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13 years ago

Looks good and solid; however, where is the big [BUY] button, because all I see is an email sign up. Remember the more steps you have, the more people you lose, and less money you make in this game. People want to know how much it costs and it they do not see a price, they will imagine it is very expensive.

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n3on

13 years ago

But I think he is offering the the ebook for free via opt-in. Right?

Originally Posted by seobro

Looks good and solid; however, where is the big [BUY] button, because all I see is an email sign up. Remember the more steps you have, the more people you lose, and less money you make in this game. People want to know how much it costs and it they do not see a price, they will imagine it is very expensive.

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CJ.Online

13 years ago

It's an awesome squeeze page but If I were you, I would highlight what the Ebook actually offers as opposed to highlighting the name of the Ebook.

Highlight or change the font color on words where you explain what the Ebook offers that makes it special

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vishalduggal

13 years ago

Originally Posted by CJ.Online

It's an awesome squeeze page but If I were you, I would highlight what the Ebook actually offers as opposed to highlighting the name of the Ebook.

Highlight or change the font color on words where you explain what the Ebook offers that makes it special

Thanks for your info.

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John Pawlett

13 years ago

Why would you have a 'buy' button on a squeeze page if you are list building?

John

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JohnMcCabe 13 years ago

On the whole, it looks pretty good.

Here's an idea for when you start testing ("borrowed" from the Rodale people)...

Try turning the bullets into questions with the page number of the answers in parentheses, like this:

PLR Flipped - Discover The Real Reasons Why You Should Consider Creating Your Own PLR Content

becomes

Do You Know The Real Reasons Why You Should Consider Creating Your Own PLR Content? (page 27)
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cashcow

13 years ago

Here's an idea for when you start testing ("borrowed" from the Rodale people)...

Good idea - those darn Rodale people get me every time especially with the page numbers!

Oh - and it should be a question that they aren't already sure of the answer, so nothing that they could simply answer "yes" or "no" to.
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Joksu

13 years ago

I don't know if it just me but when I go to that page, the first email form is already filled with an email address that I pressume is yours?

Other than that it's pretty nice squeeze page.

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Starjump

13 years ago

hey man,

first of all you shouldn't listen to any of us and instead trust the good old Analytics

Secondly in my opinion your squeeze page looks good and i'm guesing that with decent traffic it would convert at around 30% (just a guess tho)

Alright few things that I would do is:

1) Get rid of the tick box "Yes Vishal..."
2) Change the font size, colour and the actual font of the "first name" and "email address" because it doesnt stand out.
3) ... test test test

sorry, writing this after few beers. take care mate

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vishalduggal

13 years ago

Thanks to all of you for giving me so nice advice,Just made some changes to the page now.

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jamjar919

13 years ago

You may need a terms and conditions page and a privacy policy.

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Epic Stephen

13 years ago

It is ok for me but i would change the background , all is to white in my opinion, but the rest is ok, you are doing good

Good Luck

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vishalduggal 13 years ago

Originally Posted by zoomx

It is ok for me but i would change the background , all is to white in my opinion, but the rest is ok, you are doing good

Good Luck

ZoomX

If I change the background The page will load late.
And that's the Biggest Mistake of an squeeze page.
But Thanx for your info.
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- xiaophil 13 years ago
  
  At 1024 x 768 the optin box is below the fold.
  
  There's still a ton of users on this resolution, as well as all the new mobile tablets etc.
  
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KatyaSenina

13 years ago

It looks simple and neat... Though I would make the headline easier. I had to read it twice before it clicked what you were trying to say. It doesn't flow smoothly... Maybe shorten it a little?

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slowrider 13 years ago

I don't know why, but something about the dotted lines around your boxes doesn't appeal to me. Maybe it's just trivial though. Otherwise, you've gotten some good advice already.
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- BeauJustin 13 years ago
  
  Economize unnecessary wording. For instance, the following:
  
  Warning - The following information may help you actually start - USING - all the PLR content you have collecting "Digital Dust" on your Hard Drive . . .
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  Becomes:
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  Warning - This information will help you USE PLR content collecting "Digital Dust" on your Hard Drive . . .
  
  When writing, especially for marketing, give your sentences more
  clarity by removing unnecessary modifiers. I would also split test
  this, which has already been suggested, by rewriting the headline
  a few different ways. You might try phrasing the above headline
  as a question/answer headline.
  
  Other than that, I think your design is clean, and flows very well.
  I wouldn't worry much about the fold, as a well written headline
  will direct the user to the opt in box just fine.
  
  All in all, nicely done.
  
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  KatyaSenina 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by BeauJustin
  
  Warning - This information will help you USE PLR content collecting "Digital Dust" on your Hard Drive . . .
  
  Now this one is much better!
  
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vishalduggal

13 years ago

Thanks for all of yours info my friends.I just don't think about them before.
Thanks so much.
can anybody tell me what is the conversion rate I will get from it?

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BeauJustin

13 years ago

Originally Posted by vishalduggal

Thanks for all of yours info my friends.I just don't think about them before.
Thanks so much.
can anybody tell me what is the conversion rate I will get from it?

I wouldn't even begin to speculate what your conversion will be.
The only way to know is to test it. This is one of those things
that can paralyze a good effort.

Just do it man! Even if your conversions are low at first, you
can always test different options, to see what works better
That's the only way to know for sure. Don't worry about getting
it perfect out of the gate. It takes practice.

Like I said above, your design is good, and it guides visitors to
the proper decision making locations. That just leaves your copy.

Test different variations early and often. If you don't want the
hassle of loading a split test script, then just have multiple variations ready. Test a hundred or so visitors on one variation.

Then test the second variation with the next 100 or so.

If you load a script it will simply alternate each variations to
every other visitor.

Good luck!!

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Searchedterms

13 years ago

"If you load a script it will simply alternate each variations to
every other visitor."
BeauJustin

Can you tell me what script would you add to rotate the pages?just curious to know

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BeauJustin

13 years ago

I used Nanacast to manage my split tests, but if you go to Wordpress.org
and click Extend > Plugins. Do a search for "split test" (without quotes)
and you'll pull back a lot of results.

This is also a great place to start with your A/B testing.
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Searchedterms

13 years ago

Thanks Justin ,this is helpful.

Originally Posted by BeauJustin

I wouldn't even begin to speculate what your conversion will be.
The only way to know is to test it. This is one of those things
that can paralyze a good effort.

Just do it man! Even if your conversions are low at first, you
can always test different options, to see what works better
That's the only way to know for sure. Don't worry about getting
it perfect out of the gate. It takes practice.

Like I said above, your design is good, and it guides visitors to
the proper decision making locations. That just leaves your copy.

Test different variations early and often. If you don't want the
hassle of loading a split test script, then just have multiple variations ready. Test a hundred or so visitors on one variation.

Then test the second variation with the next 100 or so.

If you load a script it will simply alternate each variations to
every other visitor.

Good luck!!

Originally Posted by BeauJustin

I used Nanacast to manage my split tests, but if you go to Wordpress.org
and click Extend > Plugins. Do a search for "split test" (without quotes)
and you'll pull back a lot of results.

This is also a great place to start with your A/B testing.
Quick start guide - Website Optimizer Help

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v2marketer

13 years ago

When putting up a squeeze page. There are basically 5 rules that need to be followed.

1. The only reason for that page is to squeeze the readers email address out of them. Do not give any distractions. There must be no other links on the page to click away with (lose the icontact links)

2. Try to get your whole squeeze page onto 1 page, so no scrolling is necessary.

3. Move the opt in box so that it displays above the fold.

4 Your headline must be compelling. Something that makes the reader want to read further, and want what you are offering.

5. The form needs to be clean. By this I mean get rid of the second opt in box and the required field sentence.