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HELP GUYS! Website will not convert!!

by dan110989
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Hey guys,

My name is Dan, I am new to IM and have built an affiliate online dating website. The problem that I am having is that it will not convert a sale. Could you guys check it out and let me know how I can improve it. I have a feeling that I have picked a bad niche. Any suggestions, would be really appreciated. I am looking to make money through IM , if it is through this website or other areas. I am currently going through the 30 day challenge, and have started to learn alot.

I can't put any links in here to my website cause I have to put down atleast 15 posts first. so ill try to direct you guys to my website another way. its mensonlineguide dot come
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
    How much traffic are you sending to online dating book | dating book | internet dating book ?
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  • Profile picture of the author PPV Guru
    Originally Posted by dan110989 View Post

    Hey guys,

    My name is Dan, I am new to IM and have built an affiliate online dating website. The problem that I am having is that it will not convert a sale. Could you guys check it out and let me know how I can improve it. I have a feeling that I have picked a bad niche. Any suggestions, would be really appreciated. I am looking to make money through IM , if it is through this website or other areas. I am currently going through the 30 day challenge, and have started to learn alot.

    I can't put any links in here to my website cause I have to put down atleast 15 posts first. so ill try to direct you guys to my website another way. its mensonlineguide dot come
    Hi Dan.

    I just went to your site...there are quite a few things wrong with your site, most of them centering around your copy images. You can start by not making every single word bolded. This makes it really hard to read.

    Most people will look at this and then hit the back button because dark lettering on a consistent and constant usage level is heavy on the eyes.

    But, there is a list of things that needs to be changed. You might want to think about hiring a great design page guy. I know some of the best (no, i don't do copy design). If you need a guy to this for you for relatively cheap, then PM me.
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    • Profile picture of the author dan110989
      Thank you, I take away a lot of the bolding. and I will also let you know if in the future i decide to hire a web designer.
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      • Profile picture of the author dan110989
        it is being approved by click bank to receive payments because I had lowed the price and changed the payment plans. I forgot to up until a few days ago it was accepting credit cards. And the bonuses that i am offering are not the complete books , they are like samples of the books which have my affiliate links, spread out in them by the creators of the books.
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  • Profile picture of the author dan110989
    I have about 17 affiliates sending traffic, its varies a lot. I have had the website up for about 3 months, and over that time it prob had gotten a few hundred hits. and nothing yet. I dono if im targeting the wrong key words
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  • Profile picture of the author troy23
    I don't think any of the suggestions will make much, if any difference to your sales. Nobody makes much from these one page Clickbank products (there are laughable claims out there) and Google is cracking down on them now. There's nothing really wrong with your photos or the page in general. It's just that these kind of sales pages are all over the internet and people have finally wised up.

    You would be better creating a proper website with a blog on this niche. Add daily articles to it and create an opt in box to capture leads. That way you can provide value to your audience.
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  • Profile picture of the author Paul Hancox
    Hi Daniel

    I didn't have time to read the copy in every detail, but my overall impression was that it felt somewhat impersonal. I didn't really get a feeling of YOU and YOUR STORY behind the sales pitch.

    Also, I think you need to explain your offer a bit more carefully. When I clicked the order button, it gave a "Today's Payment" and "Future Payment" and wondered whether it was recurring billing. I think you need to explain more carefully what that pricing structure is all about.

    Just a few thoughts that stood out to me.
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