said it better myself. I didn't even know what you were selling on the page, but good graphics on the page just need more phrases on what the product is
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  • Profile picture of the author SeanSupplee
    Great I was thinking the same Instead of that girl I was going to chop out all of that and put in a video of me talking about the product and membership site and what its going to do for you. Along with changing that headline to something more catchy and product related. I thank you all for the feedback it does help steer me into the right direction.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikemcmillan
    Yes, Sean, it needs more info. I would favor giving a super report or something that would really make visitors want to opt-in. I mean, I'd buy that babe a drink any day--but she takes up a lot of valuable real estate on your page.
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  • Profile picture of the author NetInvestor
    Originally Posted by SeanSupplee View Post

    Hi Warriors,
    Always great to get feedback from follow IMers would you please take a moment and look over my new squeeze page I just made at...
    Secret Traffic Reports FREE Month Trial

    I am not sure if it is to veg or has enough information to make someone want to opt in to the list.

    Thanks!
    Sean Supplee

    hey sean,

    first of all... i dont know what is all about...so why should anyone subscribe?? Give more information. I also would change the "sqeeze page" in you grafic.

    Youwant to know anyone opts in?? I would say no.

    Hope this helps.

    Cheers,

    Patrick
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  • Profile picture of the author fosheezie
    Hi Sean,

    I agree with everything said so far. I'm in traffic exchanges all the time and honestly I would look at this for less than 2.2 seconds...then move on. Graphics are great but the message...needs work.

    My two cents...good luck to you!

    - Anna
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