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Almost ready sales page - can I have honest feedback!

by doop
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Looking for some honest feedback on this product before it goes live.

First sales page in a while - I normally use videos!

Let me know the good, the bad anything you like!

I know I'm missing testimonials - anyone want to help me out? You'll get a free photo and link to your blog/site under your honest feedback.

Here's the link: SERP Keyword Tracker

Thanks!

NOTE TO ADMIN: product isn't live and there's no opt in so i hope I'm not breaking the rules
#feedback #honest #page #ready #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Steven Carl Kelly
    Just an FYI...

    I usually start critiquing a page by focusing on the subheads. When I got to THIS point:



    I stopped, because the second subhead seems to be sending the wrong answer to the question posed by the first subhead.

    That's my initial impression...
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    • Profile picture of the author doop
      Originally Posted by Steven Carl Kelly View Post

      Just an FYI...

      I usually start critiquing a page by focusing on the subheads. When I got to THIS point:



      I stopped, because the second subhead seems to be sending the wrong answer to the question posed by the first subhead.

      That's my initial impression...

      Wow just noticed how BAD that looked! Was trying to emphasise how much it WASN'T going to cost!!!

      Thanks for the pickup!
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      • Profile picture of the author Richard Van
        I think the site looks nice and clean. Looks very good. I agree with the above posts though it does look like your saying it's going to cost 120-360. Its the big red bold that does it. Other than that I rather like it. If it does what it says on the tin you should be onto something good there. The sales page seems very friendly too, not sure if it's the cartoon bits but I like it. I'd even go as far as saying I wouldn't mind buying it. Guess that makes the copy good too, in my opinion. Well found domain too.
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  • Profile picture of the author CDarklock
    What he said. Other than that, it looks and sounds pretty good.
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  • Profile picture of the author eiilers
    Great salesletter - I see you already fixed the issue that the others pointed out. I like it - product looks good too. One thing I noticed though was that you're valuing 50 PR6 backlinks at only $25... I would think those links would be worth more than that myself.
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    • Profile picture of the author doop
      Maybe I need to clear that up a little - The offer will be for "A list of 50 backlinks that you can go out and build yourself" NOT a done-it-for-you service. How much would you value them at?

      I know some of the better know backlink packets sell for $5/30 and $8/50 but they are known to go out to hundreds? thousands? of people and many become useless pretty quickly.

      Thanks for the feedback!
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  • Profile picture of the author eiilers
    Ahh, gotcha. If that's the case I think your valuation is good. Sorry about that, I misunderstood.
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  • Profile picture of the author shireen
    Looks good, clean & professional

    Normally I'll try to be as specific as possible on the headline.

    For example:

    1) replace "quickest" to "less than 30 seconds"

    2) replace "easiest" to "3 easy steps"

    Hope it helps
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