New and need some feedback
I have written an article in my blog and was wondering if someone would be so kind as to read it and see if it sounds alright. I would like some honest feedback.
I am trying to do some affiliate marketing and creating this review is my first attempt. I am also going to write a press release and send that out as well.
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
My email address is livelifeoneasystreet@yahoo.com if you would like reply.
Thanks so much for any help you are able to give.
Here is the link to the blog - Web Video Review
Paul
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