Hows my first Article?

14 years ago

Hey Letepete...

Your article made it on to EZA...Congratulations!!!!

I like to mix my articles up a little. By that i mean, i like to engage the reader by asking a question, point out a couple really useful points and focus upon that.

You can also, where appropriate, change the font for example to italic when asking a question, maybe even bolding a word thats important.

The fact that you have made it on to EZA gives you a base point to build from. As you write more and submit more you will find the whole process becoming natural to you, you'll begin to do more in less time, and thats when all the hard work you put in starts to pay off.

I began around March this year trying to make a living online, ive went from nothing, to writing articles, to making a substantial income through CPA. Stay focused, always look to improve, and enjoy yourself, cause life is GOOD!!

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RevenueGal

14 years ago

I think you've done a good job with the layout of your article. You offered some tips in a quick scannable format.

My suggestion is to work on your title and first paragraph a little more. You only have one chance to catch your reader's interest...

"learn guitar lessons" is pretty basic. Something like "4 Techniques to Help You Learn to Play the Guitar Quickly" is more appealing.

Your first paragraph depressed me just a bit...it lacked a positive feeling until I read the last sentence that says..."But, if you put some work into learning the basics you will be able to learn to play guitar songs in the first few days of practice." Then, I felt a little hopeful. (smile).

With that said, I offer you a big congratulations on your first article!!!

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Mo Faisal

14 years ago

Originally Posted by RevenueGal

I think you've done a good job with the layout of your article. You offered some tips in a quick scannable format.

My suggestion is to work on your title and first paragraph a little more. You only have one chance to catch your reader's interest...

"learn guitar lessons" is pretty basic. Something like "4 Techniques to Help You Learn to Play the Guitar Quickly" is more appealing.

Your first paragraph depressed me just a bit...it lacked a positive feeling until I read the last sentence that says..."But, if you put some work into learning the basics you will be able to learn to play guitar songs in the first few days of practice." Then, I felt a little hopeful. (smile).

With that said, I offer you a big congratulations on your first article!!!

i completely agree

Remember, the TITLE can make or break your article
Be specific with your title...
Try to use your main keyword once or no more than twice in your title to boost your serps

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actionplanbiz

14 years ago

Sounds Good and Interesting based off the 1st couple sentences.

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Troy_Phillips

14 years ago

Keyword in the anchor text could move you up in the serps

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CDarklock

14 years ago

I count six typos, one missing word, and a dangling participle.

Attention to detail is important. Many people won't notice or care, but the people who do are a lot less likely to click on your link.

It's not the end of the world. We all start somewhere. Just do the best you can every time, and always strive to be a little better.

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guitarpw

14 years ago

woo .. not bad

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AvidAZ

14 years ago

Not bad. If it makes it on EZA, you're pretty much good to go. They're the strictest in approving content.

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Emily Meeks

14 years ago

Definitely not bad for a first. However, it does need fine-tuning.

One tip I'd suggest is to think of the articles you like to read. Study what content they provide as well as the author's writing style. Take notes if you feel the need. Remember, no first draft is ever perfect, so be sure to walk away for a bit, then come back and edit with a fresh mind. Good luck!

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AceHazel

14 years ago

Not bad at all. Congratulations for making it to Ezine. Keep up the good work.

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