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Opt-In Landing Page Review ( Thanks for your input )

by rawservices
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Hey Everyone,

Please have a look at my opt-in page Im going to start driving PPC traffic to for subscriptions:

http://www.backpainmethod.com

The opt-in box DOES NOT work yet. Please review the copy and layout.

Thank you everyone!

-Ryan
#input #landing #optin #page #review
  • Profile picture of the author Wide
    A bit different design but I like it.
    One thing is sure, the opt-in box is very visible
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  • Profile picture of the author dkj125
    Good Job. I Like it. It is Short and to the point. There is no confusion about the call to action. As soon as the visitor views the page they understand immediately what you want them to do...and that's what you want. You supply a good bit of information but not too much where the visitor may get bored of reading and just leave. My only criticism would be because of the sheer size of the opt in boxes and the short read of the content I personally would have only displayed one box. Anyway...Great job. Keep it up!!
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    Haha We all know that size matters right ;-)

    But I will definently try to shrink it a little, it looks smaller on my screen (iMac) ;-)

    Thanks for input guys,

    -Ryan
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    • Profile picture of the author butters
      I don't like your header .

      It doesn't seem powerful enough, here is another example, split test them if you want.

      "Free report reveals the #1 technique to relieving back pain in 3 minuets."

      Thats just my opinion.
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      • Profile picture of the author rawservices
        @jacer: I designed the graphics

        @butters: Thanks for the suggestion butters, I definitely will split test.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jacer
    Looks like a solid landing page. Who designed the graphics? They are great! I would probably highlight the "3 minutes per day" with red text. I would also use some arrows. Put one on either side of the opt in box, pointing towards it. Using them has increased my opt ins.
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  • Profile picture of the author TimAtkinson
    The first opt in is messed up, I just checked it, not sure you know this. First impression I get is that it looks a little messy. I like opt ins above the fold -upper right and then one below the fold if necessary--Also not a big fan of the scroll down squeeze page but as long as you have a call to action above the fold it shouldn't hurt other than that good graphics buddy
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    • Profile picture of the author rawservices
      Originally Posted by TimAtkinson View Post

      The first opt in is messed up, I just checked it, not sure you know this. First impression I get is that it looks a little messy. I like opt ins above the fold -upper right and then one below the fold if necessary--Also not a big fan of the scroll down squeeze page but as long as you have a call to action above the fold it shouldn't hurt other than that good graphics buddy
      Workin on site right now, implementing suggestions I hadn't thought of
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  • Profile picture of the author rawservices
    Any other suggestions?
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