Review my graphics please! Thanks

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Hey Warriors...

I am again in need of your expert opinion. I just had some graphics done for an opt-in page for a report I'm giving away.

I LOVE it, but I do have one revision if I need it.

What do you think?
What would you revise?

Here's the link...

Your Main Keyword


PS - If you like the design, send Ben an PM. This is my nonsolicited plug for a job well done. Here's his Warrior's For Hire link...

http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...h-quality.html
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  • Profile picture of the author Johnny12345
    Originally Posted by derek.ifocus View Post

    What would you revise?
    That's easy. I'd revise the copy.

    Right now, the text in the header says: "The Easy Way To Profitable Keywords And Google Domination." I think the wording is a bit cumbersome and unclear.

    So, instead, I would say: "The Easy Way To Find Profitable Keywords And Dominate Google." This very simple shift in wording instantly makes the wording -- and your product's main benefit -- crystal clear.

    Regards,
    Johnny
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    • Profile picture of the author Derek_Thomas
      Originally Posted by Johnny12345 View Post

      That's easy. I'd revise the copy.

      Right now, the text in the header says: "The Easy Way To Profitable Keywords And Google Domination." I think the wording is a bit cumbersome and unclear.

      So, instead, I would say: "The Easy Way To Find Profitable Keywords And Dominate Google." This very simple shift in wording instantly makes the wording -- and your product's main benefit -- crystal clear.

      Regards,
      Johnny
      Brilliant! Thanks so much
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      • Profile picture of the author ic7
        Yikes, he does nice work. Bookmarked. Ok, maybe add a splash of red where you want people to look? Maybe the word download could be red. Lookin' good.

        Paul
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        • Profile picture of the author Derek_Thomas
          Originally Posted by ic7 View Post

          Yikes, he does nice work. Bookmarked. Ok, maybe add a splash of red where you want people to look? Maybe the word download could be red. Lookin' good.

          Paul
          Yeah, I like the idea of adding some red.

          In fact that was my biggest question...is it too much blue? Of course adding the copy will help spread that out a bit.

          One other thing...in the header, is the picture of the ebook cover to the right of the main title too redundant? Should I have the ecover replaced with something else?

          Thanks everyone
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  • Profile picture of the author bravo75
    Nice work. The only thing that bothers my a bit, is that the blue is just a tad overwhelming, as in a bit much. Hey, but who am I to criticize?
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  • Well, as a wannabe graphics guy I think it's
    pretty darn awesome! Of course, I like blue.
    It's one of the few colors I can see well.

    It might be a little much for people with normal
    color vision, though.

    As far as the headline is concerned, you won't
    know how effective it is until you send some traffic
    and measure your opt-in rate.

    Michael
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    • Profile picture of the author Derek_Thomas
      Thanks for the feedback everyone.

      My biggest question now...At the top, should I replace the ecover logo with something else? You know, does it say "The Keyword Research Shortcut" too many times in the header?

      Thanks!
      Derek
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      • Originally Posted by derek.ifocus View Post

        Thanks for the feedback everyone.

        My biggest question now...At the top, should I replace the ecover logo with something else? You know, does it say "The Keyword Research Shortcut" too many times in the header?

        Thanks!
        Derek

        I don't think it does, it looks well as it is, the only problem is when i look at it, the first thing i see is blue. There's too much blue on the whole design.
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  • Profile picture of the author LivingCovers
    With my graphic design background, I think the blue color is quite excessive
    and sh'ld be reduced a little. I think the blue background for the minisite
    sh'ldn't be a single color...but maybe two.
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  • Profile picture of the author KarlWarren
    Without wanting to sound like a perfectionist (read a****le)...

    I'd ask him (not included in the revisions, because it should have been done anyway) to make the words "keyword research" in the header clearer (as they are blurred) and also mask, or cut out the stock photo of the man with the magnifying glass properly - as there are white pixels surrounding it - and it looks rushed.

    Apart from that, the design is nice enough - and some of the concerns about the overwhelming blue, will be overcome when the copy is added as there will be a lot more white space.

    Kindest regards,
    Karl.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
    KarlWarren and Johnny have good advice. Do what they say.
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  • Profile picture of the author theimdude
    The ecover in the header looks out of place. To much blue so do the sides white should do it.

    This is what I would do;

    1) Remove the ecover from the header and spread the header text to fill that gap
    2) Remove the ecover from the footer and replace it with you top fellow
    3) Center the ecover in the body and make it a bit bigger then follow with text after that
    4) Make the signup button a bit more classy and add some color
    5) Remove the blue from the sides and replace with white
    6) There is a problem in the graphics below your header (a white line)
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