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Hi All!

I need a tagline for my site. After scrounging around the automatic tagline generators this morning (remind me not to get up so early next time) I am still having trouble.

I have always likened making my own main site to trying to cut my own hair. It is easier to cut someone elses.

After reading some guidelines and articles, I have some ideas but one idea was to brainstorm with others so I'm throwing it in here.

What do I/mysite do?

I find things on the web that people are looking for. I deliver digital goods. I do some video as well, but I think that will be a highlight and not the overall offering for this site. More along the lines of multi-media.

I point people in the right direction - or show them several ways they can tackle something.

I like to consider the final product of these digital solutions more as "digital entertainment"

I do work online and offline.

I'm looking for something that conveys "I can find what you are looking for, but we are fun, not corporate stuffy" and "I can help you save a lot of money" although if someone wants to spend more, I can help them do that as well.

Currently I have "digital entertainment multimedia solutions" but I'm not sure if this is expressive enough and sounds stiff? I'm open to more friendly personalized sounding tagline ideas.

Also, this site will be a general showcase site for some of my other sites and client projects.

I want to get the tagline together before ordering the logo - so if you have any better ideas for me, please drop them here.

Questions?

Just ask.

Here are some words/thoughts that may help:

mapping
searching
finding
delivering
web
video
audio
photo
digital
entertainment
digging
seek
find
assembly
solutions
direction
#bucks #tagline
  • Profile picture of the author John Burton
    How about something like 'mapping the road to your future in business'. That's just off the top of my head, it will need to be snappier.

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  • Profile picture of the author acrasial
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  • Profile picture of the author Aljiro
    * Web,Audio,Video,Photo? Name it - We can find it.

    * Find Digital Entertainment The Fun Way

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    • Profile picture of the author edmltw
      AvenueGirl Presents...


      DIGITAL SAVER


      Savvy Solutions Available Right At Your Fingertips!



      P.S.: Since I do not know the name of your website, I just gave a random title above.
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      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
        Originally Posted by edmltw View Post

        AvenueGirl Presents...


        DIGITAL SAVER


        Savvy Solutions Available Right At Your Fingertips!



        P.S.: Since I do not know the name of your website, I just gave a random title above.
        Ha, this will be going on avenuegirl.com - which just got a new template and is not filled in at this time but working on it today. I had more personal blogging on this before, but realized I can save all that for the free wordpress blog that shares the same name.

        Logo may be along the lines of a street sign or map kind of thing.
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        • Profile picture of the author edmltw
          Alright then... Here goes...

          AvenueGirl.com Presents...

          New Global Solutions

          - ONE STOP SITE -

          "You Will Never Have To Look Anywhere Else For Your Online Worries..."


          Come on.. I need that 10 bucks.. LOL~! :p


          Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

          Ha, this will be going on avenuegirl.com - which just got a new template and is not filled in at this time but working on it today. I had more personal blogging on this before, but realized I can save all that for the free wordpress blog that shares the same name.

          Logo may be along the lines of a street sign or map kind of thing.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
          Originally Posted by John Burton View Post

          'mapping the road to your future in business'
          I like mapping the road part - but some of what I do is not just for business. For instance, I am open to personalized projects as well. I've done DVD photo slideshows for a birthday and did a political essay video shoot and edit for another client. I don't want people to see the word business and disregard personalized services.

          Originally Posted by acrasial View Post

          Digital Direction Done Right.
          You're headed in the right direction with this one.

          Originally Posted by Aljiro View Post

          * Web,Audio,Video,Photo? Name it - We can find it.

          * Find Digital Entertainment The Fun Way
          Hmm, at first I was thinking this first one is too broad, but there is some potential in there.

          Originally Posted by George Wright View Post

          Digital Detectives, Digging, Discovering, Designing and Delivering your Multimedia Solutions
          Detectives is a good term, but comes across a bit too "sleuthy" - looking for something bordering more on tour guide, but that is not the right word either.

          Originally Posted by edmltw View Post

          AvenueGirl Presents...


          DIGITAL SAVER


          Savvy Solutions Available Right At Your Fingertips!



          P.S.: Since I do not know the name of your website, I just gave a random title above.
          My fear with the word "saver" is it sounds too much like a coupon flyer.

          Originally Posted by dave147 View Post

          What Ever You Need - We Can Help

          For Your Digital Solutions - Talk To Us
          Along the right lines, but looking for a little more catchy.

          These are great!

          Keep em coming.
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          • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
            On a side note, I found these "generators" for the taglines, but what I did not see was a generator where one could drop in these keywords and it would then generate for you more specifically.

            This could be a great project for a programmer. Something that has a built in thesaurus, allows you to fill in a couple of fields, and then generates some tag lines.

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            • Profile picture of the author RMC
              "We make finding fun!"

              And your business card title would be something like digital search specialist.
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              • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                Originally Posted by DogScout View Post


                "AvenueGirl Finder of lost or Missing Things!"


                "We/I can find whatever it is you are looking for... etc, etc, etc,"

                (I remember that line from F-Troop, "Ugh, Me, AvenueGirl, Finder of lost things" LOL!)
                LOL, sounds like I'll find your missing sock on the web. :p I'm good, but not that good.

                Originally Posted by edmltw View Post

                Alright then... Here goes...

                AvenueGirl.com Presents...

                New Global Solutions

                - ONE STOP SITE -

                "You Will Never Have To Look Anywhere Else For Your Online Worries..."


                Come on.. I need that 10 bucks.. LOL~! :p
                "Global" may be a tad too big for me. But keep trying.

                Originally Posted by Sumit Menon View Post

                If We Can't Find It, It Can't Be Found
                Now there's a challenge for me!

                If anyone is interested, there is a good page here on some tips to creating tag lines:

                Business Name & Tag Line Generator

                Amazing how much can go into just a few words. It seems tougher than creating a whole sales page.

                Originally Posted by GoGetta View Post

                How about:

                "Sick of Searching - Learn To FIND with AvenueGirl"

                "AvenueGirl - The Real Digital Treasure Hunter!"

                "Audio? Video? Digital? - Your Search - We Find, ALWAYS!

                "SUCCESSFULLY Searching For Digital Things Since 2009!"

                HTH
                It all helps! #2 and #4 - I like the term "digital things" and "hunter" is one I hadn't considered.

                Originally Posted by RMC View Post

                "We make finding fun!"

                And your business card title would be something like digital search specialist.
                "digital search specialist" has a nice ring to it.
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                • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                  Originally Posted by Adam Carn View Post

                  Get Your Digitainment

                  Digitainment Delivery

                  Digital Entertainment Delivered

                  Get Digital

                  Digital Girl
                  Adam! You just got me a little excited there.

                  Results 1 - 10 of about 16,500 for digitainment

                  This looks like the name of a real company. Hmm. may have some trouble with it.

                  Originally Posted by Matt M View Post

                  Get out of the alley and onto the avenue.
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                  • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
                    Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

                    This looks like the name of a real company. Hmm. may have some trouble with it.
                    Oops ok ignore digitainment.

                    How about...

                    Delivering Digital Dreams

                    Dreams Delivered Digitally

                    Delivering Digital Deals

                    Deals Delivered Digitally

                    Delivery Done Digitally

                    Digital Delivery Driver (lol)

                    I'll try thinking of more.

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                    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                      Originally Posted by Adam Carn View Post


                      Digital Delivery Driver (lol)



                      Adam
                      lol, that is funny.
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    Looking For/Need Something?

    "AvenueGirl Finder of lost or Missing Things!"


    "We/I can find whatever it is you are looking for... etc, etc, etc,"

    (I remember that line from F-Troop, "Ugh, Me, AvenueGirl, Finder of lost things" LOL!)
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    How about:

    "Sick of Searching - Learn To FIND with AvenueGirl"

    OR:

    "AvenueGirl - The Real Digital Treasure Hunter!"

    OR Even:

    "Audio? Video? Digital? - Your Search - We Find, ALWAYS!"

    And 1 more for LUCK:

    "SUCCESSFULLY Searching For Digital Things Since 2009!"

    HTH

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    Get Your Digitainment

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    Get Digital

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    Get out of the alley and onto the avenue.
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    You're not old enough to remember F-Troop

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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Originally Posted by Matt M View Post

      You're not old enough to remember F-Troop
      Well, I do remember F-Troop! It may have been re-runs.

      I don't remember any lines specifically, but remember watching them and the bald guy (who was the bad guy) and I can still clearly hear the laugh tracks. And the handsom guy with the hair - did he die in a hotel room or something?

      Waltons, Beverly Hillbillys, HeeHaw, Little House on the Prarie, and disney on sunday nights - Wild Kingdom! LOL

      70's were great.
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    We find your entertainment so that you don't need to.


    (Or something along those lines. In other words, the benefit is right there in the tag line somehow and it isn't ambiguous.)
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    Avenue Girl - We'll Find The Right Path The QUICK Way!

    or..

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    The latter was just for fun...! (Sorry)
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      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
        Originally Posted by edmltw View Post

        AvenueGirl.com - A Venue for Lost & Found, Digitally.
        Ohhh, can you do something with "digitally delicious?"
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        • Profile picture of the author tomw
          Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

          Ohhh, can you do something with "digitally delicious?"
          Great thought. What about..?


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            Originally Posted by tomw View Post

            Great thought. What about..?


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            Tom
            I think for the effort, and that snazzy tagline..and also the fact i think Tom looks like the UK version of Prince...

            Does he have the prize??
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            • Profile picture of the author tomw
              Originally Posted by Jay Sullivan View Post

              ...Tom looks like the UK version of Prince...
              Haha! Funniest I've heard in a while since being called Freddy Mercury by Andy "Jake Blues" Jenkins.

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              • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
                Originally Posted by tomw View Post

                Haha! Funniest I've heard in a while since being called Freddy Mercury by Andy "Jake Blues" Jenkins.

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                I don't think you look like either but you do look sharp Good pic.

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          • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
            Originally Posted by tomw View Post

            Great thought. What about..?


            Avenue Girl
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            Tom
            Getting so close. I'm concerned about 2 words being too short. If I just saw for instance my name and a listing and all it said was "avenuegirl digitally delicious" or visa versa this could conjure up a direction I may not want to be seen in.

            It is good to go with the repeating letters thing, and wondering if maybe 7 words might work -

            __________ _____________, ______________ _____________, and digitally delicious (or deliciously digital)

            So, the other ones don't have to be "d's" but need to match in their sets. See where I'm going?
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            • Profile picture of the author tomw
              Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

              ...It is good to go with the repeating letters thing, and wondering if maybe 7 words might work...
              That's not a tag line, that's a headline!



              I prefer the "digitainment diva" one above, too. Short and succinct.

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              • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                Originally Posted by tomw View Post

                That's not a tag line, that's a headline!



                Tom
                You have me looking up more on the difference between tagline, slogans, etc. :p

                It can be 5 words too, and the "and" could be a "always" or something else to bind things together.

                From what I'm reading, Tagline - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia I need to "create a memorable phrase that will sum up the tone and premise of a brand or product"

                I'm having a problem with just using 2 words, but I'm open to others opinions on this based on what was posted above.

                Can someone show me some 2 word taglines they like?

                What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)
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                • Profile picture of the author Tom B
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                  Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

                  You have me looking up more on the difference between tagline, slogans, etc. :p

                  It can be 5 words too, and the "and" could be a "always" or something else to bind things together.

                  From what I'm reading, Tagline - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia I need to "create a memorable phrase that will sum up the tone and premise of a brand or product"

                  I'm having a problem with just using 2 words, but I'm open to others opinions on this based on what was posted above.

                  Can someone show me some 2 word taglines they like?

                  What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)

                  What about a play on what Tom wrote.

                  D I V A L I C I O U S

                  Be proud of your diva'ness.
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                  • Profile picture of the author Sumit Menon
                    Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap View Post

                    What about a play on what Tom wrote.

                    D I V A L I C I O U S

                    Be proud of your diva'ness.
                    What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls. :rolleyes:
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                      Originally Posted by Sumit Menon View Post

                      What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls. :rolleyes:
                      I thought Jill was in the WWE.
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                      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                        Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap View Post

                        I thought Jill was in the WWE.
                        LOL, I just googled wwe girls and got a glimpse.

                        No, thats not me.
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                      • Profile picture of the author Ken Leatherman
                        Hey Jill,

                        You may want to give some serious thought to using the 2 word tag as it will be simple and easily remembered by those who see it. Always remember KISS.

                        Keep It Simple Stupid.

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                    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                      Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap View Post

                      lol

                      No that isn't correct, it is just the age I look like.

                      I am actually 77 years old. I think that date was set when they transfered data over to this new forum.

                      You are NOT 77. If you are please send me a detailed description of what you are doing every day and have done for the last 77 years and I will send you all my money now.
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                    • Profile picture of the author tomw
                      Originally Posted by Sumit Menon View Post

                      What does a Diva mean? When I think Diva, I can only picture Hot WWE girls. :rolleyes:
                      A diva (English pronunciation:*/ˈdiːvə/, Italian:*[ˈdiːva]) is a celebrated female singer. The term is used to describe a woman of outstanding talent in the world of opera, and by extension in theatre, cinema and popular music.

                      [and latterly, in many other fields]

                      The word entered the English language in the late 19th century. It is derived from the Italian noun diva, a female deity. The plural of the word in English is "divas"; in Italian, dive [ˈdiːve].

                      The basic sense of the term is "goddess."

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                      • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                        Originally Posted by Jay Sullivan View Post


                        AvenueGirl - We'll Solve DEMS Problems De Easy Way!
                        LOL, I just went back through these.


                        Ok, Tom, send me a PM with your paypal so I can send you 10 bucks cause you are definitely going to need a drink after all that.

                        I'm toying with these 4:

                        deliciously digital

                        delicious digital delivered

                        delicious digitainment delivered

                        delivering delicious digitainment


                        and leaning toward the two words on the reinforcement from the old geezer.

                        Thanks everybody! And Thanks Tom!
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                        • Profile picture of the author tomw
                          Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

                          LOL, I just went back through these.


                          Ok, Tom, send me a PM with your paypal so I can send you 10 bucks cause you are definitely going to need a drink after all that.
                          Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

                          However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

                          Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

                          Cheers.



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                          • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                            Originally Posted by tomw View Post

                            Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

                            However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

                            Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

                            Cheers.



                            Tom
                            Enjoy! Ok then Adam, I'll send you a pm.
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                          • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
                            Originally Posted by tomw View Post

                            Thanks Jill, that's very kind of you.

                            However, if you scan back through this thread, you'll see that all I really did was rub a bit of polish onto Adam's thoughts. So I'd be delighted if you give the prize money to him - plus he threw out a welcome compliment in my direction!

                            Also, as it's now after 6.00pm here in the UK, I already have a (very) long Gin and Tonic and a Montecristo No.1 on the go.

                            Cheers.



                            Tom
                            Thanks Tom but I was playing for fun, you deserve the tenner.

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                • Profile picture of the author Sumit Menon
                  Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

                  You have me looking up more on the difference between tagline, slogans, etc. :p

                  It can be 5 words too, and the "and" could be a "always" or something else to bind things together.

                  From what I'm reading, Tagline - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia I need to "create a memorable phrase that will sum up the tone and premise of a brand or product"

                  I'm having a problem with just using 2 words, but I'm open to others opinions on this based on what was posted above.

                  Can someone show me some 2 word taglines they like?

                  What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)
                  Have you read "The Irresistible Offer - Mark Joyner". It has a swipe of good slogans. You get it for free when you sign up on Simpleology website.
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                  • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
                    Originally Posted by Sumit Menon View Post

                    Have you read "The Irresistible Offer - Mark Joyner". It has a swipe of good slogans. You get it for free when you sign up on Simpleology website.
                    Ha, I have purchased like 5 of the simpleology books and courses.

                    But slogan and tagline are 2 different things.
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                • Profile picture of the author tomw
                  Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

                  What you have Tom is great - I'm just not sure it can be summed up in only 2 words (which would be ideal)
                  Ah...the dreaded Wikipedia.



                  You quoted my quip.

                  Trust me (and twenty award winning years in the advertising industry) the shorter, more succinct and apposite the tagline the better. It is generally the result of refinement and at each stage we try to render words redundant.

                  Maybe (all of) what you're looking for cannot be contained in two words...so I'll try harder.



                  digging for, developing and delivering delicious digitainment direct

                  digging for and delivering delicious digitainment direct
                  developing and delivering delicious digitainment direct

                  digging for and delivering delicious digitainment
                  developing and delivering delicious digitainment
                  delicious digitainment developed and delivered

                  delivering delicious digitainment direct
                  developing delicious digitainment direct
                  delivering delicious digital direct
                  developing delicious digital direct

                  delivering delicious digitainment
                  developing delicious digitainment
                  digitainment delivered deliciously
                  deliciously delivered digitainment
                  deliciously developed digitainment
                  digitainment deliciously developed
                  digitainment developed deliciously
                  digitainment deliciously delivered

                  delicious digital delivered
                  delicious digitainment delivered
                  developing delicious digital
                  delivering delicious digital

                  delicious digitainment
                  deliciously digital

                  (digitainment is a generic sector term. Just because a company has named themselves as such does not preclude your use of the term)

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  • Profile picture of the author Jay Sullivan
    AvenueGirl - We Got The Solution To Everything!

    AvenueGirl - We'll Solve DEMS Problems De Easy Way!

    AvenueGirl - The Solution To Your Problem Is Here!

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    I give up...
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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Originally Posted by Jay Sullivan View Post


      I give up...
      you had me at "For Times When You're Up Sh**s Creek Without A Paddle!"
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    looks good!!
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  • Profile picture of the author TheGodfather
    Got Directional Multimedia ?

    As a cheap rip-off on the "got milk?" slogan XD

    (include the smiley face)
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    Multimedia Marvel, Entertainment Entrepeneur & Digitally Divine
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  • Profile picture of the author tomw
    [Aside]

    While we're on the subject of lookalikes...

    Am I the only person who looks at Eben Pagan and thinks...

    "ONE...ha ha haaaah!

    TWO...ha ha haaaah!

    THREEEEE!

    THREE magic upsells!"

    I think he's great by the way...

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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Tom, your pic does look a lot like an actors head shot. Do any acting on the side?


      Ok, I have to be honest to let you know that I'm not hot on the word Diva. it is associated with primadonna which is associated with:

      "Legendarily, these "prima donnas" (prime donne in Italian) were often regarded as egotistical, unreasonable and irritable, with a rather high opinion of themselves not shared by others."


      Just a personal preference.
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      • Profile picture of the author tomw
        Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

        Tom, your pic does look a lot like an actors head shot. Do any acting on the side?
        Haha! No only acting up. In the real world, I have quite a requirement for publicity shots for lectures, seminars, agency and awards panel press releases etc.

        The shot was taken by my fiancee before she passed away in January. She was a professional photographer with considerable talent - made a 39 year old look ten years younger! I should change it really but I'm kind of attached to all of her work...still.

        Hey, no problem on the "diva" opinion. You are the client, after all.



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        • Profile picture of the author Tom B
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          Originally Posted by tomw View Post

          Haha! No only acting up. In the real world, I have quite a requirement for publicity shots for lectures, seminars, agency and awards panel press releases etc.

          The shot was taken by my fiancee before she passed away in January. She was a professional photographer with considerable talent - made a 39 year old look ten years younger! I should change it really but I'm kind of attached to all of her work...still.

          Hey, no problem on the "diva" opinion. You are the client, after all.



          Tom

          Wow, we are the same age yet I look so much younger.

          My ex wife took my shot which is why she is a ex.
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          • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
            Originally Posted by Thomas Belknap View Post

            Wow, we are the same age yet I look so much younger.

            My ex wife took my shot which is why she is a ex.
            OMG, I just looked at your published DOB - I feel like an old lady if that is correct.
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            • Profile picture of the author Tom B
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              Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

              OMG, I just looked at your published DOB - I feel like an old lady if that is correct.
              lol

              No that isn't correct, it is just the age I look like.

              I am actually 77 years old. I think that date was set when they transfered data over to this new forum.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
          Originally Posted by tomw View Post


          Hey, no problem on the "diva" opinion. You are the client, after all.



          Tom
          Am I being a prima donna about the whole thing?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Anthony
    Just a quick stab at it


    Avenuegirl.com

    The digital street to all your needs

    congratulations on the copy contest by the way.
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    'Sensational Solution Seeker'
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  • Profile picture of the author Diana Lane
    Second thoughts...

    'Sensational Solution Supplier'

    Implying that you've already got the answers might sound better than suggesting that you're going to spend all your time finding them
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  • Profile picture of the author Adam Carn
    Delivering Digital Data

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    Oops looks like Tom got the digging word before me.

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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    "Digging Your Delicious Digitalia"

    Sorry, Jill, I don't understand it either...lemme have a few beers and get back to you

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    • Profile picture of the author Jill Carpenter
      Thanks Steve!

      I got a winner already, but will email you immediately the next time.

      Going to put a note back at top of thread.

      It's an interesting thread in any case to see what others were coming up with.
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      • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
        Shucks.

        Cheers, Jill. Just make sure you email me at ~8pm Friday UK time. By midnight, you can guarantee I'll have an even more incomprehensible and unusable tagline for you!



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        Originally Posted by avenuegirl View Post

        Thanks Steve!

        I got a winner already, but will email you immediately the next time.

        Going to put a note back at top of thread.

        It's an interesting thread in any case to see what others were coming up with.
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