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Thank You

by Jayson L
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Other then clicking the thank you button every now and then, we don't see thank you much on here. I have asked a million questions over the weekend on a thread I started and with the help of fellow warriors was able to get my site back to looking decent. The short story is this. I received 60 very keyword directed hits to my site over the past 7 days and only generated 3 leads. I put a request for help from the warriors and received a lot of constructive criticism to my site. In fact some people tore my site up. That is good news though. No use telling me it was nice. I knew is wasn't. Anyway, I changed a lot of stuff including:
1. The font size and style.
2. Added new content with a better call to action.
3. Various other small details.

The site isn't even close to what it needs to be yet, but I have generated 3 leads since last night when the changes were made. I have even sold an auto insurance policy this morning from it. The advice deffinately paid off.

So here it is:

Thank you to everyone that gives back in this forum!! You are what make this place so helpful.

Have a great day!

Jayson
  • Profile picture of the author BrianE
    You should document what you did once your changes are done and offer to others as a free report
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    • Profile picture of the author Jayson L
      I may do that as I make changes, but right now, I am extremely short on time. The number one thing I was doing wrong and see from others that create their own copy is to focus on nothing but the features of the product they are offering. Yes, the prospect needs to know how nice the product you are offering is, but they really want to know how it will benefit them. As I said, my copy isn't that great, but I tried to focus more on that and it helped a lot!
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