Can You rate my blogger site

The text isn't very engaging.

You might want to use different subheading fonts.

I use an Ad blocker so i didn't see any ads but if you have ads, I suggest you push them to the middle of the site layout.

Also, the layout seems dated... like mid 2000s. You might want to try something more modern like the one used by backlinko or moz

The title of the blog is also keyword spammy such sites normally don't get much love from search engines

I'd write first to appeal to your targeted audiences' needs and wants, address their pain points. In other words, focus on writing sales copy that converts first and seo second. You don't want to get rankings at the expense of conversions. IMO

Wow! How many links do you have in that ebook?

I would remove about a hundred or so. Maybe put a link on each page. Linking the same word every time it appears looks spammy as hell.

Brent

Hi Andrew,

Get on Wordpress.org immediately.

Blogger is for amateur bloggers. Dot org is for pros.

Ryan

Get off of Blogger. Now. Get Wordpress.

Have people subscribe FIRST, then deliver them the ebook. Also, introduce a hover ad when people visit your blog, and write enticing sales copy to get them to sign up to your list and download your free ebook.

Make it easier for your visitors to read (2, at most 3, line-paragraphs.

Use some bold text, break text into sections, give sections title.

Use some images. Use bullet points.

You have a lot of stuff above the download form in the sidebar. Move some of it below it... I'd make the download form the 1st item in the sidebar.

Hi
There is no Call to Action for the download,
and if you can make a beautiful 3D e-cover For the E-book, that will be better.

Nice post here.. Can Someone Help me Rate my site? ScholarInsider thanks

Hi Mate,

Without sounding rude, its terrible.

May i ask,

1.what is the purpose?

2. What are you intending todo with the leads you collect?
3. Do you have a product you are trying to sell?

Check my signature for a sample of free ebook design.

Before you build it, think about the game plan.

1. Who is your target audience
2. What is their pain points
3. How will you monetise
4. How will you follow up.

Trust me my firend I have done the "build it and they will come" it doesnt work.

Engineer your strategy from the goals. i.e. Top to bottom, then work from bottom to top

Hope that helps

Any questions please ask or pm me.

thank you for all the responses

Andrew, where do I even start?

I agree with the getting off of blogger, for a start. Digital sharecropping rarely pays off.

Given the subject matter, I don't have a big complaint with the theme.

Your headline? Pardon my French, but it sucks. It probably looks good to a search spider, especially since it lives on a page Google owns. But as a human, I don't see eny compelling benefit to "Accountancy Careers Free Ebook".

Move the affiliate disclaimer to the bottom of the page. Right now, it screams "I just want you to buy stuff."

The two posts are obviously written for SEO. You also make a few vague claims without backing them up.

Have you ever actually spoken to an accountant? The ones I know are not particularly interested in starting their own businesses. I'd suggest going over to Quora and simply asking why people choose careers in accounting.

I could go on, but until you get a better handle on your target market, and what they really want, any advice I gave would probably do more harm than good.

Mohammed, you're new around here, so I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt and assuming you just want to be helpful.

But...

Most of your posts have some type of 'see my sig' reference, which is seen as self-promotion. Keep it up, and you'll probably see your posts start being deleted.