Am I on the right path? Site review

Thank you JimmyB

Cool-thanks warriormaiden

mikkosant, I really appreciate you taking the time. All good points, Thank you.

All the advice aside, the only thing that matters is conversion. Before going live and/or expecting affiliates, it has been recommended to me that a CB vendor should run a long enough Adwords or other PPC campaign to have statistical data on conversion. Not only do affiliates not want to pay for a PPC campaign that does not convert, they don't want to waste time driving traffic that does not convert.
It could be, that every piece of advice has no, or negative effect on conversions, and until you test them, you can not possibly KNOW. (Although there are some good guesses and things to A/B test).

Thanks scrofford, notes taken.

Thank you Waken, All good points. I have been trying to come up with a fill for the right column. About the author and testimonials would work great.
I will work on the header size.
Thanks again.

Thank You InternetSuccess001 for your comments.

I do realize that Write Right is not grammatically correct. It is a play on words. A clever one I might ad.:rolleyes:

I truly appreciate your comments. As for our English Guide, it has been reviewed and edited by the "Grammar Police". No excuse for the errors on my site , my bad. Too many frantic re-writes without having someone else to review it. Next time I will learn to cross my I's and dot my T's better.
Judd

Thank for your comments Listbuilding,
I have already begun the change. I will test out a few different colors.

Not necessarily. Despite the fact that I avoid them in many cases, I will promote if the opt in follow up msg. has my affiliate id embeded into it of which some vendors do. Not sure what software or script that they are using, but some are good vendors..

CDarklock, Thanks. I have had many people tell me 'YOU MUST HAVE OPT-IN!!!"
I think it looks better without.
Thank you for your comment.
Judd

TK, All valid points
A.) For now we removed the newsletter
B.) Sorry, I don't know what a "USP" means.
C.) You Got It. I can't talk her into a video. it was hard enough to let me put her picture on.
D.) Good Point. Question is-How do you make Grammar and Punctuation Fun?
E.) We have tried to make it as fun and enjoyable as possible- but it is still Grammar
Thank you for your response.
Judd

D'ho, What is the correct Link? I went to "Create Hop Link" and put that in. Doesn't the hop link to insert give the right info?

I've just seen this thread for the first time. I gather that you've already made some changes in reponse to posts above?

It's good.

It's also a product for which there's a great need, and I hope it's very successful indeed.

My three very slight concerns are:-

(i) At $37, the affiliate's 50% commission, net of Clickbank costs, comes to only $16.61. I think this may make it a little difficult to attract professional affiliates. To include affiliates with a $20 e.p.s. cut-off, for example, you'd need to make the commission 61% (60% would be only $19.94);

(ii) I know that prices ending in "7" are fashionable, and that everyone copies everyone else and imagines that that's because "they must work well". In reality, the split-testing evidence I've seen in this range (not a plethora of it, I admit) has all shown higher sales numbers at $39 than at $37;

(iii) I think, given the nature of the product, that the split infinitive ("to dramatically improve") in the copy is a little unfortunate and might be edited. I understand that this is far less unacceptable grammar in the US than in any other part of the English-speaking world (and that the product's potential customers almost certainly won't even be aware of it!) ... but still ... even if it's not a clear-cut grammatical error, it's certainly "sub-optimal style", I think? And of course there's no reason to assume that the product will appeal only to the US market where people have been used to split infinitives ever since the days of "to boldly go where no man has been before".

I wish you well with this product!