Really Need Advice and Website Critique of Fellow Warriors! (Please...First SalesPage)

Hello Warriors,
First off I want to thank you for taking interest with helping critique and advice on my landing page.

Up to now I've been promoting products and the classic internet marketing learning more and more but this is the first time I actually created my own product!

Now on to this new stage I'm kinda of weak at this... ok who am I kidding I'm very bad at creating sales Page.

I tried to add it as much information as I could but now it looks too unprofessional with the 5 headers however I want the users to be able to see this immediately upon entering the site.

I'm not very good with sales page and this is my first sales page as I mentioned. I'd appreciate any advice or feedback of what I'm doing right and what I can improve.

Honestly I've been afraid of sending people to my sales page instead I use my WSO page for all my promotion because I was afraid it would hurt conversions because of it's improper presentation which obviously means I'm doing something wrong!

HELP lol

Thanks in Advance and I look forward to the advice of fellow more experienced warriors and kind hearted warriors. Thanks for taking the couple minutes to read this.

Regards,
Benjamin

Almost forgot here is the link:
http://www.ultimateprofitactionguide.com
http://www.ultimateprofitactionguide...etspecial.html

Two different versions. I'm still working on it please tell me which works best.
Thanks