Writing reality check - Product creation question
I'm creating my own product (it actually does have to do waxing, I'm by no means a noob to jump the gun and start teaching others how to make money before I've made money) as well as working on starting a PLR website and I would love a writing reality check.
Here's a clip from one of the most viewed articles on my very neglected skin care website:
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The Dangers of Waxing
There's no question about it, getting waxed can be very hazardous to your health. Waxing leaves small, open wounds on your skin which leaves your protective skin open and ready for easy infection of any number of dangerous diseases and viruses. Sometimes you will even note that a follicle is bleeding but even if you don't see this tale tell sign, be assured that you do have wounds created by the waxing process. You can be left venerable to infections such as staph, MSRA, Hepatitis, Herpes or even worse.
The first line of protection is gloves. Your esthetician should wear gloves every time, every treatment, without fail. This protects her but also protects you. This has caused quite a stir these days in the spa world and the recommendation from professionals high in the spa world and OSHA themselves is to glove every time for every treatment. Please demand this from your esthetician each time. Even if you watch her wash her hands, there are still places for bacteria to remain, such as her fingernails. You don't know if she has something as innocuous as a paper cut you can't see that could potentially expose you to a disease that may not just be dangerous, but could be deadly.
Many spas claim that the wax is heated and therefore this will kill any germs. This couldn't be further from the truth. Wax is heated to a temperature close to body temperature or it would cause you serious burns. This creates an environment that's ripe for bacteria. All it takes to contaminate the wax is for the esthetician to wax one client with a bacterial infection, virus or fungus and then for her to dip that stick back in the pot. The wax pot then becomes a breeding ground for whatever the previous client had.
If your esthetician double dips, a term for the practice of using a stick to apply the wax to a client and then re-dipping that stick rather than reaching for a clean stick, leave and report the salon or spa to your local health department. You are exposing yourself to the blood of countless strangers and then that is being spread onto your skin. Even worse, there is a high possibility that the applications will slightly overlap so that wax is being spread onto tiny open wounds. There is NO such thing as a wax that will not harbor bacteria. It does not exist. This is one of the single most dangerous practices. Imagine that the wax being used on your lip was used to do a strangers Brazilian. Double dipping is all too common and very dangerous practice, don't stand for it.
If you demand your practitioner to adhere to these practices, you should have a safe, enjoyable waxing session. While you should expect your esthetician to adhere to these, being an informed consumer will ensure that you have a safe wax, every wax as not everyone in the industry has adopted these guidelines.
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There really wasn't a keyword goal for the article, it's purely informational. Please bear that in mind. But I'm going through Tiffany Dow's PLR ATM and I wanted a writing reality check.
Also, I'm creating a product on how to do your own waxing, from making the wax to applying it. The bread and butter of the thing is product videos. Is it still worth while to create an actual DVD to send out or do fully digital? Also, should I Clickbank this from the start or sell it on my own for a bit?
Thanks for reading!
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