
First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced
I'm trying to write sales page to sell a clients book - this page is at Magic Tools For Life
I just need some experienced sales page writers to critique it and help me out - this is my first one and thus there will be many errors. I tried to base the layout on some clickbank products of a similar nature.
Thanks,
Matt
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