by true900 Banned
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Hello. I have a question, about how is better to write in ebooks.

For example: is it better to say:

i made a cool looking website, and go there to find those information

OR:

1.Make website
something about that...

2.Go to blabla
go to blabla to find that...
#ebook #question
  • Profile picture of the author Vincenzo Oliva
    If I understand you correctly I would say both. You want your ebook to link back to your website and you want your website to promote your ebook. The only question is what is your goal? Make a sale from your site? Build your list?
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  • Profile picture of the author K.otic
    Does the site have any other content other than just to promote the book?
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  • Profile picture of the author true900
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    actually im asking wich form of writing is better?

    Like...i teach them something in my ebook.

    so wich form of writing is better?

    i made a cool looking website, and go there to find those information
    (saying how i did it and talking like to friends)

    OR

    1.Make website
    something about that...

    2.Go to blabla
    go to blabla to find that...
    (strict teaching)

    I hope you understand what i mean.
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    • Profile picture of the author dbarnum
      Originally Posted by true900 View Post

      actually im asking wich form of writing is better?

      Like...i teach them something in my ebook.

      so wich form of writing is better?

      i made a cool looking website, and go there to find those information
      (saying how i did it and talking like to friends)

      OR

      1.Make website
      something about that...

      2.Go to blabla
      go to blabla to find that...
      (strict teaching)

      I hope you understand what i mean.
      What works well:

      1) People want to download and go, today. For example, they want to use their cell phone or other handheld gadget to your your ebook. So make sure the ebook has what they need inside it. I.E. it's not always possible to hook up to a website for more instruction, so you won't want ot upset them and not deliver the content to them.


      2) Teach what works. #2 doesn't sound like it's proven, just instructions To Do stuff. #1 shows, not tells. It walks the talk. But convert the info into an ebook format (see my #1 above).

      Hope that helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author true900
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    Hey dbarnum, thanks for anwser.

    But i mean something like...

    Should i write like im talking with them like: "than we open up text editor and write this code"

    OR

    "1. Open your text editor. 2. Write this code?


    Thanks,
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  • Profile picture of the author cindybidar
    In my opinion, you want to stay conversational. Simply listing the steps is going to result in a lot of bored readers.

    However, your snippet (than we open up text editor and write this code) is rather condescending. Don't use the word "we." You can use "you" or "I," but "we" makes you sound like the creepy guy in Silence of the Lambs.

    I recommend you pretend you're writing an email to a friend, and not just any friend, a specific friend. If you were going to explain your methods to your friend, how would you say it?
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    • Profile picture of the author Muhammad Hassan
      Different people will like each one.

      cindybidar likes the conversational one. I like the
      second one where you are more formal and listing
      the steps.

      I am not saying I am right and that it is the better
      method. It's just the one that I prefer.

      I prefer it because for me it is easier to find the
      relevant information.

      Unfortunately, I do not know if people in general
      which people would prefer.

      If you want to satisfy both preferences then include
      both. Write in detail using a conversational form
      and then have a summary using the more formal step
      form.
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  • Profile picture of the author true900
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    Hey cindybidar thanks for anwser, but thats the problem, im really bad at writing :S
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    • Profile picture of the author cindybidar
      Originally Posted by true900 View Post

      Hey cindybidar thanks for anwser, but thats the problem, im really bad at writing :S
      Then I'd suggest writing your ebook to the best of your ability, then finding a ghostwriter whose style you like to clean it up for you. It will cost you a lot less than paying someone to write it for you from scratch, because you'll have done all the research.

      And Muhammad Hassan is correct of course. Your market may very well prefer the step-by-step style over a more conversational one. I'd take a look at other books in your niche and see how they are written.
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  • Profile picture of the author E. Brian Rose
    Originally Posted by true900 View Post

    Hello. I have a question, about how is better to write in ebooks.

    For example: is it better to say:

    i made a cool looking website, and go there to find those information

    OR:

    1.Make website
    something about that...

    2.Go to blabla
    go to blabla to find that...
    I have read this post three times and still have no clue what you are asking But, I will vote the bla bla method, just because it sounds fun.
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  • Profile picture of the author true900
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    Hey thanks for tips
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