What wrong with this fantastic website?
This is my second attempt at marketing in the weight loss niche.
So far I think I got lucky, I've made $90 dollars with a crappy squidoo lens and my FIRST ever article submission to ezine. I thought , wow this is easy! I hadn't really done anything and made 90 for it.
I'll create my own website and make even more money i thought (lists etc) How wrong!
My first website was a mess, I lost focus from the amount of information I had taken in from this website and it ended up being a website with no direction. I have plans for this site, I may even flip it.
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No problem I thought, I've learnt many lessons from the first attempt and so after a break I start up my second website.
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Now my second attempt I am proud of, I have kept my focus, I know my target audience and I have gone for the straight to the point approach.
If you guys could take a look at my second approach could you tell me what you would change and more importantly, is my writing style to boring? I'm a geek .net developer whose never really had any sales experience whatsoever.
Please help!
By the way I'm getting about 10 - 15 visits a day from people but just no sales!?
Should I stick to squidoo lenses and bum marketing? I don't want to as I dont feel there is much stability in that. I want my own IM business and would love to go full time.
Look forward to your replies
Jetset
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