Subject: Your yet to read emails = 100 + this one
I want to propose a JV
Can you refer me to one of your manager who manages JV for you? To do a
proper due-diligence on my proposal.
I know you don't have 30 mts. Do you have the time to do this a justice
Ignore this email & forget a US$1 mil bonus coming to you within next 1
month on top of your normal commissions
Myers, stop wasting your time on chicken-feeds
The subject line was clever. The intro was at least an attempt to respect the recipient's time. The rest? Not so good...
How would you have changed this to make it more effective?