critique my first Article please

by kramerican 4 replies
Picking the Right Business Opportunity

Every site I look at has "The Perfect Opportunity"
Which one is the right business opportunity and which one's are wrong for me?
Picking the right business opportunity is the biggest part of your new Business.

I remember the feeling of uncertainty of starting my own business.
I new exactly what I thought I wanted in a business.
I wanted something I could do and make lots of money with no experience
But i tried lots of business and failed. So be really careful and take the time
to research whatever business opportunity you choose.

The Product
Do not sign up for any business opportunity unless the product is sound, legit, and something you would stand behind.
The Energy Drink/Pills
Unless that you really love that industry. Not stuck with a garage full of nutritional. To really make money there more time and money involved.
Look close at what kind of business your in.
Do not ever sign up for any business opportunity where you are required to balance this or that in order to get paid. It is a proven fact that 99% of the people who sign up for these types of programs never make any money in them. In fact they usually spend more than they make..
Go with direct sales
Direct sale pay you per action and right away. There is no waiting for someone else to be in the right position.
Keep the fire hot but focused.
Stay focused on the the end result. And focus on one business and get become great at that Business. This will really pay off in the long run. That a proven system and learn it and become a master of your trade.
Work with quality mentors.
Make sure there is someone you can really learn from Don't be the blind following the blind. Really researcher this in detail.
You want a system that will ever evolve.
Is there automation current with todays technology. Make sure that the business you enter plans to be around for very long.
High ticket price if the way to go.
Low ticket and big ticket sales require the same amount of time to close. However with big ticket items you make much more money for the same amount of time, energy, and effort. Why sell a product putting $20. in your pocket when you can just as easily earn thousands of dollars with the same effort.

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  • Profile picture of the author kramerican
    Thanks to anyone that might help me become more efficiant at righting articles.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
    My first response is to please proof read your work. I could barely fumble through most of it because of run on sentences, lack of punctuation and the like. There are parts that just do not make any logical sense or connection between sentence fragments. That's my quick review.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steven Fullman
      Originally Posted by Sylvia Rolfe View Post

      My first response is to please proof read your work. I could barely fumble through most of it because of run on sentences, lack of punctuation and the like. There are parts that just do not make any logical sense or connection between sentence fragments. That's my quick review.
      Well done, but...seconded.

      Nice topic, but let down by the execution. Spelling and grammar need polishing.

      e.g. Your vs You're

      "Look close at what kind of business your in."

      Should be "...business you're in"

      Sounds pedantic, but it matters.

      There are a few more, but like I said, props for the action! Cool.

      Kind regards,
      Steve
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      Not promoting right now

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      • Profile picture of the author cashcow
        I third that.

        Actually it kind of looks like it was made with one of those tools that extracts sentences from the web and then puts them together to resemble an article. There's no flow.

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