Been looking at a trend here: many Warriors ask what's wrong with their sales copy, what's missing, they even go changing a good sales copy that it's not converting, and they change it from top to bottom.
But hold on a second.
Maybe the problem it's not your copy. Maybe the main problem it's just your Minisite Design. Think about it for a second.
A different Header can bring more 20% of conversions. A simple Header can be the difference between $25 per day to $100 per day.
That's why testing designs is so important - and at same time, so misunderstood by product owners.
So next time you have poor sales page conversions, ask for opinions about your design to a experienced designer - and you can find at least 10 or 20 of them in here - willing to advice you for free.
Don't leave money in the table. Test, test, test.