CONTEST - $3000, $2000 & $1000 Winners...WINNERS ANNOUNCED! <----

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The Winners Are:

1st Place Wins: $3000 [Brian Kindsvater]
2nd Place Wins: $2000 [John Rogers]
3rd Place Wins: $1000 [Rod Cortez]
Unannounced 4th Place Wins: $1000 [avenuegirl]

Winners please PM me your paypal emails :-)

This was VERY hard. There were quite a few that I really liked and that could have been in here. I don't like choosing things like this but I managed to do it without pawning it off on Bryan this time :-)

Thanks to all those who participated - I really appreciate it and had fun reading every entry!

Thank you!

Allen
#contest #winners
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  • Profile picture of the author Timothy Wright
    What's the deadline for this contest?

    This is a really cool idea.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Morris
    Hey Allen,

    Great Idea! Here is my submission, I hope you like it!

    Updated Copy 10/06/2009:

    The Warrior Forum "War Room"
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  • Profile picture of the author HeySal
    Okay - what the heck. I'm in. Hey - I spell checked that post. Talk about taking something seriously!

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1250234
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  • Profile picture of the author TheRichJerksNet
    When is the deadline please ??

    James
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Perry
    Just added my entry HERE

    Thanks,

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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Molano
    Oh, you want a review. I'll update my entry.

    I'm a fan of text ads, but perhaps that's just me.
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    • Profile picture of the author LegitIncomes
      When is the deadline?
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  • Profile picture of the author GautamSaha
    Here is my quick ad for the beloved War Room:
    Warrior War Room - The Mecca of Internet Marketing Knowledgebaseâ„¢

    Cheers!
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    Administrator
    There isn't really a hard and fast deadline. I'll update when we are close. When I have two choices in mind and looking for the third I'll update...

    So, in the meantime anyone who submits one feel free to edit it if there is something you want to change...

    Thanks!

    Allen
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  • Profile picture of the author rhondaklewis
    How many ads can you submit?
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  • Profile picture of the author CurtisN
    Hey Allen,

    Please accept my humble contest submission:
    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...knowledge.html



    Curtis
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  • Profile picture of the author AidanKay
    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1250569

    That's my one. I think I'll change it around a bit later.

    Le Edit: Didn't see the update. I'll do an update later.
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  • Profile picture of the author seriousmny
    Thank you for the opportunity to enter this contest. Here goes :-)

    The War Room - An Exclusive Opportunity

    Had to update my submission: Read the update up above.
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  • Profile picture of the author secretjustin
    Hi Allen!

    Weed Out The Non-Stop Train Of Information B** Sh**!


    I hope you guys enjoy it lol.
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  • Profile picture of the author alvinhuang
    Hi Allen,

    Interesting contest. Here's something I came up with. =)

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1250786

    Alvin Huang
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  • Profile picture of the author GoGetta
    Awesome Contest,

    Here is my entry:

    When Was The Last Time YOU Had A REAL LIFE CHANGING Moment?

    GoGetta
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  • Profile picture of the author shahz
    Hey there Allen,

    Great contest we have here! Here is my submission:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251126

    Good Luck everybody!
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    • Profile picture of the author Kevin Riley
      Oh blast! An update? Not a sales letter? I just got Rieko to type up my chicken scratch:

      http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251131

      She would kill me if I got her to now type up a re-write. Anyway, it's time to retire to the living room. Been producing videos all day and my eyes are needing some non-screen time.

      Fun contest. Ciao.
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  • Profile picture of the author Asher
    Here's my shot for the top prize and for the War Room!

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...om-member.html

    Asher

    Edit: Updated - with some bullets
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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Bestel
    What a great contest.

    Here's my entry

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...e-success.html

    Peter
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    nothing to see here.

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  • Profile picture of the author Tom Brite
    Just wondering where and for who is this going to be used?

    On the forum or off the forum?

    For current members or for people who should join the warrior forum and the war room?

    Thanks

    Tom Brite
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  • Profile picture of the author lakshaybehl
    That's a GREAT contest right here Allen.

    And an AWESOME day maker too. Well, at least for the one who wins.

    Have a question (Am I not just full of them?)... just so we're on the same page here...

    So what's the winning criteria?

    Best Conversion (Actual testing) or best appeal?

    -Lakshay
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  • Profile picture of the author Alican Yenidogan
    It is a great idea Allen,

    I really don't think there is a need for any kind of salespage for War Room so I really had to write a short one..

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251337


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    • Profile picture of the author LegitIncomes
      Very cool, I'm working on mine right now...should be done shortly.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
          Originally Posted by TMG Enterprises View Post

          Jill, I'm not a copywriter whatsoever but I think you are crazy if you change yours. I liked what I wrote as a review until I read yours. If we could vote, you'd get my vote.

          Tina
          You are so sweet to say that! I keep looking over everyone elses post/shoulders for ideas. LOL

          I do have just one more thing I might try.

          Everyones style is so different!

          I keep re-reading the rules and I'm probably over analyzing at this point. Someone suggested I may have been a bit too wordy which doesn't surprise me.

          I keep thinking I would vote for everyone elses but mine at this point.

          Your formula is much better in my opinion - your bullets are obvious, length is good, and I like how it has almost a press release feel to it.

          Ok, I need to get on this quick b/c I can already see this going by very quickly. Competition is looking stiff and looks like I need to pull out some serious guns if I'm going to have a chance in this fight.

          PS, something going on strange on this forum, I just saw a bunch of quoted things appear below my post that I didn't select to quote.
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      • Profile picture of the author RMC
        Well that about sums it up.

        http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252257

        If I don't win something I'm... not going to b!tch about it. I've made a crap ton of money from the forum already.
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      • Profile picture of the author Liam Hamer
        http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252840

        I gave it a shot, just wanted to be a part of it really Visually not too appealing(not really my forte ) but I enjoyed it anyway
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        • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
          Ok, just updated again even though I'm waiting for answers on the other questions. Should I nudge when ever I update? What is the best procedure in all of this? a "Last updated" edit in bright colors in my original post so this thread does not turn into a forum of it's own?

          Who's watching shark tank tonight?
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      • Profile picture of the author sreenivas
        Thats too good idea for making thousands of brain to work for headline and etc ideas.

        Here is mine

        http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...lick-here.html

        Thanks Allen
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      • Profile picture of the author drmani
        Congrats to the winners.

        Great contest, much fun.

        I was especially thrilled to hear the "Unannounced 4th Place Winner" (much deserved, imho)

        All success
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        • Profile picture of the author Frank Donovan
          Allen

          Thanks so much for a great competition and many congrats to the winners!

          There was some real quality copywriting displayed by several Warriors, but I echo the good doctor's sentiments - I'm especially pleased that Jill finished with a prize. Richly deserved, IMO.

          Well done to all entrants



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  • Profile picture of the author Aljiro
    'NEW ENTRY'

    Hi Allen,

    Here is my entry for the contest.

    Enter The Secret Room of The Mightiest Empire Online

    Thank you.
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  • Profile picture of the author JamesPenn
    Here's my entry:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251639

    I didn't plan to spend so long on this, but I got a bit caught up with it all.

    Thanks for a great competition,
    James
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    • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
      Here's a video entry.

      http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-war-room.html

      N.B. It starts out as a black screen before the text and music starts

      Martin
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      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
        Originally Posted by Martin Luxton View Post

        Here's a video entry.

        http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-war-room.html

        N.B. It starts out as a black screen before the text and music starts

        Martin
        Ha - I thought about doing a video entry - and already did one for the WF a week ago, but can this be used for this contest?

        Allen, please clarify - will only written submission be accepted or can audio and/or video be submitted?

        Thanks a bunch.
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        • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
          Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

          Ha - I thought about doing a video entry - and already did one for the WF a week ago, but can this be used for this contest?

          Allen, please clarify - will only written submission be accepted or can audio and/or video be submitted?

          Thanks a bunch.
          Jill,

          Allen said this in the OP

          As big as you want, images allowed...whatever..

          Only one restriction - don't use or ask other members for testimonials. This forum is loaded with testimonials for the War Room so that is not needed.
          so I took that to mean videos would be OK.

          Martin
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    • Profile picture of the author zapseo
      Okay...I love this. This is such a fascinating contest.

      Not sure whether I'll enter. Maybe. We'll see.

      BUT WHAT ARE MOST OF YOU THINKING ???

      Here are 2 big problems (in my admittedly not so humble opinion -- but then I've written 10s of thousands, if not 100s of thousands, of words of copy critiques for a stable of enthusiastic clients...)

      The domain of the game is: copy, advertising, marketing.

      What do we know about this game?

      ATTENTION IS GOD!

      What else do we know?

      Thank you, Seth Godin -- people are slammed with thousands of marketing messages each day.

      WHAT IS MAKING YOUR MARKETING MESSAGE STAND OUT?

      I mean...from the get go. From the very first point where you even announce that you've made an entry?

      You're missing an opportunity. That link -- that link should say something that gets the reader's pulse racing more than:

      "My War Room Ad."

      See, your marketing has to stand out from the get go. From the earliest possible moment. (And, having written this, don't you think I'll get a whole lot more readers to my entry...just because I'm cheeky enough to put my two cents' worth in here? You're going to remember me. Why? Because I didn't take the standard route.

      THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX

      In more ways than one.

      How you introduce yourself, and your entry, is one way to think outside the box. It's actually thinking about the whole process. The whole process of delicious, delicate and fragile attention.

      NOW, I'M GOING TO BE EVEN MORE CHEEKY

      In fact, my criticism even goes after one of the entrants who is a very successful copywriter (but I think most people here don't know that. You might have to visit another forum to discover that.)

      Even his link to his entry has the most pablum-like, oatmeal-bland link.

      IT'S ALL ABOUT SEDUCTION...

      Every. Single. Piece.

      Start, from the very first thought, with seduction.

      How can I get people excited FROM THE GET GO.

      BIG PROBLEM #2:

      This is ALSO A "THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX" ISSUE.

      Wonderful that thinking outside the box can have so many facets to it.

      What is the FIRST think you should be doing as a marketer and/or copywriter?

      WHO IS YOUR MARKET?

      Has anyone asked Allen Word One About who the target market is?

      Oh, you think it's obvious?

      Okay -- then, is it for people who are long time members of the Warrior Forum -- know what the Warrior Forum is, know, or have heard of, the "War Room" ?

      Many of you are writing as though that's the case.

      You are making assumptions -- and you've never asked Allen question 1. (Except about deadlines, somewhat important -- and about images -- something which, as someone pointed out, that a careful reading of Allen's post would have easily revealed. Don't make your client think you are a dufus by asking already answered questions. Or, if you do (I admit, I do it!) -- frame it with things like "Okay, I just want to make double make sure", or "you probably mentioned this and I missed it", etc.

      This is not a cardinal sin, making assumptions. But if you are going to make assumptions -- start with the assumption of "know nothing" rather than "know something."

      Don't assume they know what the War Room is. Or even the Warrior Forum. Why would you do that, without first checking with Allen?

      I can't believe that y'all have been here in this wonderful place and are missing such a basic thing as asking "Who Is The Target Market?" Is it standing in front of the great guru Allen Says that makes your marketing IQ drop -- that you just assume Allen will have provided you with everything you needed to know to do the best possible job?

      Now, there was something else I was going to say. I think.

      Oh. It's still about this assumption stuff.

      And getting the click.

      You guys who have entries -- spark some interest in those links you put in this thread. Make everyone who comes to this thread want to click through to see if the rest of your copy is interesting. HEADLINES -- that's kinda what those links are like. They are places to grab attention. And if you want to make sales, you need to start grabbing attention IMMEDIATELY.

      So, you're going -- okay Miss Too-Big-For-Your-Britches -- what would you put there?

      Glad you asked.

      (heh heh heh.)

      What If It Should Go Away, And You Never Saw It?

      Okay, you smart marketers out there -- educate the rest -- what are the principles I'm using here? What's happening to the reader?

      (Why am I asking so many questions ?)

      Oh, and a subhead....but, of course, that wouldn't be part of the link.

      But it certainly can be part of the post that contains the link:

      "Few Talk About It, Keeping It Their Close-To-The-Vest Secret Of Success"

      Now, I don't claim these are star quality. These are just some of the first things that popped into my mind.

      I'm kinda involved in some other copywriting projects, so, with due respect to my clients -- even though I'd love to enter here -- I don't know whether I'll have the time.

      But, because of my love of the forum, and my love of you guys, and because, well, I can't stop the "copy critique" part of me -- I'm offering these thoughts for your consumption with the hope that it will raise the thinking on the contest.

      And if Allen wants to send me a 4-figure check just as thanks, I certainly won't object. LOL.

      Live JoyFully!

      Judy

      PS -- too funny. I just realized I've removed all the copywriting links, and links to my copy critique wso, from my signature...LOL. Script installations are a relaxing, and different, sort of challenge. And I've got enough writing on my plate at the moment.
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      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
        Dearest Allen,

        I've been inspired to ask a question or 3.

        Who is the target market for this ad? Will it be shown on the Forum here to members who have not converted or is this for the public in general? Or both?

        Can I submit more than one entry? I realize revisions can be made, but wanted to know if more than one entry is also allowed as I am unclear on that.

        Is this for users with high speed internet access? Or will you be looking to make this friendly to the dial up crowd?

        Thanks,

        Jill
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  • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
    Originally Posted by admin View Post

    I'd like to run a contest for the best War Room ad...

    If you'd like to enter, just create a post about the War Room just like you would do if you were going to sell it in the WSO section.

    As big as you want, images allowed...whatever..

    Only one restriction - don't use or ask other members for testimonials. This forum is loaded with testimonials for the War Room so that is not needed.

    Although you can, if you wish, link to any of the multiple threads about the War Room.

    There will be first, second and third place winners.

    1st Place Wins: $3000
    2nd Place Wins: $2000
    3rd Place Wins: $1000

    THEN, I'm going to split test those and the winner of the split test will win another $5000 on top of what he or she already won.

    Please make your post in the TEST FORUM section and then place the link here in this thread when you are done.

    Any questions just ask...

    Thanks!

    Allen

    UPDATE: I think I made a mistake by saying the word 'ad'. I'm looking more for something like a "Large Review" :-)

    I'm noticing many entries that are about the size of classified ads. That's not going to tell a potential member much.

    I'm trying to avoid the words "Sales Letter" because that's not really what I'm looking for. At least not in the general sense of the term anyway.

    I'm looking for something like a Review/Testimonial/Sales letter hybrid. And larger than a classified ad for sure :-)

    Thanks!

    Allen
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    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251785
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  • Profile picture of the author 723Media
    I threw together an image entry. If I can finish my client work, I will add a few more if that's allowed:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251803
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    Interesting.. I'll have my message ready this afternoon..
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Murdaugh
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    Something I slapped together really quick... (And by "slapped together", I mean I didn't get to put 40 hours of work into it...)

    First copywriting contest I've ever been interested enough to enter.

    Thanks Allen,

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  • Profile picture of the author TiffanyLambert
    errr - I wrote mine as if it was you selling it. Not sure if it needs to be worded from us. I thought you'd be using it in the end as your own. Let me know if not and I'll revise it.
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  • Profile picture of the author marcus passey
    Okay thought I would have a quick go

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252142

    cheers

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  • Profile picture of the author shahz
    I updated mine to version 2.0

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1251126

    Good Luck everyone! I'm not really a copywriter - more of a designer, but the contest is really tempting!

    May god bless us all! Cheers guys!

    Winner has to buy beers for everyone who participated!
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  • Profile picture of the author David McKee
    Okay, version one of my initial trial!

    "One Day in This Forum Could Make You Rich!"

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  • Profile picture of the author MarkWrites
    What a fun contest idea, thanks for the opportunity. I couldn't resist and had to make up an entry too.


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  • Profile picture of the author Elmer Hurlstone
    One of the more interesting things about this contest--aside from the extremely generous prizes (Thanks, Allen)--is the ability to not only see your competition but to read their entries.

    This fairly unique situation can be a two-edged sword.

    While it's great to know exactly what your competition is doing there may be a tendency to think, "That's OK, but I can do it better", and then trying to "one-up" some other person's work. Or, in a slightly better case scenario, be inadvertently influenced by another submission.

    Having read only one submission in the test forum before deciding it was a bad idea I don't know if "thanks" are enabled. If they are and are being used that may also jaundice your view.

    So, as difficult as it will be, if I enter, I won't be doing--this one time only--competitive research.

    Just a couple things that occurred to me...

    Use them as you see fit,

    Elmer
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  • Profile picture of the author softwarehits
    Wow, there are a lot of creative posts. Popular Contest!

    Here is my entry..

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...bligation.html


    Omg, I don't know how to make a decent link. Maybe because I haven't made enough posts?

    Anyway,
    Have a good one everyone.
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  • Profile picture of the author Noah Fleming
    What is the deadline for entries? I think I'll write one.
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    • Profile picture of the author LegitIncomes
      Originally Posted by Noah Fleming View Post

      What is the deadline for entries? I think I'll write one.
      No definitive deadline, just whenever Allen finds 3 he wants to go with.
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  • Profile picture of the author Lisa Gergets
    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252606

    Quite sure it won't win, but funny, tho!
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    • Profile picture of the author Elmer Hurlstone
      Originally Posted by TinkerAndPo View Post

      http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252606

      Quite sure it won't win, but funny, tho!
      Dog gone it, T&P, You caused me to violate my, obviously not-too-firm, pledge not to look at the referenced posts.

      Also, bringing a scene-stealing kid onto the stage isn't playing fair.

      Elmer
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  • Profile picture of the author Fernando Veloso
    Nice contest Allen. Love marketing challenges!!

    You're the man!!

    Will post my entry tomorrow since i need to get out to do it.

    Ahhh fresh air in the morning
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  • Profile picture of the author jacktackett
    Ok, I'm in:
    here's my take on it:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1252990

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  • Profile picture of the author Annie Dennis
    Just found this post, love the idea! I know you said there was no hard and fast deadline, however before I throw something together, can you give us an idea how close that fuzzy deadline is please? Cheers ;-)

    Annie
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    Still playing with it, but this is my entry.

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  • Profile picture of the author John Atkins
    It looks like some copywriters are giving it a go. Ouch!

    Here's my entry:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1253210

    Not a professional copy, but I believe that it'll perform well if tested.

    Cheers,
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  • Profile picture of the author Zach Booker
    What a great contest...

    I just threw this one up...hopefully it makes sense.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1253259

    Zach
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  • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
    Alright, this took a lot more work than I thought it would, all I gotta say is kudos to you copywriters, your's is a difficult craft...

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-war-room.html
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  • Profile picture of the author Rod Cortez
    Ok, I'll play. Thanx for the opportunity Allen.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1253476

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  • Profile picture of the author affiliaterocks
    This is wonderful contest. Great forum for entrepreneurs and marketers.

    Yeah..When is the deadline again?
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    • Profile picture of the author Rod Cortez
      Originally Posted by affiliaterocks View Post

      This is wonderful contest. Great forum for entrepreneurs and marketers.

      Yeah..When is the deadline again?
      There's no set deadline. Allen is going to wait and see; he'll notify / update this thread when he decides on the deadline. Probably going to read and read and read until he finds a few that he really likes.....
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  • Profile picture of the author hockier
    Wow, good prize money. I will definately try for it.

    Whats the deadline?
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    • Profile picture of the author Rod Cortez
      Originally Posted by hockier View Post

      Wow, good prize money. I will definately try for it.

      Whats the deadline?
      Go up two previous posts to see the answer......there's no set deadline yet.

      Originally Posted by Bakai View Post

      One thing is for sure, it will really increase the value of the War Room. Great idea Allen.
      Good point, it's actually a GREAT case study for the use of social proof / running contests to create "buzz".......
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  • Profile picture of the author Bakai
    One thing is for sure, it will really increase the value of the War Room. Great idea Allen.
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    • Profile picture of the author zapseo
      Shhhhh....it's a secret....

      RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOUR FACE, if you'd but look.

      Allen's actually dropped a few hints as to a few of the letters he seems to like.

      I'm not going to say what. Not my place.

      Just -- "He who has eyes, let him see..."

      I will ask you this...

      WHAT ARE YOU THINKING ?

      Hamster King, this applies to you, too, so listen up!

      What is the absolutely 1 essential that you need to make a sale?

      Hmmmm????

      Well...after my tour of most of the salesletters this morning -- many of you don't have it. Or some of you, you have a placeholder. WTF? (Hint: you don't need to use a placeholder at this time. You can use the real thing.)

      Geesh. How is Allen going to pick the first 3?

      Maybe it could be from....sales ?

      Is the light coming on ?

      Here's Another Faux Pas that would, for me, put you immediately at the bottom of the barrel ...

      Comments like:

      "I just slapped this up."

      HOW RUDE!

      Uber Copywriter Gary Bencivenga prefaces many of his autographs with "Why not the best?"

      Indeed.

      Why are you willing to put in a half-assed effort?

      You may not win any of prizes, or have any hope to.

      But guess what? Participation in this contest pays you in other ways. As Dr. Mani has pointed out. It pays you in exposure...

      Some of you, it's going to give you some exposure that you may not have had before. Avenuegirl comes to mind.

      Right now, this woman appears to be participating in this contest full bore (boar?) ahead. (Okay, I admit -- I could be somewhat prejudiced. She thanked my post. And participated in another thread I produced. But that spirit! It gets noticed! No hiding her light under a bushel!

      Interesting, that. While I'm not Allen, and I have nothing to say about the voting (explicitly, anyway; and implicitly, if so, may be no more influence than any of you have.) -- she got my attention. I'm sure she's gotten a few other people's attention, too.

      Remember what I said before ... ATTENTION IS GOD when it comes to marketing.

      {/rant]

      oh yah...

      PS -- I think I also found the inspiration for this contest.

      PPS -- someone has their copy in a serif font. That is soooo hard for these old eyes to read. There's a reason people use sans-serif fonts online.
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  • Profile picture of the author BigManta
    This was actually a lot of fun :-)

    I'm not very good at formatting text in forums, but here's my shot at it:

    "One man in a field is not a warrior."
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  • Profile picture of the author zerofill
    And the Winner is...this professionally crafted one-of-a-kind copy from Zerofill...

    You have to pay extra for the uncensored version...

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-forum/131900-cool.html
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  • Profile picture of the author laurenceh
    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-forum/131899-should-you-join-war-room-comp.html


    What a great idea and opportunity Allen. Thank you.


    This is also the very first sales letter/review of it's type I have ever written, and would probably not have showcased what I can do without the prompt of this contest.


    Hopefully I will get a bit of feedback here, AND gain valuble lessons in the process of maybe earning some prize money!

    Love it!


    Ooooh how green I am! I cannot get the link to work! I think I coded it right? What have I done wrong? Grrrrrr
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  • Profile picture of the author zapseo
    Laurence, all ya gotta do is slam the url in there.

    I think the posting mechanism will do the rest.

    Let's try it:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...ml#post1255091

    (pulled directly from my address bar)

    Oh, and by the way, someone has already privately answered my question, and also knew some of my other secrets....

    And no, his name wasn't Allen.

    Anyone else?
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  • Profile picture of the author zapseo
    Don -- about 50% of your copy gets edited out.

    I could have sworn I'd seen worse words here in the forum.

    The easy peasy brain dead simple way to add clickable links to your post:

    Just put the link in the post. The very smart posting will transform it into a clickable link for readers. (And I'll even remove these educational comments about putting links in...)
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  • Profile picture of the author MikeAmbrosio
    Well, why not, right?

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...crop-only.html

    Mike

    P.S. I am not a copywriter...I am not looking for jobs...just having a little fun
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  • Profile picture of the author laurenceh
    oh booger cnt get 2 a pc 2nite. On cell internet so ave 2 edit tommorow. Wat a fool! I pasted the url that appeared after i posted entry. Thought that would work. http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...room-comp.html see if this works!
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  • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
    Great competition.

    Some real good entries already. I wonder if any have caught Allen's attention yet. Are we going in the right direction?

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  • Profile picture of the author tomw
    What a great idea (and opportunity!)

    I can't remember the last time I had to write copy, but I've given it a go and really enjoyed the challenge of getting the old brain cells into gear again.

    A lot of fun!



    Thanks Allen.

    Here's my link:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-warriors.html

    Tom

    P.S. I'm with Mike A (great to see you!) I'm not a starving writer either.
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  • Profile picture of the author jaggyjay
    3 pages of entries so far. Looks like some stiff competition : )

    Here's my entry:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...mpetition.html

    Best of luck to all warriors!

    - JaggyJay
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  • Profile picture of the author RGallowitz
    WHOOPS!

    I totally forgot to post here.

    Here's my entry. A bit different I think....

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-war-room.html


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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Murdaugh
    "I just slapped this up."

    HOW RUDE!
    Fixed my post there ZapSeo...

    It's a figure of speech for "I don't have 40 hours to put into this like I normally would..."

    It's the best I can do in a few hours, it was actually quite a bit of work, but don't have the time to edit/polish it like I would for a normal client...

    Hell, if I wasn't swamped with work right now I probably WOULD put 40 hours into it...

    But I don't... I don't know the deadline, I'm not 100% sure where it's going to be marketed, or if I'm supposed to be targeting forum members who haven't signed up yet or people who may be new to IM and this forum in general.

    I'm working on a project right now that pays more than 1st place upfront... I'm sorry if you're offended that I have to give that client my full attention right now, on top of personal projects and everything else I've got going on.

    Uber Copywriter Gary Bencivenga prefaces many of his autographs with "Why not the best?"
    Because my "best" takes 40 hours or longer... Although I still think if my hunch is correct about who this is targeted to that I did a pretty damn good job on the copy given the time frame I have to go on here...

    It's not a half-assed 3 line ad, it was a lot of work... Is it my best? No. Can it sell to the right crowd? Yeah, if I'm right about who that crowd IS.

    Sorry if it sounded "RUDE" to you, but honestly this is the ONLY contest like this I'd ever consider entering... And I seriously doubt anyone else is spending 40 hours writing their ads either.

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  • Profile picture of the author zapseo
    best does not necessarily require 40 hours in everyone's book. One of my mentors pulled in $1.4M in 15 minutes from a letter he wrote, I don't recall how long -- but he did it in front of a group of people during no more than an evening in Friday Harbor, Washington. (He's actually the person who turned me on to Bencivenga, btw.)

    I don't have adequate amount of time to write something that would do what I have justice -- so I'm not writing it.

    Over on the copywriters' forum here, there's a thread for people requesting reviews. It comments about people who say such things as "I just slapped this up here."

    It sets up a bad taste in people's minds from the outset.

    Your work deserves a better shot. Whatever you do.

    So, even if you DID just "slap this together" -- and can't devote your usual amount of time -- it most likely serves you better to keep the amount of effort you spent to yourself. Some of my best selling work is some of the writing I've done the quickest.

    PS -- that's a sweet job you did on Ken Fry's copy, BTW (I haven't read your contest copy yet.). I was part of Ken's inaugural group on that product and it pleases me that his outstanding product is so well-served by your copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author BigManta
    I noticed the same thing when creating my post. But when you sign up for the War Room it does mention 20 years in the drop-down box - as I just signed up yesterday after wanting to participate in this post :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author TiffanyLambert
    Originally Posted by Matt Jutras View Post

    I'm really confused about something here...just a small detail...

    I've noticed in more than a few submissions the claim that the $37 investment gives you 20 years of membership...yet in the sales letter for The War Room it says that you get a LIFETIME membership.


    Link to War Room sales page:

    Warrior Forum - The "War Room" - Private Discussions

    The quote I'm referring to:



    Since I wrote my submission with the assumption that the membership was for life, can someone clear this up for me...if I made a mistake with my submission I'd like the chance to fix it...
    I seem to recall someone saying the system only allowed 20 years but it's a lifetime membership
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  • Profile picture of the author Ankesh Kothari
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  • Profile picture of the author 4Highflyers
    No time for fancy graphics and stuff, but it's been a fun lunchtime distraction for sure ...

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1257929

    Good luck with getting what you need, Allen.

    Best,
    Adam
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  • Profile picture of the author zapseo
    Happened to bump into the CURRENT copy for the War Room.

    In case y'all haven't seen it in a while.

    Worth reading, examining, thinking about.

    Warrior Forum - The "War Room" - Private Discussions

    Even Elmer can read it, since it's not one of the entries.
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  • Profile picture of the author laurenceh
    Also Ladies and Gents If possible I would like to use this opportunity to take any feedback offered by any copywriters and critics in regards to my effort.

    First attempt at this type of sales copy so would be useful to know what I need to work on and learn.

    In case you missed it the link is below.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...room-comp.html
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  • Profile picture of the author eaglechick
    Excellent Allen - Thx

    Just a few quick questions?

    Obviously you have to be a member of the war room - does it matter if you just joined
    the war room but have been a member of the warrior forum for a few months?

    Is the number of posts going to count against you?

    It seems like even if someone has been a member for a long time and they do'nt
    post regularly some warriors feel like it is not appropriate or acceptable.

    But some people just like to keep a "low profile" and some are "more sociable".

    Indeed a potpourri of personalities in this very warrior forum.

    Say you've written your own unique sales copy can you call in the help of a fellow
    warrior to assist you with technical stuff that you do'nt have the proper knowledge
    for like for exmple an : extraordinary image

    Will it then disqualify you or does anything goes within limits off course!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Asher
    Here's my other shot!

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1258825

    I completely re-did it because I thought the words "begging"
    in my first attempt wouldn't suit the Warrior Forum's WSO letter.

    I like how it turned out! It's fun and I liked the little story
    I threw in... heh. I don't know if it'll work well but it sure
    as heck ain't something I've seen a lot (maybe there's a
    very good reason... hrmm)

    Unfortunately, I only can use 10 images, so I did the best
    I can with it. I also "stole" a lot of stuff from the existing
    letter because there's already good stuff there - might as
    well use it!

    I really liked how it turned out.

    Hope you like it, Allen! ... and send me the $3,000 along with
    it =D

    A little thing... I don't know if the code for [ YOU ] still
    works but if it does, I figure it's going to be a deadly
    attention grabber... just like it did back when it was being
    tested.

    Asher

    EDIT: PHEW! Good thing I made it just before I saw the message
    "Sorry, the board is unavailable at the moment"... I would have
    gone mad if the whole post was not saved.
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  • Profile picture of the author Josiah
    Dear Allen... please do not close this contest yet...

    I'm still working on mine... it should be done within the next 3 days...

    I will cry if you close it... seriously I will...

    It's been a heap of fun so far!

    Good luck to everyone!

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  • Profile picture of the author SiteSeller52
    Here is my quick entry for the contest.
    Hope it is up to par :-)

    War Room Review - Prepare For Battle!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Asher
    Dang it, avenuegirl (Jill Carpenter) is killing the competition
    with all her videos!

    We've even got monkeys in the competition now.

    Can't wait to see what other tricks get pulled out of the hat
    for this competition.

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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Keyes
    I LOVE this competition, it was so much fun writing this, here is my contribution:

    The WAR Room Is The Final Stop, Enter When Ready!

    Thanks Allen!
    Karen Newton
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  • Profile picture of the author eaglechick
    Alvin - awesome professional looking graphics - so far my vote for 1st prize goes to you.

    ALJIRO -
    fantastic - I'm sure you'll definitely be in the top 3.

    So far it seem that all the prizes will go to the east.
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    • Profile picture of the author Frank Donovan
      Allen, this is a really fun competition. Thanks loads.

      It's been fascinating to see all the different styles and interpretations

      Here's my shot: http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1266226




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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Bestel
    My second entry - a video one at that and a bit of fun too.

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...et-weapon.html

    Peter
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  • Profile picture of the author tomw
    In the spirit of openness and transparency, I just want to declare that I made some amendments to mine;

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-warriors.html

    Allen did say you could edit them. They were just body copy changes...after re-reading the whole thing again, I didn't like how some of the sentences flowed; pacing etc.

    Tom
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    • Profile picture of the author Martin Luxton
      Originally Posted by tomw View Post

      In the spirit of openness and transparency, I just want to declare that I made some amendments to mine;

      http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...-warriors.html

      Allen did say you could edit them. They were just body copy changes...after re-reading the whole thing again, I didn't like how some of the sentences flowed; pacing etc.

      Tom
      Come on, Tom, admit it. You got one of your junior copywriters to do a rewrite.

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      • Profile picture of the author tomw
        Originally Posted by Martin Luxton View Post

        Come on, Tom, admit it. You got one of your junior copywriters to do a rewrite.

        Martin
        Haha...no, it was a multi award winning creative director who won a Caples for the tagline,

        "why have cotton when you could have silk?"



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        • Profile picture of the author Tom Brite
          Originally Posted by Rod Cortez View Post

          Damn Tom, do you ever sleep? lol
          Urrrrm.... Probably not!

          Have got my sleeping down to a maximum of 6 hours a day but typically only 4 to 5.

          Means me make more money! (Take that for alliteration)

          Originally Posted by zapseo View Post

          ....WHO IS YOUR MARKET?

          Has anyone asked Allen Word One About who the target market is?

          Oh, you think it's obvious?.....
          Already asked on the very first page!

          But yep enjoyed your post and is a very valid point too.

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        • Profile picture of the author Astral Pipesman
          Hey, there!

          I am so new here. And I must have spent the last 24 hours reading all the posts on Warrior. I am obsessed.

          But it's so cool to read all the entries from a newbie POV. In my business, a new film production assistant is called, "green." I'm green big time here...

          I am thinking of joining this contest because, hey, why not, right? On the other hand, I might not be ready to enlist. (get it? WAR room, "enlist.") Thinking about it.

          ANYWAY...

          This is a GREAT competition! And it helps me to see what goes in to copy writing - lot of creativity and persistence.

          At this point, Frank Donovan and MJ Schaefer are my favorites because they had the most creative angle for my liking. They stood out the most to me.

          Hope you've got thick skins, both of you guys, because those angles are going to be used by others now!

          Thanks for running this, Allen!

          Yours,
          Betsy (aka Astral)
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  • Profile picture of the author Karen Connell
    This is my humble contribution

    I had some photos on Word when I drafted it, but have no idea how to add them to the post:confused:!

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  • Profile picture of the author Ivancho
    Hi Allen,

    Have you got a winner yet ?

    I am planing to post my ad tommorow morning.

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Jagged
    Maybe the 3rd times the charm....lol

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1267826

    Ken
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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Originally Posted by Jagged View Post

      "Man...The War Room is soooooo good...
      I'm going to join again!"
      This is the killer line of the year.
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  • Profile picture of the author HeySal
    Hey Allen - I withdraw......Your update about writing a review rather than an ad would put me treading waters too close to Kevin (and we know how he drives a continent) if I were to do a sober rewrite. I won't take it off so if your decisions come down to originality factor you have what was posted very shortly after your announcement to review. I just took a look at what I wrote - not bad for an after the bar blurb, but not exactly what would have been written the morning after. LOL - have fun with it folks.
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  • Profile picture of the author AidanKay
    Here is an ad I made for the war room. It's native dimensions are 640 x 480.

    Please tell me what you think. I know that the actual words may be crappy, but I'm just asking about the aesthetics of the image.

    Cheers,

    -Aidan.

    P.s: I know this competition is for a written salespage,I just thought I'd offer this. Seeing as I'm a far better designer then I am at creating salespages.
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  • Profile picture of the author santosm
    Get real! There is no Pot of Gold at the end of the rainbow!....There is however, 'The WAR ROOM'

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  • Profile picture of the author Jonathon Locke
    Hey Allen - I found this thread a little late; but I'm working on my entry as we speak. You mentioned you would let us know a little while before you close; I'll have mine in within 48 hours if the contest is still running! This is right up my alley

    All the best,
    Jonathon Locke
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  • Profile picture of the author Jagged
    Since I dug this off of page 4....it might be time for last call on entries?
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    • Profile picture of the author Sarah_Lyle
      Here's my entry too:


      http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1279458

      Hope you enjoy it.

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      • Profile picture of the author DASHBOY
        What great advertisments.

        I joined the war room not long ago and haven't had a chance to go in yet but after reading some of these let me tell you I'll be going straight over
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        • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
          Originally Posted by DASHBOY View Post

          What great advertisments.

          I joined the war room not long ago and haven't had a chance to go in yet but after reading some of these let me tell you I'll be going straight over
          Please, take this rope and don't let go! I'll pull you out in about a week if you don't find your way out.
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  • Profile picture of the author designfuschion
    congratz to the winners!

    Bugger i'm too late. Been busy getting myself organised for my first wso. ahh well.
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  • Profile picture of the author Peter Bestel
    Congrats to all the winners and good luck for the rest of the comp.

    There's a heck of a lot of talent on this forum, I'm not surprised Allen had a difficult job in choosing.


    Peter

    PS In case you've arrived at the end of this thread, the winners can be found on Allen's first post:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...announced.html
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  • Profile picture of the author tomw
    Congratulations to the winners!!!

    I'd also like to echo Dr. Mani and Frank and say, great move, Allen. Jill deserved something too.

    It was a great competition, a lot of fun - and educational.

    All entrants should be commended.

    Tom
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  • Profile picture of the author MizzCindy
    Great competition! Congratulations to the winners! I love that Jill got an unannounced prize - really great job, everybody!

    Cindy
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  • Profile picture of the author zapseo
    Congrats to one and all!

    I guess I should have taken AvenueGirl up on her offer to split the winnings, LOL.

    Live JoyFully!

    Judy
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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Originally Posted by zapseo View Post

      Congrats to one and all!

      I guess I should have taken AvenueGirl up on her offer to split the winnings, LOL.

      Live JoyFully!

      Judy
      Judy, I have to thank you. You didn't have to come into this thread and drop some obvious hints.

      I am in shock right now.

      And it was extremely kind of Allen to toss me in. It was completely unexpected. I was thinking this was going to go on for a few months.

      I am truly honored and humbled to be in such great company. Not just with the winners of this contest, but by many people on this forum.

      I really believe this forum as a whole gives me opportunity to network with some really good people. And for that I am most thankful.

      Big congrats to Rod, Brian, and John!
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    Man, I love this place!

    Thank you, Allen! That had to be an agonizing decision. I don't know why you do that to yourself, though I must admit, I'm not unhappy with the result.

    Congrats to Brian, Rod, and Jill. And thanks to everyone else who put their stuff out their to be publicly scrutinized and judged.

    I wish I hadn't checked the forum so early this morning. It sucks to have a reason to celebrate when the liquor store doesn't open for three hours.



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  • Profile picture of the author Asher
    Congratulations to all the winners~

    This was a cool contest and I got to learn about
    copywriting just for trying =)

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  • Profile picture of the author jacktackett
    Congrats to everyone and a big thank you to Allen. For the contest and for creating a very nice swipe file for us right on the forum - Oh, and please don't delete the threads in the test forum.

    Pretty cool folks, this is just one of the many things that makes this forum my favorite place to visit!

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  • Profile picture of the author Jagged
    Congrat's to the winners! Great Contest Allen...extremely generous of you...

    There were many "honorable mentions" in my opinion...everyone did a fantastic job. There's a lot of hidden talent with-in the warrior forum....Hopefully it will open doors for a few...

    & Good Luck to the finalists in the next phase...

    Hope Allen keeps us informed on the progress & outcome of his split testings that determine the over-all winner...should be interesting to watch.

    Nice Job Everyone,
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  • Profile picture of the author Rod Cortez
    Wow, I'm speechless! Congratulations Brian and John and Jill (nice videos)! Also to everyone who gave it an good, honest try. There were a lot of great submissions, it must have been really tough for Allen to pick the winners. Now I can buy more coffee beans......

    Btw, I'm really looking forward to seeing who wins the split-testing portion of it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    What does this say about the Warrior copywriters?

    No "copywriter" (popular posters to the copywriting section
    of the forum) won this competition.

    Maybe, like me, they stayed out of the competition because
    it would be too embarrassing to lose.

    CONGRATS to all the winners!

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    • Profile picture of the author kindsvater
      Thanks for the post Ray.

      It's a valuable lesson I'll be sharing with my teenage daughter later today when she gets home from school.

      This was a once in a blue moon, feather-in-the-cap, promotional opportunity for many copywriters who need this type of accolade to put food on the table.

      But an irrational fear of not winning kept you, and probably others, from even trying.

      You can't win if you don't try. You can't even get better.

      Everyone goes through periods like that. Then it's time to hit the Mind Warriors subforum. There's a reason why Allen deems the subject important enough to warrant it's own discussion. It's a place where I've obtained several suggestions this year that have made me mentally stronger - and Borders a little richer.
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    • Profile picture of the author zapseo
      Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

      What does this say about the Warrior copywriters?

      No "copywriter" (popular posters to the copywriting section
      of the forum) won this competition.

      Maybe, like me, they stayed out of the competition because
      it would be too embarrassing to lose.

      CONGRATS to all the winners!

      -Ray Edwards
      That hasn't gone without notice. John Rogers and I were discussing that earlier this morning. I have privately made my prediction of the winner, and the reason why. Not too surprisingly, it's the person who "appears to" have taken some of my advice. I don't know whether they actually did or not -- but it certainly jumps over some of the hurdles I mentioned earlier in the thread.

      THAT SAID -- and for the edification of those who are less aware of the games that can be played in terms of marketing and in terms of statistics -- depending upon the context (and the pre-selling) -- any letter could probably win.

      It's not about the salesletter alone, but about the entire context of the campaign.

      I'm in great admiration of the winners -- who, by my lights, must have put in some good amount of time writing their pages. Congratulations.

      Live JoyFully!

      Judy

      PS -- I keep promising myself that I will enter these contests. Some great things have happened to some of the people I know who have entered -- and won -- copywriting contests. Vin Montello comes to mind. Unfortunately, I was already behind the 8 ball because of server issues stemming back a few months. Hopefully, I'll have more opportunity.

      PPS -- The #1 thing that I think was notable to me among the winners, especially, and less so among the losers were strong and consistent and clear Calls To Action. In case y'all didn't pick up on that earlier. When you totally believe in a product, and believe it really will be beneficial to others, it's not hard to ask for action. In fact, it creates a disharmonic in you if you don't.
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      • Profile picture of the author kindsvater
        Judy:

        Very interesting, but I never saw your post on page 2 until now.

        If you want to know, the title THE KINDSVATER WAR ROOM CONTEST ENTRY was intentionally done to (1) draw attention, (2) be different from other entries, and (3) denote confidence. Not sure if that is what is what you are referring to.

        And, as you've seen, I did make an effort to introduce Allen Says and the Warrior Forum assuming a lack of knowledge by the reader. Heck, a lot of current Warriors seem to not know who 'Admin' is and are often disrespectful as a result.

        Not that I'm much more knowledgeable - I didn't even know there was a preexisting War Room ad until after I submitted my entry. Undoubtedly, Allen will add his Guarantee at the end - an important marketing tool I couldn't include without knowing it existed.

        As an aside, when I was new to the forum I went back into the archives (now the archived archives?) and read EVERY post Allen had written. Took a while, but it was well worth it.
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        • Profile picture of the author zapseo
          Originally Posted by kindsvater View Post

          Judy:

          Very interesting, but I never saw your post on page 2 until now.

          If you want to know, the title THE KINDSVATER WAR ROOM CONTEST ENTRY was intentionally done to (1) draw attention, (2) be different from other entries, and (3) denote confidence. Not sure if that is what is what you are referring to.
          Actually, that wasn't quite what I was thinking of -- but THANKS for the response. I LOVE to hear what's behind folks' thinking.

          (I think I wrote another post in here somewhere, where I also screamed that "ATTENTION IS GOD." Think after page 2.)

          I loved the evidence you mined to put in your letter. Just awesome. Not sure if you practice law any more, but when you have or do, you must be one h*** of a lawyer. You could write a really useful WSO about how you go about gathering evidence -- or even how you gathered evidence for this contest. Or let me interview you

          And, as you've seen, I did make an effort to introduce Allen Says and the Warrior Forum assuming a lack of knowledge by the reader. Heck, a lot of current Warriors seem to not know who 'Admin' is and are often disrespectful as a result.
          ahhh...I probably have tripped over that particular road bump. Of being unintentionally disrespectful of Allen. I apologize, Allen. Just slap me around a few times and send me to my room.

          Not that I'm much more knowledgeable - I didn't even know there was a preexisting War Room ad until after I submitted my entry. Undoubtedly, Allen will add his Guarantee at the end - an important marketing tool I couldn't include without knowing it existed.

          As an aside, when I was new to the forum I went back into the archives (now the archived archives?) and read EVERY post Allen had written. Took a while, but it was well worth it.
          Brian -- I'm thrilled that you are once again an active, contributing member of the forum. You were missed. Hmmm....yah, going thru all those past posts of Allens.

          There's one "post" of his I would love to have, which is Allen's explanation for the copy he used for the "marketing to the herd" forum. Along with the copy. I sooooo miss that forum. It wasn't active, but man, there was some pure gold in there. (Hint, Allen...about that one post, anyway...or the thread?)

          Live JoyFully!

          Judy
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      • Profile picture of the author tomw
        Originally Posted by zapseo View Post

        PS -- I keep promising myself that I will enter these contests. Some great things have happened to some of the people I know who have entered -- and won -- copywriting contests. Vin Montello comes to mind.
        It also kind of helps that Vin really is a wonderful writer...



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  • Profile picture of the author Lance K
    Originally Posted by admin View Post

    The Winners Are:

    1st Place Wins: $3000 [Brian Kindsvater]
    2nd Place Wins: $2000 [John Rogers]
    3rd Place Wins: $1000 [Rod Cortez]
    Unannounced 4th Place Wins: $1000 [avenuegirl]

    Winners please PM me your paypal emails :-)

    This was VERY hard. There were quite a few that I really liked and that could have been in here. I don't like choosing things like this but I managed to do it without pawning it off on Bryan this time :-)

    CONGRATS Brian, John, Rod, & Jill!!!

    Those are some great submissions.

    And now you can say that Allen Says paid you $1k, $2k, or $3k for your copy writing skills.

    I look forward to seeing who wins the world title belt and the $5,000 bounty. GOOD LUCK TO ALL OF YOU!!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
    Nice one Allen, it was a pleasure looking at all the entries. It would be cool if you'd hold more contests like this, doing something different next time.

    Congrats to all that won. Well done.

    Thanks,
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  • Profile picture of the author Fernando Veloso
    Kudos to all the winners! Great contest Allen!!
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  • Profile picture of the author tomw
    Originally Posted by kindsvater View Post

    Thanks for the post Ray.

    It's a valuable lesson I'll be sharing with my teenage daughter later today when she gets home from school.

    This was a once in a blue moon, feather-in-the-cap, promotional opportunity for many copywriters who need this type of accolade to put food on the table.

    But an irrational fear of not winning kept you, and probably others, from even trying.

    You can't win if you don't try. You can't even get better.
    Well put Brian...and many of the "expert" copywriters that didn't bother could have done with the practice.



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    Congratulations to all the winners! :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author tjmiller
    Congrats to all of the winners! (Jill, I just knew you'd be in there!) It was fun participating and fun watching all of the entries come in. Thanks Allen for offering this contest, it gave me a chance to test my fledgling copywriting skills a bit.

    Cheers, everybody!
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  • Profile picture of the author rapidscc
    I guess now we can't use the alibi that we can't write a sales copy. These winners are ordinary warriors too. Though by looking at Brian's work I can tell that he did gave it some thought and effort..but then that's just my opinion

    All Success Warriors!

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    • Profile picture of the author kindsvater
      Omar:

      Several hours of thought and work went into the entry. More could have been spent, but I didn't know when the deadline was.

      There were a lot of entries where someone made a post essentially saying: OK, here's my 'try' - something I slapped together in the last 15 minutes. Every time I saw that lack of confidence I knew - even before reading the entry - that it was an entry I had a really good chance of bettering.

      It was a few hours of work with no guaranteed monetary return. But I suppose I'm a 'true believer.' I've bought everything Allen has created - and still periodically reread what he wrote many years ago. I firmly believe this is the best marketing forum anywhere and if people spent less time buying WSOs and more time actually applying the wealth of information that is here, like me they could essentially be retired and only work when and if they want to. Perhaps some of that came through in the marketing entry, and hopefully it will bring more valuable contributors to the WF and the War Room.
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  • Profile picture of the author Josiah
    How did I not win with this puppy?

    http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...ml#post1260023

    Hahaha congrats to the winners.... very interesting to see who comes out first with the split test!

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  • Profile picture of the author ecoverartist
    Congratulations to all the winners and the entrants!

    This was a great contest and I had fun entering my comic (I needed a break from "real" copywriting anyway!) I hope you do more contests in the future Allen!
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    • Profile picture of the author kf
      HUGE congrats to all the winners!

      Hats off to everyone who put in an entry.

      And a big thank you to Allen for the great contest and generosity.
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  • Profile picture of the author Doug
    Originally Posted by admin View Post

    The Winners Are:

    1st Place Wins: $3000 [Brian Kindsvater]
    2nd Place Wins: $2000 [John Rogers]
    3rd Place Wins: $1000 [Rod Cortez]
    Unannounced 4th Place Wins: $1000 [avenuegirl]

    Winners please PM me your paypal emails :-)
    If any of you need a Paypal email, I'm sure I could dig one up around here some place

    Seriously...Congratulations Lady and Gentlemen! You each are quite talented. Enjoy!
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  • Profile picture of the author santosm
    Congrats to the winners. Truly a well deserved win for all.

    avenuegirl - damn! Your efforts were a perfect example of true "get-up and go" spirit. Keep rockin'

    I feel that every entry was a winner here. Most entries had that "just do it" call to action. All the particpants reflected this attitude. The 'what the hell, i'm may be up against some stiff competition but hey I can do this". For those still sitting on the fence, man go back and read these entries. If they aren't enough to convince you then ....well...um...hmmm??? It's got me beat!

    The underlying lessons learned here are gems within themselves. Here's some things to think about.

    * What did Allen get out of this? Some damn good copy for a start. Many, many non WarRoom Members eyes reading the entries ( I wonder how many signs ups there were over the last few days) and how many more to come through the threads let alone the split tests.

    * a perfect well executed contest, one that you could use in your forum.

    * The content that will be picked up from these and bring more visitors into the Warrior Forum.

    * Allen didn't disclose a time frame. He could've closed it at anytime. Which he did. So it brought about a sense of urgency, that get up and go 'push' to get off your ass and get that entry in.

    * Exposure

    The list goes on an on....

    Anyway congrats once again to winners and entrants. Allen...thank you..you never cease to amaze me!


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    Congrats guys!

    And good luck for round 2
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  • Profile picture of the author Tam Chancellor
    Congrats to the winners! There were some truly awesome contest entries.
    I very, very rarely read long copy, but I read most of these!

    Thanks to Admin for the contest. It was a first class education in copywriting.
    It showed me that it doesn't take an expensive copywriter to write fantastic copy.
    Passion and knowledge of the subject goes along way.

    Joining the War Room is on my to do list, but now it has moved near the top of the list.

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  • Profile picture of the author tommygunn
    Congrats all! It was great reading through the entries. I think I picked up a few things, then again I'm not all that observant... lol.

    Originally Posted by Matt Jutras View Post

    Yo Avenue Girl, I'm really happy for you...I'm going to let you finish...but Gary Halbert had one of the best ads of all time...one of the best of all time!

    Lol... Still amazes me. Heard the local radio station DJ's do the same to him.
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