It was REALLY CLOSE! But thanks to your feedback, I have chosen to go with a text-only logo. I still really like the idea of the 3 silhouettes showing a fat man transitioning into a fit man, so I will probably use that elsewhere on the website. Perhaps as a banner or supplementary graphic.
Many of you who liked the text-only version said that the idea was good, but the font needed to be changed. As you'll see by clicking on the link below, it's been changed. I won't burden the Warrior forum with another round of revisions. This will be the last one. I'd be most grateful if you can tell me if you think this logo looks good, needs some more tweaking or if I need to go back to the drawing board with my designer (hopefully not, as that's not in the budget right now)!
Although the website is geared towards overweight and obese men, it's possible that wives, girlfriends, sisters, mothers, etc, may also look at this website on behalf of the men in their lives.
Also, let me know what you think of using the digit "2" instead of the word "to" in Fat to Fit Man (or Fat 2 Fit Man). Here's a link to the revised logo:
Peter Douglas RAW Logo Concept Refined
Feel free to comment annonymously on my blog or leave a comment here. I appreciate any and all feedback. Again, this will be the last round of comments - whatever comes about this time is what will be used.