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What do you guys think about the copywriting on this site??

by nevillealston
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The site that I am talkin about is Natural Penis Enlargement Exercises | Award Winning PenisAdvantage.com

I'm curious, is the copywriting on this site really strong??

Any thoughts, ideas or comments would be seriously appreciated!

Thanks

Neville
#copywriting #guys #site
  • Profile picture of the author mariochase
    I thought it was a little bit all over the place. The prehead was kind of weird.

    Take out the part where you have to say the whole name of the site. 1-4 INCHES USING THIS SIMPLE TECHNIQUES.... it would be way better.

    Probably a little bit over hyped. The first subhead is about selling the product... make a story out of the product.
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