Follow up to my - "I feel like quitting" thread

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I created this post a few weeks ago http://www.warriorforum.com/main-int...e-my-site.html

Since then i have taken the advice given and put it to use by changing my sites design and added the pop up opt in.

Can i get some opinions of how my site now looks and what further things i could do to beat my competition.

My site: How To Seduce Women | How To Pick Up Girls On Facebook

Thank you
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
    I looks really good.

    One thought. I don't know if this will work in your niche, but it strikes me that you have lots of good articles and content for free. People will read them, never thank you, and move on. I would be tempted to test some sort of free membership, then sprinkle in some articles with a tempting title that can only be read fully by signing up.
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  • Profile picture of the author TomJonsRocks
    Your site is quite good - I love the 3 articles I read!
    One thing... Add a squeeze page. You must build a list. Collect a valid email address from everyone who visits your site before they get in. I see you already offer a 3x per week newsletter - Very cool. When they get to your opt-in page, offer a free 7 day minii course on "lightning fast seduction techniques" or something like that. Build your course based on existing articles already on your site. After that they are automatically opted-in to your newsletter.
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  • Profile picture of the author sanjid112
    It's great, man!! Awesome site with unbelievable articles on it. Surely, you got my two thumbs-up.

    I'm totally agree with Scott and TomJonsRocks. Your site full of awesome knowledge. You pick the right articles and do some good writing too, if I may say as a compliment to you.

    Maybe you can also make it, only members can view this video, or, only members can do live interview with the gurus? Some sort of that.

    -Malik
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    • Profile picture of the author ashtonuk
      Thanks guys, my main problem though is not ranking well enough in google to generate enough income
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  • Profile picture of the author Gee S
    How have you conducted your keyword research?
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  • Profile picture of the author DogScout
    Keyword research and optimize some of those great articles for search with high converting keyword phrases. (test)
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    • Profile picture of the author ashtonuk
      I have although the keywords are highly competitive, perhaps i have not created enough deep links as moost my links are directly to the homepage
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  • Profile picture of the author Christophe Young
    Hey, as someone who is in a similar niche, I'd say your site looks pretty good. Lots of great content!

    One thing though, I couldn't figure out how to close your pop up box without entering an email address upon first visit. You may want to change that.

    Feel free to add my product to your site if you like. Link and details are in my sig.
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  • Profile picture of the author acrasial
    I'm going to say the things that I don't think others have said, because you seemed upset before, but here goes:

    I like the way your website looks, but NOT entirely...

    I've been on many websites, as I am sure other warriors have. Some pop ups come up a bit after the person has been on the website, but right as the website loads, the first thing I get is the popup, NOT the website. I find that damn annoying, and it seems spammy to me. I am sure it will annoy the heck out of other people too, especially since it's the first thing they see, and the way that it pops up.

    Other websites use a pop up which only comes, once they move the mouse to click away, or move the mouse period... which means the original website has still loaded. But, it's your choice.

    I also do not like the layout of the articles. It looks as if the very first "article" was cut down out on. I guess you are wanting people to click that link, but when they do, they are brought to two pictures. This is NOT as clear as it should be.

    They should be able to EASILY access the information, if you are really wanting them to know how to pick up women in a club, it should be RIGHT THERE when they click it, or simply just right there on the website.

    If you look at the "dating guru's" (the guys who are the top in their game), such as "David Deangelo", his website may seem less flashy, but at least people are able to navigate through it and find what they are looking for EASILY. He has articles listed, the titles all in a row, and then if you click on the title, you are taken to the article, with the LINKS within.

    I suppose then that he has it set up much like a typical squidoo lens, only without all of the flashy graphics. It's fine that you are using graphics, don't get me wrong, however the set up and lay out of everything alongside these graphics is mixed and could easily confuse or annoy any of your potential customers.

    It also seems like you had a difficult time trying to fill up the page, wherein you have huge spaces between things, and then just some links. Everything is just literally thrown in there.

    Organize things better, make categories for the men to find things easily, and make things organized so that they are in order. This means if they are a beginner, there is a place for them to go perhaps, or if the man is intermediate with women, he can find more advanced techniques easy etc...

    I really don't think this website sells just yet. On the right you have categories as well, but I mean how much looking around do you want these guys to do? Already you have them playing information tag, where they click something and are lead elsewhere and elsewhere etc... and nothing is just simply there for them to reach or find out.


    But I just clicked on "attraction" and found the page to be far better than your actual home page, and more close to what I was saying, as each and every thing is laid out better. The article pages are more clear and better laid out than the actual home page, why!??!

    The videos are also good. Ok, I guess the only thing that I think could use some primming is the home page. Change that, and you will do fantastic!!
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    • Profile picture of the author ashtonuk
      Thanks for the feedback so far.

      Could someone who is able to analyze my site be able to tell me how well/or how bad my site ranks in various search engines?
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  • Profile picture of the author seanyd
    Site looks great,
    think posting on here will have already boosted your traffic
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  • Profile picture of the author sweetfranky
    Ahh, your one of these Pick up Artists. Your site looks ok but I think you need to get a base going to this kind of stuff. Are you part of the community build around this? If so, you should try and link up with other gurus and have them write articles for your site. Give them some advertising for there sites/workshops. You also might want to go into the workshop business yourself or post some videos of you picking up chicks. Good Luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author ashtonuk
      Originally Posted by sweetfranky View Post

      Ahh, your one of these Pick up Artists. Your site looks ok but I think you need to get a base going to this kind of stuff. Are you part of the community build around this? If so, you should try and link up with other gurus and have them write articles for your site. Give them some advertising for there sites/workshops. You also might want to go into the workshop business yourself or post some videos of you picking up chicks. Good Luck.
      I'm an affiliate not yet promoting my own product.

      Although i may show some of my own approaches in the future, im not sure.

      My main concern right now is ranking well and I'm not sure just how much potential my site has in regards to ranking high.
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  • Profile picture of the author Slin
    I like it, being someone who used to buy in this niche can I just say:

    Put Up A Forum!

    You can easily advertise different products then. Do you know a ton about the niche?

    If so you could have a special paid for only section where you submit special articles. You could allow other participants to put in their own articles, kinda like the war room here.
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    • Profile picture of the author ashtonuk
      Originally Posted by Slin View Post

      I like it, being someone who used to buy in this niche can I just say:

      Put Up A Forum!

      You can easily advertise different products then. Do you know a ton about the niche?

      If so you could have a special paid for only section where you submit special articles. You could allow other participants to put in their own articles, kinda like the war room here.
      Thanks for your reply.

      A forum could be a good idea but i have no idea how i'd go about marketting it and having it become busy.

      I think having users submit their own articles though is a good idea
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