Opt In Page Feedback

The headline, image and header are all good. They look professional.

The stuff underneath your analytics image need work though:

"These are all essential qualities of a successful traffic generation. So don't be left in the dust, request your FREE REPORT today, and discover the "Secrets To Traffic Generation""

Work on that!

Good - straight to the point and not cluttered with un-necessary information.

Neil

Why not make the page sheet wider and put the optin form on the right or left hand side so it's above the fold?

Heading images etc are very professional, I would re-work some of the language and grammar used, also the opt-in form looks good, maybe have it above the fold as mentioned above?

Have you tried playing around with different layouts yet?

I would recommend you test at least 2 different opt in pages, if possible.

I've often found that what looks best, doesn't always convert best.

Testing and seeing the actual numbers is far more relevant than our opinions.

Top Is awesome. But go check out optimizepress they make awesome landing and squeeze pages in about 5 mins that convert you can see one I just did here yesterday in 10mins at emailwebinar.com

Thanks All for the great suggestions, I have made the changes (and will split test it)

A few things I did
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- I added the main #on the image
- I got the opt in to start above the fold
- I did make the header a H2, and sub heading a H3 tag to get it to fit (thoughts).
- Improved the bottom
- corrected the spelling

Anything else please share. This is a new page (you would shake you head if you saw the one I was using before), however IM not a major focus for my income, so I did not care). Just felt like fixing it up today

Cheers,
Mukul

Personally, I found there to be way too much information for a squeeze page, I would change it to:

Headline
3 bullet points
email field(No name, this will increase your opt-in rate)

Chris

I agree with Chris. Personally, the first thing I saw was the graphic. Then my eyes didn't quite know where to go. By the time I realized what I was supposed to be reading, I wasn't interested anymore. I would have clicked away.

One thing: there's a backslash in the red bar beneath your header. It's distracting.

Thanks Chris and Dan, I am gonna split test it. Great advice though

My most effective squeeze page was a bold red headline and email opt-in box on a white background and that was it.

Chris

Hey Mukul,

I agree with Chris. I think you would probably see a better conversion if you drop the graphic header...and more than likely the background all together. Bump that white content part up to the top.

Your form would be above the fold that way.

I would also put some bullet points where that graphic is. You could maybe work the results graphic next to the optin just so you still have that killer results power.

Honestly, I have been split testing a squeeze page that Zeus66 posted probably a month or two ago. It's dominating everything else I have out there right now by like 5%.

I would point you to the squeeze page in my sig, but I'm split testing a couple different layouts right now, so I have no idea if it would show up for you.

Maybe John searches his username and will point you in the right direction...*crossfingers*.

If you can't find it, send me a PM and I will email it to you.

Travis

Hey Guys,

OK, thanks Travis for the template, here is the new page
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No images.

Cheers
Mukul

PS - Lesson - to newbies or new at this; when someone split tested something and it works, save a lot of time and get more results by listening (then split test yourself)

change the headline font to arial or tahoma

use the word discover rather than "learn"

maybe replace that whole bullets column with a product image

maybe add a down red arrow

maybe change the border color to black ( the red border seems to camouflage your headline)

Your headline is missing a word, I assume you mean, "Learn how to get..."

The new squeeze is better than the old one.

I may be the only one, but I don't seem to see any kind of flow. What do you want the viewer to see first? Right now it seems that your focal points are conflicting. The dashes on the outside just add to the distraction.

For your headline it's "learn how to get over ....
and for the sub header this is TARGETED Visitors Creating an ... not a

hope that helps!

Fixed up, thanks

This page has got 33 signups for 84 visitors (I put the image on the WSO) and kept the page simple. No images (LOL)

Cheers,
Mukul

I think it's okay, just look at the message "privacy with the utmost care" located at the bottom part. I think you should remove THE. I think "privacy with utmost care" will do.