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Need critism..

by haniez
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Hi....

I'm new here....there are members that suggest me to design mini site...Here is my first design...It seem not so nice....

I appreciate any criticism and opinion....
#critism
  • Profile picture of the author Tsnyder
    Originally Posted by haniez View Post

    Hi....

    I'm new here....there are members that suggest me to design mini site...Here is my first design...It seem not so nice....

    I appreciate any criticism and opinion....
    I don't find it very appealing.

    Tsnyder
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    • Profile picture of the author haniez
      Mm...it looks too plain right?nothing interesting....maybe I need to use many color...

      Thanks Tsnyder
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  • Profile picture of the author redguru
    First designs always look plain. Heck, my 10th design sometimes looks plain.

    It's like playing the guitar, the more you do it, the better you get at it.

    Keep practicing in Malaysia!
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    • Profile picture of the author haniez
      Thanks redguru I will keep practicing....
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  • Profile picture of the author Easy Cash
    What's it for?

    The images of the clocks make it look "traditional" and "authentic".

    Are you selling something like this?
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    • Profile picture of the author haniez
      Originally Posted by Easy Cash View Post

      What's it for?

      The images of the clocks make it look "traditional" and "authentic".

      Are you selling something like this?
      For ebook cover....I use clock to show instant template....

      I'm not selling anything..just need opinion about the design....thanks Easy Cash
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      • Profile picture of the author Mad Dawg
        I'd say its just very plain looking.

        Even though the clock is good to emphasize your point about it being fast, it's very traditional. When people see design they want in your face, eye catching, graphics that will suck a reader in.

        Think fox news style. I want your site to be something that will hook me and grab my attention so I know you will deliver the same quality for me.
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        • Profile picture of the author haniez
          Originally Posted by Mad Dawg View Post

          I'd say its just very plain looking.

          Even though the clock is good to emphasize your point about it being fast, it's very traditional. When people see design they want in your face, eye catching, graphics that will suck a reader in.

          Think fox news style. I want your site to be something that will hook me and grab my attention so I know you will deliver the same quality for me.
          Thank you so much

          I will think for the new idea...thanks Mad Dawg
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          • Profile picture of the author haniez
            This is my second design....is it better than first design??

            Look plain??
            Should I use a lot of color??
            Too many blank space??
            Change title font?

            Help me please....
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  • Profile picture of the author haniez
    Long time not posted here....here is my latest design...
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  • Profile picture of the author eknefelt
    Looks alright, but it's a bit boring.
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    • Profile picture of the author haniez
      Originally Posted by eknefelt View Post

      Looks alright, but it's a bit boring.
      Thanks for the comment...maybe I should insert some picture.....

      What do you think?
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  • Profile picture of the author artwebster
    Hi, haniez,

    Don't sweat the small stuff.

    Your mini-site design could be absolute and utter trash but hell, if the CONTENT is good, what's the problem?

    Open a parcel and the chances are the wrapping doesn't even get looked (unless you have a cat or a dog).
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    Some old school smarts would help - and here's to Rob Toth for his help. Bloody good stuff, even the freebies!

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  • Profile picture of the author Ross Dalangin
    Incorrect spelling and over optimized that is why the text could not read much. It's plain and don't have eye-popping effect as it expressed. I like the second one but not the presentation. The title and sub-title must display and not blend.
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    • Profile picture of the author haniez
      Originally Posted by Ross Dalangin View Post

      Incorrect spelling and over optimized that is why the text could not read much. It's plain and don't have eye-popping effect as it expressed. I like the second one but not the presentation. The title and sub-title must display and not blend.
      Thanks for the comment
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      • Profile picture of the author PeteNY
        You misspelled "Template". You had "Templete".

        Not bad designs though. I like them. As someone else said, the content is what's important. Although, if you're selling eCover graphics, it pays to make your site graphics the best you can.
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