i want somebody to critique my writing skill. i know im not the best article writer right now,thats why im not charging $25-35 per article and im not a native english. but i do speak and write in english all of the time.
im hoping to diversify my portfolio into writing articles and i believe its something i can do if i got the right motivation. thats why im posting this thread so that warriors can critique my writing and tell me how good or bad i am.
this is a sample of one of my article
"HOW TO PUMP MASSIVE TARGETED TRAFFIC TO YOUR OPT IN BOX
Pumping massive targeted traffic to you opt - in box requires that you will have a website that your traffic will be sent to. If any business is to survive the competitive battleground of internet marketing then having a targeted massive traffic to your website is the answer.
There have been many books that have been written explaining how and where to get a targeted traffic to ailing website. Some have proffers solution with the free traffic methods while some also believe that using the two traffic generating method will be better.
In this article I will be revealing my secret methods to pumping laser targeted traffic to your website in no time.
The first step to build your email list through targeted traffic is to create a highly targeted keywords and phrase that applies to what you want to promote and to your niche. The steps include using free Google tool like the Google keyword external tool, you can as well use some others that are not free but don't cost a single penny.
Many marketers that tend to skip this first step to build their email business are quick to suffer huge losses in profits
The second step is to format your keywords to traffic generating questions. Formatting your keywords is a very good way to siphon laser targeted traffic to your website in minutes.
Using internet marketing questions is another good way to generate consistent traffic to your website which many marketers fail to use when building their online business. Strategically design question that contains your top keywords or keyword phrase can be extremely effective when it comes to driving massive traffic to websites in record time
But most importantly these keyword laden questions are also design to attract laser targeted traffic of potential buyers that are looking for the exact solution your product can provide.
The last step to mention involve maximizing the return on your website to compliment the work you did earlier. In other words you have to tie every steps I have mentioned together so that it will form a constant gushing of fresh laser targeted traffic which in turn can impact positively on your online business in minutes.
In summary pumping massive targeted traffic to your opt in box requires that you already have a website and using rich keyword questions to generate massive traffic to the website is very necessary if you want to build a massive email list with your traffic, and maximizing every returns on your website to massive cash dumping ground
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so you have read some of the articles.
if you are to pay somebody to write for you and you are given this kind of write up how much do you think this article is worth to you?
i will really appreciate a sincere critique.
thank you all