Critique my landing page?

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Will ya? Please? Pretty please?

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  • Profile picture of the author PCRoger
    YOu did that with wordpress?

    What's the contact form made from?

    I think it looks good. Now just add the slide down email capture and the pop-up "please don't leave yet" and you'll be done!

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  • Profile picture of the author Lisa Gergets
    Yup, just Wordpress. Took a helluva long time though because I kept having to tweak the html to get it just right.

    The contact form is a plug-in called Easy Contact. You install it and then simply put [easy contact] in the html editor of your Contact page and it pulls in the entire form. Easy peasy!
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  • Profile picture of the author PCRoger
    thanks, I'm using CForms now, but it's too much trouble upgrading all the time and yours looks better with Captcha also.
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  • Profile picture of the author theimdude
    Originally Posted by TinkerAndPo View Post

    Will ya? Please? Pretty please?

    No-Brainer Niche Blogs:
    I am going to be honest ok so not picking on you.

    That site is not right. Missing block on the top next to menu. That sidebar is bad news. Menu in the wrong place and I see you used artisteer. I am sure artisteer can do better than than. No header. Your text don't allign

    As you selling WP themes you wont make with this sales page as you competing with thousands of free WP theme site that looks wonderful compared to yours.

    They say don't judge a book by it's cover but this wont work here as the cover is what you sell and I wont buy

    Hope my critique was not to harsh
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    • Profile picture of the author Lisa Gergets
      Originally Posted by theimdude View Post

      I am going to be honest ok so not picking on you.

      That site is not right. Missing block on the top next to menu. That sidebar is bad news. Menu in the wrong place and I see you used artisteer. I am sure artisteer can do better than than. No header. Your text don't allign

      As you selling WP themes you wont make with this sales page as you competing with thousands of free WP theme site that looks wonderful compared to yours.

      They say don't judge a book by it's cover but this wont work here as the cover is what you sell and I wont buy

      Hope my critique was not to harsh
      Nope, I asked for it! Not saying I agree with you 100% so I have a few questions backatcha.

      That sidebar is bad news.
      What do you mean by bad news, and why do you say that?
      No header.
      Not being sarcastic here, but that blue thing behind where it says "No-Brainer Niche Blogs" is my header. Maybe I don't understand...
      Menu in the wrong place
      Where should the menu be? Isn't that a personal preference?
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      • Profile picture of the author theimdude
        Originally Posted by TinkerAndPo View Post


        What do you mean by bad news, and why do you say that?

        Your center pitch area is to small and make the site look unbalanced.
        I you would show what you offer in a bigger pic in the middle it will flow with the page.

        Not being sarcastic here, but that blue thing behind where it says "No-Brainer Niche Blogs" is my header. Maybe I don't understand...

        That is not a header but just a font you used. You are trying to sell a theme here and if I am looking for premium themes this give the impression
        of what you offer. Use one of your themes to pitch you product

        Where should the menu be? Isn't that a personal preference?
        Menus work better under the banner and not on the top as it is more practical no personal preference

        Drop the side bar and make the page same width all the way as that will also format you text layout better. Also format you text using html and it will look better and you will have better control. Use a this free plugin ø Raw HTML Plugin for WordPress | W-Shadow.com ø to insert raw html and it will show perfect
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  • Profile picture of the author PCRoger
    I was kind of kidding about the please don't leave popup.

    I hate them but....

    People who use them seem to be the ones making a lot more money than me at this.

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  • Profile picture of the author jimcal
    Hi,
    I think you should just offer one package. It gets a little confusing. Nice site.
    Thanks,
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    • Profile picture of the author Lisa Gergets
      Originally Posted by jimcal View Post

      Hi,
      I think you should just offer one package. It gets a little confusing. Nice site.
      Thanks,
      Jim
      Can't. I already have members for both packages.
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  • Profile picture of the author rosan9
    Lisa:

    I agree with what one poster said about the images in the sidebar. They distract from the page. As far as the menu being above the header...well, to each his own, I like it on top. I'd probably darken it.


    Anyway, I was working on another installment of my blog header makeovers when I read your post and decided to do one on your site header. I include expalnations of what I think works and what doesn't from a designer perspective.

    I'm guessing you didn't like the critique or the design I made for you, so I removed the link.


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  • Profile picture of the author Wynter Jones
    Y'know for your target audience (bloggers and IM webmasters) this approach
    could convert very well. I like the way you set it up. It still has the a blog
    feeling and the copy is well written too!

    I think this is a more effective approach for marketing "Niche Blog Templates"
    Not so much of a critique but I wish you good luck. The next thing to do
    is to test and come back with the results.

    Also I noticed you have the Silver and Membership posts password protected?
    Are you using a plugin for that? I'd be interested to know how that works

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    • Profile picture of the author Wilde
      Hi,

      First I like the general feel of the site it looks quite good. But there is a couple of things I would change or test.

      Your optin box over on the right there doesn't really stand out and doesn't tell me why I should give you my email address!

      Put it in the header area on the right and make a bit more of a deal about it. Give away one of the niche blogs in a box, show them how to make money with it in a responder course. So that they can see the value in the product and the quality of it.

      Have one link at the top left members login and one for contact.

      Drop the padding at the top of the page, wasted space.

      Have the sample template images similar to those shown above in the sample header over on the left but I would do it a little different more web2.0 styley...

      Drop the right margin and have some of those sample images in the copy.

      The copy I like as I detest them long sales letters Only thing I would change is the padding around it and test some different color text for the important bits.

      Please take that as constructive as I said that is just what I would try, it's just a bit too busy. If you want any help with it let me know.

      -Phil
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