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Pre Launch - Feedback Required

by darrenw
8 replies
Hi All,

I'm about to launch my first major product on 21st Oct 08

I'd like some feed back / comments please before it goes live

Please PLEASE PLEASE don't try and purchase.

Your thoughts are welcome

Link here

http:/www.globalvideosecrets.com/livesite

This will link will be disabled soon so your help is appreciated
#feedback #launch #pre #required
  • Profile picture of the author Clare Moser
    Looks pretty good. You got me interested!

    It's got all the winning elements.

    Good luck.
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    • Profile picture of the author KenJ
      Hi Darren

      The sales page is very good.

      It follows a standard pre launch path and works well.

      I can only say well done and wish you success with the project.

      Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author Scott Ames
    Very nice page. Well done. I find it slightly ironic however that there are no videos on the page.
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    • Profile picture of the author Gerry Humphrey
      Darren,

      Nice Site!

      Just a few comments....

      1. First paragraph - seems to be missing commas, not sure =)
      What if I had standing over your shoulders a video marketing expert that had a...

      What if I had, standing over your shoulders, a video marketing expert that had a...

      2. Second paragraph - typos
      Well I Got sick and tied of the...

      Well I got sick and tired of the..

      3. Navigation - bottom links
      If you go to any links at the bottom of the page, none of the pages have navigation back to the main page. Yes, you can close the page as they are popped up, but I kinda expected a "home" link, as well as the top and bottom banner graphics to link back to the site.

      4. First Testimonial - Two links
      The two links in this opens in the same window, taking the visitor away from your site, as opposed to opening a new window.

      5. Captain Dave's Testimonial - links
      Same issue with Dave's testimonial

      6. Video 6 - typo
      No 1 In Goggle With Your Own Submission Dynamite

      No 1 In Google With Your Own Submission Dynamite



      Good Luck with the impending launch!!!!

      I am getting ready to launch my new site soon too.
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      Gerry Humphrey
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  • Profile picture of the author GarrieWilson
    OK. I'm going to be blunt so dont get offended.

    1. Site looks cheap. Get a better header if you want to use one.

    2. Why is everything bolded? Makes it hard on the eyes.

    3. Why center everything at the top?

    4. Video Optin Graphics isnt worth $97. So if you are lying about that, it makes the product seem less credible. Its also not a good bonus as its been around a while and costs as little as - free.

    I'd rework the entire layout and also not make it so wide.

    Good luck.

    Garrie
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