My First Ever Report

Hi all, I'm hoping i'm posting in the right place in the forum.

I need some help and advice.

in the past I'v had no focus on what I was trying to achieve and it's only untill I sat down, wrote down what I wanted that I was able to get over my first little hurdle.

I've written my first report. i could not afford to pay anyone so just sat for days writing it myself. I have no list what so ever and am not sure about the quality of my report writing. I personally feel that it gets the message of what I want, across but would love to get some opinions from some experienced warriors.

I also designed my own capture page from scratch where the report is offered for free, for subscribers, that's how I intend on building my list. in the report there's a clickbank product directly related to the contents of my report.

Would I be right in asking people with lists to help me build my list in return for adding their product link in my report or on my thank you page? Or am i going about it in the wrong way. I'm happy to send a direct link to the report for a review for anyone who can help. PM me if you can.

thanks a lot ...... i feel a little nervous having posted this and writing my first report on my own and hesitated for so long before putting online, but I wont know untill I ask and just have a go and learn and improve hopefully.