I think I found the worst copy ever

by willoh
16 replies
This cracked me up. At least the title could have been right.

PS I have no affiliation whatsoever w this thing
#copy #found #worst
  • Profile picture of the author E. Brian Rose
    Love this line:

    "How many at once I could run in the world to me not knowing anyone."
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    • Profile picture of the author Alexa Smith
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      Originally Posted by E. Brian Rose View Post

      Love this line:

      "How many at once I could run in the world to me not knowing anyone."
      Ooh, people are quoting e.e.cummings' poetry in their copy, now? It's a whole new ball-game ...
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  • Profile picture of the author Blaz Banic
    LOL, this was funny. It looks like something a robot would scrape off the net and post automatically. Well, hope he makes some sales
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    • Profile picture of the author espradley
      Originally Posted by Blaz Banic View Post

      LOL, this was funny. It looks like something a robot would scrape off the net and post automatically. Well, hope he makes some sales

      I like the fact that I have never seen anyone space out a price...ie $ 1000 but somehow, not only did the owner of the website do this, but so did the commentors who are bragging on the system as well....
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  • Profile picture of the author Stefan Vee
    Looks like he writes his own comments as well. LOL!
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    • Profile picture of the author willoh
      here's another one by the same guy. This one takes the cake:
      "Believe me I will not lie no more reason as $ 3 per book gave me only 2 hours iam recovered in any distress beacon"
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  • Profile picture of the author Trent Brownrigg
    Wow that's hilarious. If anyone actually purchases from his link after reading that they are CRAZY!
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  • Profile picture of the author Intrepreneur
    He could litter the content with links and with enough targeted traffic could still end up with sales. It's all about the clickthroughs
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  • Profile picture of the author Dexx
    Nothing shows the credibility of an 'Earnings' screenshot like this website does...
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  • Profile picture of the author JayVance
    It looks like he paid someone who speaks Spanish to write his sales copy then he ran it through babel translator.

    Plus he is making so much money he doesn't even need to buy a real domain!
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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    Phew. Not one of mine.

    As you were...

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    • Profile picture of the author ELVISTHEPELVIS
      Originally Posted by Steven Fullman View Post

      Phew. Not one of mine.

      As you were...

      That's exactly what crept into my mind when I saw the title of the thread. Oh no, what if it's mine?!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Riz
    Lol! I needed that laugh........but at least he/she is trying (all be it wrong) which is more than many.
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  • Profile picture of the author LetsGoViral
    He is obviously using the "real person" approach to build a better connection with the reader. I mean, look how all those sales pages are always "perfect". This guy is giving us a prime example how you should incorporate simple language in your sales copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
    Well, it's not great. Clearly. BUT...

    ...he's done it. Written it, and released it.

    Which is more than most *EVER* do.

    Kudos! And I hope he takes whatever free feedback he gets from here to improve his message.

    Steve
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