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Dear Warrior Person: Please look at AbMyths.com (squeeze page) and give unrestrained comment ..

by saleswriter101
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Your comments go very far in helping to create a better page ..

:: AbMyths.com : Secrets of "The Truth About Six-Pack Abs" : Easiest Way to Defined Muscle, Oodles of Energy & Vibrant Health

It's been reworked a lot in past couple of weeks and I actually have about a dozen subscribers.

All comments appreciated. What doesn't work? How could it work better?

Thank you so much!
Scott
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  • Profile picture of the author davidomni
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    The page looks all right, I would try to get a more specific customer avatar though...
    Improve your copy a little bit. Honestly too, this is a pretty competitive niche.

    I would suggest getting your keywords together and see what comes up in the serp`s
    gauge it, and see if you can beat your competition. You will need some good traffic for this,
    I would hit up health forums... Again based around your keywords. Blogs, craigslist, backpage, kigi, and make article`s too. For that I would outsource...

    If you are going to do ppc, use msn. The users on MSN will buy more compared to the users on google and yahoo.

    Anyways, a little of topic but I hope this helps!

    Cheers.
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  • Profile picture of the author ex9to5guy
    looking good....where do you get picture like that from?
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  • Profile picture of the author Thorleifur Reynisson
    I didn´t like the way you have to put your e-mail in twice. I was a bit curious when I started reading, since I´ve been in the fitness industry for about ten years as an personal-trainer, but the two optin boxe were a litlebit off-putting. Might wanna get more focused photos too.

    Well that´s my thought anyway.
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  • Profile picture of the author Troy_Phillips
    Admittedly I know nothing about the niche . If it was my splash page their is no way I would mention exercise on it .

    We all know that exercise is the only answer but this is something the customer needs to know after they have signed up to your list .

    Exercise and secret just don't seem to go together on this one . The third secret is a keeper.

    As I said ... not my niche .

    Someone who could use some ab work :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author acrasial
    go on clickbank, find the products in your niche, look at their pages... check and see how yours compares.

    Personally, I am not bought with your page... people want INFO. and some pizzaz... it doesn't quite cut it for me.
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