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It takes about twenty pages of narrative to give people a true appreciation of the issue. However, I'll try to give you the quick cliff notes.

Our currency is very unique in the current world. Most of the world's currencies are only in use in their own countries. Ours has five current uses:

1) Use within our own country.

2) Use (due to a changeable agreement with Saudi Arabia) as the currency that oil is bought and sold in.

3) Use as a reserve currency. This is where a country intentionally holds dollars in their vaults to back their currency. This is similar to holding gold to back a currency, as dollars are seen as keeping their value.

4) Dollarization. This is either the intentional or black market replacement of a country's currency with another, more stable currency in a time of cirsis. It is called dollarization because that is the replacement currency that is most commonly used.

5) Many of the world's investments and assets are priced in dollars. This is mainly a function of the sale of American assets as a result of our consuming more than we produce. Those extra dollars have to go somewhere. Our stocks, bonds, businesses, real estate, and many other assets all have a heavy foreign ownership. In addition, dollars are transacted across countries as a secondary valid currency. The Euro is now doing this some, but nowhere near to the extent that ours does.

Every one of these uses have a very large pool of dollars associated with them. If confidence were to be lost in any one of them, a dumping of dollars could occur suddenly.

Lots of information left out here, but fast forward to today.

1) The four international uses for the dollar have created an extra, external demand for the dollar. What this means is that the dollars that we have spent on products haven't always come back as purchases of our products. (trade deficit)

2) Some of our trading partners, like China, have been able to intentionally devalue their currencies against ours to create a trading advantage. We can't do much about it either, due to the fact that the dollar is used in 80% of the world's transactions. If we devalue against one, we devalue against all.

3) The external demand for dollars has allowed our government to overspend without the expected impact to our economy. (inflation) Instead, much of this has gone out into the world.

4) 1999, Congress repeals the Galss-Steagall Act, a post-depression law which was intended to keep banks from getting into risky speculation, which was one of the factors that led to banking collapses during the depression. This law was repealed to allow for the merger of Citi and the Travelers Group.

5) Without Glass-Steagall, our banks have been very busy speculating. The world's banks, investment houses, and hedge funds have made over $605 Trillion in interconnecting bets between each other (OTC derivatives) and the number continues to grow. Many of these agreements are so speculative that several countries have had to amend their gambling laws to allow for them. This is exactly the same kind of speculation that heralded the Great Depression, only we now have the entire world doing it with computers. (This is what's eating Europe right now, although their goernments don't want to admit it.)

6) Because of the depressive effects of our money not coming back to us combined with other countries buying our capital with our own money, several things have happened. Our businesses have moved overseas, our citizens have had to take on debt to keep up their standard of living, and our government has had to repeatedly "stimulate" our economy with spending.

7) Our government and economy is now showing cracks towards breaking. Our Fed has our interest pegged at a red-line ZIRP (Zero Rate Interest Policy), older ways to stimulate the economy have completely lost their effectiveness, and financial crises have become increasing as we are faced with a having to repeatedly shock the economy with stimulants, resulting in surges and crashes that are coming at ever decreasing intervals.

8) Our government is now at the red-line for financing. There are now indications that the government is making zero interest rate loans through the Fed, which is not audited, to banks, which use them to then buy government bonds. In other words, the government is beginning to finance itself. This is a terminal stage indicator of a government that is financially collapsing.

So, we're mortgaged to the hilt, and the world is flush with our dollars and assets. The recent trillions of dollars that our government has spent has only paused the current credit implosion in progress. This was the "recovery" part of the double-dip they keep talking about, and it was an illusion created by a desperate flurry of overspending. Meanwhile we have over $100 trillion dollars of foreign owned cash and assets just waiting for a run for the exits.

I keep looking for a flaw, but everything points to a complete crash and reset of our currency.

My actual report, when you include the crisis report, the free solution report, the glossary, and the references, weighs in at 112 pages, so I've obviously left out a great deal here. But I hope that this at least comes close to answering your question.