Can you give me feedback on my front page content?

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Over the past couple of months I've been seeing a very high bounce rate from my front page. While I realize that my site is very "specific" to say the least, I do believe a lot of it had to do with a very poor copy...

So I've been rewriting it every few weeks trying to actually convey what I am trying to say.

From the copy perspective, my targeted action is to get visitors interested enough to actually read my articles. I believe that I provide a great value, but as many of us know, just providing great value is note enough, people have to be sold on it. Even if the stuff is free.

So anyway, what do you guys think? Did I get it right this time?

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Thank you!
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