What was he doing wrong? examination of a real site

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(Edit: Kind of long but totally worth it!)

A friend of a friend recently asked me for some advice on why his website wasn't earning him any money. He has been working on it passionately for the last year and a half and is frustrated (who hasn't been there, right?)

Right there on the phone I went to his site and instantly saw things that needed to be changed in order for him to maximize the potential of his chosen niche.

I want to go over this for a few reasons. If you have made any of these mistakes, it's not too late to make some profitable changes! That's what trying, testing, and tweaking is all about. And that's how we make money.

Here's a quick over view of his site:

His niche is emergency preparedness (food storage, financial preparedness, etc.)
He's currently getting anywhere from 60 to 80 visitors a day from SEO and backlinks.
He has a few ebooks that he's offering for free.
For monetization he has adsense, an amazon store front, and an ebook he is trying to sell.

His site is at www.familylifeboat.com if you want to follow along!

The first thing I noticed when I came to his site was that he:

1. Isn't really building a brand. He has a very small slogan within a somewhat vague picture and doesn't have a logo.

2. Wasn't building a list (no opt-in offering anything of value above the fold)

3. Had way too many forms of monetization (no direction confuses visitors) and even made the ebook he was selling kind of hard to find

I asked him kind of information he provides in his newsletter (because I saw he had a small newsletter opt in toward the middle of the homepage).

He said that he has been writing really informative articles on current trends of emergency preparedness, but that he only had a few subscribers.

I then asked him what kind of visitors he gets and he mentioned that most of his traffic comes organically from targeted keywords.

During our conversation I talked to him about the importance of building an email list of subscribers and offering them something of value, follow up with a series of equally valuable articles that presell items like his paid ebook, relative affiliate products that will help his target audience, etc.

I also mentioned that he get rid of his adsense and amazon store front. Because when it comes down to it he'd make way more money with a focused sales funnel.

I told him to learn as much as he can about copywriting (or at least hire someone who does) This is something that is VERY overlooked in the IM world. As bad as this sounds, he needs to present his website and products as a SOLUTION to all the horrible things that could happen IF an emergency happens and people aren't prepared.

And then of course get a logo and slogan that represents his brand.

I reassured him that the information he was providing is increasing in demand as the economy worsens, as global disasters are more publicized than ever, as Glenn Beck's show stays on the air (JK! staying focused now...) and that his potential information product is viable based on what is currently selling on the market (obviously not as much as the big niches, but enough)

He left feeling better and as I've seen today (I've only had the one conversation with him) he's already made some positive changes to his site and approach.

So please remember these key points when creating a site...

Pick the right niche, build targeted traffic, create compelling free front end offers to build a list, follow up with content rich emails and occasional hard sells (a good content to pitch ratio is 3 to 1), and ALWAYS try, test, and tweak!

If you have any additional suggestions, please feel free to comment...

Also, I'd be happy to check out your site and make some suggestions. Just send me a PM and I'll have a look.

Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author WillR
    Yes, I agree the site could do with some sort of header that instantly re-affirms to the visitor that they are in the right place for the information they are looking for. When I first landed on that site, I had no idea what so ever as to the theme of the blog.

    If it were my blog I would probably also make it only 2 columns, not 3. Have the content on the left, and the sidebar down the right. The content needs to be the most prominent thing on the page. If a visitor gets confused and has too many things to look at, they will just click the back button and go to another site.

    Also, as you stated, have a more prominent optin offer in the sidebar and I would also have an exit pop that offers the same free report if they are about to leave the site. Rather than just mentioning the free report above the optin form in the sidebar like he is doing now, I would get a nice looking ecover done and put it there so it draws a lot more attention to the optin offer.

    What should he offer in the report? Well hopefully he has Google Analytics installed? Go through and look at all the keywords and keyphrases people are using to get to his site. Then create a free report that covers the most popular keywords and keyphrases being used. Also use those keywords and keyphrases as the bullets showing what is in the report.

    This should help things a little.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ryan Sorensen
    WillR, thanks for the input.

    Yes, he definitely should make it only 2 columns, add a cool ebook design cover, and try and focus the viewers into some action.

    He has google analytics and should try to focus the content of his responder series to his main audience. Here you would figure out which main keywords people find his site through
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  • Profile picture of the author biosclan
    Just some quick feed back.

    He is using the default WP theme.

    Pick a theme that is more streamline and clean.

    Direct the user to do one thing first when they visit the site, OPT IN for his free report.

    Have pop up OPT IN or atleast a big fat arrow pointing to it.

    Address the "no call to action" for his reports. Never give anything free without getting a email address.

    Adsense placement isn't thought out and if he stream lines his site adsense is not needed

    Compile all of his reports into a ready ebook and sell it for 7$

    Ask him to buy you dinner and a six pack and fix his site for him :p

    Grab a template from a WSO and it should take maybe an hour or so.

    I might have some that would work for him.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ryan Sorensen
      Biosclan,

      It's true, just a change in template would do wonders for him.

      Hey never thought of that, barter work for booze!
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      • Profile picture of the author biosclan
        Originally Posted by The Exciting Life View Post

        Biosclan,

        It's true, just a change in template would do wonders for him.

        Hey never thought of that, barter work for booze!
        I'll take a can of Four Loko if you are buying :p
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    • Profile picture of the author celente
      Originally Posted by biosclan View Post

      Just some quick feed back.

      He is using the default WP theme.

      Pick a theme that is more streamline and clean.

      Direct the user to do one thing first when they visit the site, OPT IN for his free report.

      Have pop up OPT IN or atleast a big fat arrow pointing to it.

      Address the "no call to action" for his reports. Never give anything free without getting a email address.

      Adsense placement isn't thought out and if he stream lines his site adsense is not needed

      Compile all of his reports into a ready ebook and sell it for 7$

      Ask him to buy you dinner and a six pack and fix his site for him :p

      Grab a template from a WSO and it should take maybe an hour or so.

      I might have some that would work for him.
      Yes it is all about testing.

      I had a blog news site doing well. I got a news blog site template form the WSO and my readership went up, more sales and got more RSS reader.

      Just goes to show you that sometimes, testing pays off.

      Doing more of what works and less of what doest as good old johnny reese would say.

      Good luck.
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      • Profile picture of the author KevinTorrence
        This may be just a slight "aside" ... and my source is a bit weird..

        But when I watched a few episodes of "Pitchmen" (yeah, the infomercial reality show that was on the air for a while)...

        ...they always mentioned that "preparedness / safety" just doesn't sell well.

        And it makes sense when you put into context with other things.

        People don't tend to visit the hospital to make sure they're doing ok ... they for for emergencies, problems.

        Weight loss products sell awesome for people that have a problem... not really to ones trying to prevent it.

        Dog training sells well to people who's dog is acting up ... not to make sure their little angel is gonna stay an angel.

        But wait! There's more! ...

        Now saying all that ... that doesn't mean it won't work ... they did create a commercial for a small fire extinguisher spray can thing, because it wasn't intimidating, it was really easy to understand & use, and it worked awesome when demonstrated on camera.

        Anyway, I know that may not help much, but it's just something that always stuck in my mind after watching the show.
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  • Profile picture of the author AnthonyKrese
    There's a huge opportunity for networking in that niche as well (guest posting / podcasts / video / etc). That could bring in a lot of traffic for him...especially as he gets know for being "the food expert".

    Before he starts networking, he should really "clean up" the site as suggested above. Don't want to waste that traffic
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    • Profile picture of the author Sarah S
      I agree after looking at the site that there's some things that he could do to clean it up a bit.

      There's a lot of information that seems to get "lost" in the layout; there's something about so much white in the background and then almost all of the sidebar links being blue that makes it hard for the special report to stand out.

      I'm also a fan of categories so that the reader doesn't have to scroll down for such a long time to find what they're looking for. Most people become impatient, and the articles at the very bottom of the page probably don't get read as often.

      The top menu above the header also doesn't draw much attention; my eyes just drift down to the header photo and notice how the phrase "Peace of Mind Through Preparedness" is kind of hard to read. (Maybe he could change the color, or place the phrase up in the 'sky' part of the picture so it would stand out more.)

      Another thing that struck me is that nowhere on the front page do the words "Family Life Boat" actually appear. It kind of made me think- "wait, is this the right site?" and I had to check the url to make sure. I think you're right in recommending that he do more to brand his site.

      On the bright side, the information that he's providing is very detailed and informative- it looks like he's either very knowledgeable about the topic, or has definitely done his research thoroughly. This will help to build a sense of trust for his readers, which is always important.
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  • Profile picture of the author stephanf
    I found your discussion about my site in my referral logs and I've made a bunch of changes. I knew that it needed work but getting help and advice has been a challenge. This have been helpful.

    Take a look at the new FamilyLifeBoat.com. (You'll have to manualy enter it for go up to the first post not allowed to link yet)

    What do you think?

    What else can I do to make it better?
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