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Hey Warriors,

I just create a opt in page for a free report on traffic generation
http://www.internetmarketingcrunch.c...ic-report.html

Thoughts?

Cheers
Mukul
#feedback #opt #page
  • Profile picture of the author SeanyG
    The headline, image and header are all good. They look professional.

    The stuff underneath your analytics image need work though:

    "These are all essential qualities of a successful traffic generation. So don't be left in the dust, request your FREE REPORT today, and discover the "Secrets To Traffic Generation""

    Work on that!
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  • Profile picture of the author gottahave
    Good - straight to the point and not cluttered with un-necessary information.

    Neil
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    • Profile picture of the author Evan Kanter
      "All The Methods You Need For An Endless Stream Of Traffic Is Contained In This Free Report. See real proof of my account..."
      • is should be are

      "Once you are complete, check your email box, and enjoy the report!"
      • ????
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  • Profile picture of the author Rough Outline
    Why not make the page sheet wider and put the optin form on the right or left hand side so it's above the fold?
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  • Profile picture of the author Samuel Baker
    Heading images etc are very professional, I would re-work some of the language and grammar used, also the opt-in form looks good, maybe have it above the fold as mentioned above?

    Have you tried playing around with different layouts yet?
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  • Profile picture of the author oneplusone
    I would recommend you test at least 2 different opt in pages, if possible.

    I've often found that what looks best, doesn't always convert best.

    Testing and seeing the actual numbers is far more relevant than our opinions.
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  • Profile picture of the author Joshua Bretag
    Top Is awesome. But go check out optimizepress they make awesome landing and squeeze pages in about 5 mins that convert you can see one I just did here yesterday in 10mins at emailwebinar.com
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    • Profile picture of the author dougp
      1. Main headline and sub-headline is too wide, condense it so that when the readers come across your website their eyes wont have to scroll too long horizontally. They will be able to tune in to the headline more quickly.

      2. Im personally not a fan of your opt in box. It looks too wide for the page width, perhaps condense it by 35-60px. The name and email form are way too long, no one name and emails will be that long, so i wouldn't recommend having such horizontal text-fields. Also, its generally a good idea to put a concise overview of your privacy policy so that prospective subscribers have an idea on what you will do with their data.

      Doug
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  • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
    Thanks All for the great suggestions, I have made the changes (and will split test it)

    A few things I did
    Traffic Generation Training Course - Free Report For Free Traffic

    - I added the main #on the image
    - I got the opt in to start above the fold
    - I did make the header a H2, and sub heading a H3 tag to get it to fit (thoughts).
    - Improved the bottom
    - corrected the spelling

    Anything else please share. This is a new page (you would shake you head if you saw the one I was using before), however IM not a major focus for my income, so I did not care). Just felt like fixing it up today

    Cheers,
    Mukul
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Worner
    Personally, I found there to be way too much information for a squeeze page, I would change it to:

    Headline
    3 bullet points
    email field(No name, this will increase your opt-in rate)

    Chris
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    • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
      Originally Posted by Chris Worner View Post

      Personally, I found there to be way too much information for a squeeze page, I would change it to:

      Headline
      3 bullet points
      email field(No name, this will increase your opt-in rate)

      Chris
      So what you are suggesting to remove the image?
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      • Profile picture of the author Chris Worner
        Originally Posted by Mukul Verma View Post

        So what you are suggesting to remove the image?
        I though I made it clear in my first post? here is the format I would use for a squeeze page.

        Headline

        Bullet point 1 - benefit
        Bullet point 2 - benefit
        Bullet point 3 - benefit

        Email opt-in box

        Forget images and other fancy stuff, only thing it does is distract people and lower your opt-ins(Tested). remember KISS.

        Respectfully
        Chris
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Riffle
    I agree with Chris. Personally, the first thing I saw was the graphic. Then my eyes didn't quite know where to go. By the time I realized what I was supposed to be reading, I wasn't interested anymore. I would have clicked away.

    One thing: there's a backslash in the red bar beneath your header. It's distracting.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
    Thanks Chris and Dan, I am gonna split test it. Great advice though
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Worner
    My most effective squeeze page was a bold red headline and email opt-in box on a white background and that was it.

    Chris
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  • Profile picture of the author petelta
    Hey Mukul,

    I agree with Chris. I think you would probably see a better conversion if you drop the graphic header...and more than likely the background all together. Bump that white content part up to the top.

    Your form would be above the fold that way.

    I would also put some bullet points where that graphic is. You could maybe work the results graphic next to the optin just so you still have that killer results power.

    Honestly, I have been split testing a squeeze page that Zeus66 posted probably a month or two ago. It's dominating everything else I have out there right now by like 5%.

    I would point you to the squeeze page in my sig, but I'm split testing a couple different layouts right now, so I have no idea if it would show up for you.

    Maybe John searches his username and will point you in the right direction...*crossfingers*.

    If you can't find it, send me a PM and I will email it to you.

    Travis
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  • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
    Hey Guys,

    OK, thanks Travis for the template, here is the new page
    Free Traffic Report - Internet Marketing Secrets

    No images.

    Cheers
    Mukul

    PS - Lesson - to newbies or new at this; when someone split tested something and it works, save a lot of time and get more results by listening (then split test yourself)
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  • Profile picture of the author actionplanbiz
    change the headline font to arial or tahoma

    use the word discover rather than "learn"

    maybe replace that whole bullets column with a product image

    maybe add a down red arrow

    maybe change the border color to black ( the red border seems to camouflage your headline)
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    • Profile picture of the author petelta
      Originally Posted by actionplanbiz View Post


      maybe replace that whole bullets column with a product image

      maybe add a down red arrow
      Don't add a product image...that was one of my split tests with this page and it converted about 10% less than with the bullet points.

      There is actually a red arrow in this squeeze page Mukul. I completely forget. Let me find it and send it your way. I didn't have it in the same folder apparently.

      It actually has helped conversions a few percent compared to not with it.
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      • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
        Originally Posted by petelta View Post

        Don't add a product image...that was one of my split tests with this page and it converted about 10% less than with the bullet points.

        There is actually a red arrow in this squeeze page Mukul. I completely forget. Let me find it and send it your way. I didn't have it in the same folder apparently.

        It actually has helped conversions a few percent compared to not with it.
        Travis arrow added, thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Riffle
    Your headline is missing a word, I assume you mean, "Learn how to get..."

    The new squeeze is better than the old one.
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  • Profile picture of the author aaramire
    I may be the only one, but I don't seem to see any kind of flow. What do you want the viewer to see first? Right now it seems that your focal points are conflicting. The dashes on the outside just add to the distraction.

    For your headline it's "learn how to get over ....
    and for the sub header this is TARGETED Visitors Creating an ... not a

    hope that helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author Mukul Verma
    This page has got 33 signups for 84 visitors (I put the image on the WSO) and kept the page simple. No images (LOL)

    Cheers,
    Mukul
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  • Profile picture of the author JonAlfredsson
    I think it's okay, just look at the message "privacy with the utmost care" located at the bottom part. I think you should remove THE. I think "privacy with utmost care" will do.
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