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Please Critique NEW My Optin Page

by Ernie Lo
10 replies
Deleted...had enough

I'm taking your suggestions into consideration..
#critique #optin #page
  • Profile picture of the author AndrewStark
    Personally I think the graphic header dominates the page.

    I've found that with squeezepages simple graphics, or even just a white background and black border work best. That way the code for your opt-in box won't stand out like a sore thumb - at the moment it's screaming out as if you're desperate.
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  • Profile picture of the author Norma Holt
    Originally Posted by Ernie Lonardo View Post

    I've taken the advice of the warriors from my last request and have no changed the design and added a much shorter and punchier video.

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    Oh no Ernie. This is too psychedelic. You don't need to blind people even if you are giving them something. Stripes are out, colors are wrong and heading is too far down the page for several second after opening. I didn't get to read the text as the thing is too bright for my eyes.

    You can do much better. Have you heard about kiss, you know 'keep it simple'.
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    • Profile picture of the author graphicsgenie
      Did you just modify your trippy traffic page,

      Needs a rethink for this site bud

      Thanks

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      • Profile picture of the author Ernie Lo
        Hey mate

        No it isn't a modified version of TT, it's a completely original design, but similar in "nature"


        Originally Posted by graphicsgenie View Post

        Did you just modify your trippy traffic page,

        Needs a rethink for this site bud

        Thanks

        Darren
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        • Profile picture of the author Greg Cooksley
          Hey Ernie,

          That's your style to a t.....

          It pays to be different and to invent your own brand....It will
          be interesting to see how the conversions go on this one...

          How's it going with the Powerball?

          The colour scheme is a little rad....maybe tone it down a bit....

          Regards

          Greg
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          • Profile picture of the author Ernie Lo
            Hey Greg

            I have redone the page again now, I actually like it better, its more simple looking, so thanks everyone for their feedback.

            and about the powerball Greg? I LOVE IT! My friends wont leave it alone either he he...I definitely have felt that it has helped my pain tremendously. Thanks so much for the recommendation...never has exercise been so fun and addicting!



            Originally Posted by Greg Cooksley View Post

            Hey Ernie,

            That's your style to a t.....

            It pays to be different and to invent your own brand....It will
            be interesting to see how the conversions go on this one...

            How's it going with the Powerball?

            The colour scheme is a little rad....maybe tone it down a bit....

            Regards

            Greg
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Clayson
    I would have liked to hear some words on the audio. What will GAB do for me Why should I use it? How easy is it to install?
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  • Profile picture of the author Ernie Lo
    LOL what do you people have against imaginative designs...this is my style and the way I do things....it's not changing sorry. (must be the web designer in me)

    and I have found in my own studies it can outperform traditional designs in certain situations.

    Thanks Mark. The bullet points explain everything GB does, the video was short on purpose, just to allow people to visualize how it works, without boring them and forcing them to watch for too long.
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    • Profile picture of the author snakez0r
      Originally Posted by Ernie Lonardo View Post

      LOL what do you people have against imaginative designs...this is my style and the way I do things....it's not changing sorry. (must be the web designer in me)

      and I have found in my own studies it can outperform traditional designs in certain situations.

      Thanks Mark. The bullet points explain everything GB does, the video was short on purpose, just to allow people to visualize how it works, without boring them and forcing them to watch for too long.
      Sorry man.. but the web designer in you is BAD

      And the video editor is... umm... yeahhh... :-P

      My advice would be make a simpler video without the dramatic music, maybe just some chilled out house in the background. Making the words fly out all different ways is just another way to make the video look unprofessional in my opinion. I usually think of people who are trying to compensate for lack of real video editing skills when I see them. You could make the video shorter and more to the point by changing things like the sliding text at the end or the duration of the bullet points showing up. Keep the little intro though, I think you did a decent job there. It shows people exactly what this product does and that's perfect.

      Here's what I would do to the design:

      Keep the colours, whatever that's your choice. You seem to be pretty keen on them.

      Make the text a point or two smaller.

      Make the video show up before the opt-in.

      Ok I can't help it. The colours are too much man. Cut them back a bit. Maybe fade out the sides, they're gettin a little crazy.

      Awesome idea though. I like what you're doing and I can see the potential this gives you. It has a lot of Black Hat potential too, if that's your thing.
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  • Profile picture of the author NewbiesDiary
    Now I'm a MASSIVE purple fan (my hair is often pink & purple, as you may see from the pic) - but that's waaaayyy too much for me - I clicked off before the header loaded, sorry 'bout that.
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