You REALLY need to have someone edit your English before sending it out!! MOST readers will not take you seriously with such poor English usage. You may think readers may ignore horrible English because you are only 15 (if that's how old you really are), but MOST people will only laugh at your writing. (Do yourself a favor --- NEVER, EVER use a semi-colon again! It is extremely rare they are ever used -- and you ALWAYS use them improperly.)
Here's another FREE edit -- I would normally charge for:
Welcome to Edition Number 3 of the Newsletter. Today I've got some great ideas for you, so please.... make sure you read this entire newsletter. As usual, I like to pack a lot of valuable material you can use into one package.
First, we'll be going through some of the tips from my new course, List Cash Machine. Then we'll talk about a hosting company that I highly recommend. I'll also give you an update on what's up with my school work "interfering" with my internet business. I appreciate that many of you replied to my message to check-up on me.
Here's this weeks newsletter...