What do you think of my Squeeze page??

I think that the email form should be further at the top...not at the bottom. Some people might not want to read all the way down the page believe it or not. I also think if you can...find some kind of graphic that shows the five day course. Also maybe a border around the whole page.

I would put the optin form "above the fold" and offer a valuable freebie as well.

Roxanne,

Awesome start. Lots of good information from others here to put to work.

I have spent a good deal of time testing various squeeze pages to see which ones convert to the highest number of subscribers. Here's the formula I've found works best (averages over 60% for text and over 70% for video):

PROMISE - In your headline make a powerful promise to solve a problem of keen interest to your target audience. Don't promise to solve EVERY problem, just solve one particular problem. For MLM I would probably take recruiting: "How to Add 100 People to Your Downline in the Next 60 Days" or something similar.

PROVE - On the LEFT hand side below your promise use some sort of proof you can deliver on the promise. This can be a rotating testimonial gif or a screenshot of some proof you can deliver on the promise of the headline.

PITCH - On the RIGHT hand side below your promise have a simple opt-in form and tell them to sign up using deep red arrows.

You can see an example of how to do this here:

Internet Cash Windfalls: How to create a cash windfall on the internet in as little as 30 days

That page consistently converts 65%-70%.

Thanks everyone for the helpful feedback! I am definitly going to make some tweaks to the page.

I'll let you guys know how it works!

Looks great, nice clean and simple.

Looks good to me. Plain and simple as it should be.

Have to go agree with the others about the border..other than that, that's what I like to see! I'm not having to scroll through miles of content. I wish every pitch page could be like that lol

Its a great looking page, I happen to think that plain white backgounds are better than lots of graphics. Its easy on the eyes and holds the users attention more.

Three things I noticed instantly upon looking at your page:

- The opt-in form is too low.

- The whole page being white is not too aesthetically pleasing. Try giving the body a background colour of blue or something.

- No images at all. Put a picture of your product or yourself on there to make i tmore eye catching.

John Burton

Hi Everyone - I made most of the updates you guys suggested and I think it looks great now.

Just curious...I've had the site up two days and I have a 7.1% conversion, is that good?

Also, what is a good target conversion rate for this kind of site?

It looks good ... try swapping the headline and testing its conversion rate, and keep doing that for things on your page to raise conversions!