How Do Sites like This Get a Gravity of 28?

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Hey everyone.

I found an hour free to research a new market and I found this cold sore treatment site it has a gravity of 28 ish but then I checked the sales page and the whole page looks awful, the site design, layout the only thing thats OK is the copywrite but even that isn't amazing and its quite expensive.

How I Permanently and Safely Cured My Cold Sores For Life - Get rid of your cold sores or herpes simplex type 1 with a natural treatment for cold sore removal

Any ideas?

P.S Sorry if this is anyone's site perhaps you will get some good feedback
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  • Profile picture of the author Okane
    I guess, if you have cold sores and are desperate to find a working solution, then the design of a website will be the last thing you take into account before placing the order...


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    • Profile picture of the author ExRat
      Hi Willyboy104,

      If that's the worst you've seen, you need to dig a bt deeper into the CB marketplace. Some of them are 4 browsers wide!

      I took a look at the one in your sig, which is pretty much the same but has excellent, modern style graphics.

      But I was bemused by the bit in the bottom right corner -

      But IT safe
      Tested Daily
      Purchase Guaranteed
      It's not clickable, so what does it mean? What does 'Buy IT safe' mean? What does 'purchase guaranteed' mean?

      I saw this line in the PS -

      You don't have to live another day with pain, discomfort or depression get rid of you're migraine headaches,[snip]You also receive you're free bonuses at no extra cost
      What's with the awful grammar and spelling?

      I'm not being picky, just trying to make a point. It's not ALL about modern rendered graphics.
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    • Profile picture of the author JackPowers
      Originally Posted by ProductCreator View Post

      Yep, as another example that I know Alexa is familiar with from over at DP forum, this page does very, very well yet does not look professional at all:

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      It looks nice and simple. I remember the David D'Angelo looking similar.

      Don't think it looks bad at all.
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    • Profile picture of the author Avdo
      Originally Posted by Alexa Smith View Post

      These things are very subjective, evidently - I don't think it's so bad at all, Will. I've seen a lot worse than that!
      Agree..I saw much worse then this..anyway it must have been very good converting product for some affiliates, and gravity grows that way
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  • Profile picture of the author ocon9316
    Yeah I agree with what the others have said....I've seen A LOT worse and it is also the nature of the product. Cold sores/herpes are one of those things that people are desperate for answers on and it could even be that they think because the sales page isn't too hyped up or professionally done that the product will be the cure/the answer they have been looking for instead of a scam.

    This is why I always test other products within the same niche. I've come across products with horrendous sales copy and ugly pages which I thought wouldn't ever sell and they sometimes turn out to convert much better than the more professional looking sites. You never can tell!
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  • Profile picture of the author willyboy104
    Thanks everyone for the comments.

    I agree its not the worst I have seen by far but I was bemused as to how it had a gravity of 28 without having a nicely laid out page, I know its not everything and perhaps I was looking at it from a IM perspective instead of a customer perspective.

    Thanks for everyones feedback though, has made me open my eyes a lot more to the fact that when searching for products, creating products you cant and shouldnt just focus on design/graphics and perhaps it shouldnt always be all nice and shiny.

    I know of other examples where they are set like this and do well, its rather strange but it works.

    > Ex rat, agreed and yeah there are definitely some mistakes/issues with my own sales copy I hope you don't think I was trying to show or say that mine was perfect.

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  • Profile picture of the author KristiDaniels
    It looks fine to me.

    Maybe you are just too conditioned to believe the standard "warrior" design actually converts well. It rarely does.

    Unfortunately things like spelling errors often increase conversions. I don't understand that either. But why are you writing a sales page? Is it to please your English teacher? Or to sell stuff?

    For an experiment, I had a bunch of self-proclaimed "copywriters" critique two pages once. These weren't the copywriters who I actually respect (John Carlton, Michel Fortin, Clayton Makepeace, Brian Keith Voiles). These were the copywriters who hang out giving critiques in the copywriting forum here on the Warrior forum.

    I gave them two pages. One they tore apart and decided that it could never convert a thing. It was a stupid "catalog site" and lacked "any meaningful copywriting" and the design really sucked. The other they praised and found only a couple of problems.

    The one they hated is the highest converting site on the entire Internet. The one they praised was completely made up using all of the stereotypes "taught" in the copywriting forum. It was tested to convert at 0.08%. That isn't 8%. That is 8 hundredths of one percent.

    The highest converting site on the Internet was converting at 29% at the time. That was the one they hated and said would never be successful. That one that pulls in hundreds of millions per year.
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  • Profile picture of the author yourreviewer
    Great point. I have always wondered about this salespage in particular. At the end of the day, it boils down to your niche prospects. I know hype and graphics doesn't sell well for my niche, they want someone who can empathize and talk to them like a friend than a marketer.
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