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Help me with my sales page?

by Wham
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I really don't know how a proper sales page should look as this is the first time I'm doing it so I would like your opinions on what I could do to improve it.

What do you think I should change about this sales page?
Is there too much writing or is it too cluttered?

Pretty much everything comes off their affiliate page, the writing, video, pictures. I just don't know if it's set up properly. I just want to make sure it's worthy enough for when all my articles get approved and traffic starts going to it.

Satellite Direct
#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Wham
    anyone ?
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  • Profile picture of the author Lambert Klein
    Well you could start by aligning the paragraphs left. I know that's not what you meant, but it would be easier to read...

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  • Profile picture of the author Wham
    Thank you, and yeah I know everything needs to be aligned still, but what I'm trying to do is create a nice clean looking sales page that doesn't make people want to click back button, but my knowledge of HTML is so small it's hard.

    Should I scrap it and start a new or is there hope for it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Wham
    Thank you

    What if I put something at the bottom like, all text and pictures are used with permission from Satellite Direct? Or something along those lines

    what do you mean by cred?

    I don't know a whole lot about IM but I'm not selling a business or anything, just a simple product so I know if I personally came across a really long page just for software to watch TV on my computer I would instantly click back.

    Isn't signatures and names a little much? I understand if I was selling people an ebook I personally made but this is not my product so I don't see a reason to be putting my name or signing it unless I owned it, but if any others agree I should then I will.
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    • Profile picture of the author BillyMac856
      If I was you,
      I'd go and punch "Satellite Direct" into the Google box, and click on some of the other ads and notice the graphics they have on their squeeze pages. Its definitely gotta be longer. And you want to sound "credible" you've gotta convince them why they should buy that product through your site and not the others. If I were you I'd go and do a little more research, look at the pages of your competitors and adjust accordingly.
      Hope that helps,
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  • Profile picture of the author Kim Standerline
    You know something Wham

    I actually don't think its bad for a first attempt. Kudos to you for taking action and having a go.

    I think BillyMac's idea is best. check out your competitor's squeeze pages and see how they do it. (hint, check out the keywords they are using as well).

    I'd also check with the main site that they allow you to use their images. Some of these companies are a bit funny about it even though you are promoting their product.

    You can always get your own graphics done anyway for pennies on the dollar.

    Good luck with it
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  • Profile picture of the author Wham
    I tried that and I can't find any, the only thing I've found are articles, and those link directly to the satellite direct website. I'll keep searching though

    Thank you Kim

    Everything I use is under their affiliate page, they have pictures,banners,sales articles,even landing pages but their landing pages are just one big graphic, but it looks a lot more professional, I may be better off using one of there's for now.


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