Do I write good enough for plr?

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Hello guys,
I just wrote an article to see what you guys think. It's my english good enough to write plr articles?

Have you ever wondered why the people around you always seems to be in a relationship? Are you asking yourself why it is so easy for others to have conversations with the ladies and trying to figure it out so you can do it yourself? Are you always the best friend but not the lover?

Listen. It is not your fault. Maybe you grew with only your mother around who taught you that you have to make the woman feel like she is the sweetest angel. Maybe you watched movies who told you that the geek can get the girl because that is what a girl wants. And the impulse that you have in your genes that sometimes tells you that if you talk to a woman you don't know something bad will happen.

There are three things that you have to know in order to have a successful love life.

1.You have to know that talking to women that you don't know will not get you killed. Do you understand? Women want you to talk to them. That is why they spend so much doing their make-up and shopping for clothes. They are not doing it only to be noticed.
2.You have to know how to talk to the ladies.
First of all you have to know how to naturally open a conversation with a woman. You don't necessarily have to go to bars or club to pick-up a woman. You can talk with any woman you see. For that you have to learn the art of spontaneity and humor. A woman can be opened naturally by using situational openers or humorous remarks.
If you learn to use the humor that you are naturally born with it will become easier than ever to meet women. To improve your humor you can watch comedy series like Friends, Two and half a man or House for improving you sarcasm.
When you talk with a woman always try to change subjects and talk on more story lines because a woman gets bored easily with the same subject and also when you talk on more story lines you assume familiarity,
3. You have to be clean. Altough a woman is attracted more by your personality than your looks a woman will not sleep with you if you smell like a pig and you have food on your face. Only if she is very drunk.


Here are some examples of situational humorous openers:
1. Some woman wants to buy some kind of food.
You: Don't buy that. It sucks. Better if you cook something at home for us.
2. Some woman is waiting at a table.
You:
Come in a hurry, sit down an say: Sorry I'm late. I met with a friend from college. What a great gal. Anyway how have you been?
3. On a stairway: We are both going down at the same time. What a situation...

Remember you have to make jokes that are at your level of comfort and move up.

Thanks for reading.
#good #plr #write
  • Profile picture of the author aaron_nimocks
    Didn't make it pass the 2nd sentence.

    It's my english good enough to write plr articles?
    For PLR there should be no mistakes. Either grammar or spelling.
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  • Profile picture of the author auradev
    Sorry not even close.

    You have to know that talking to women that you don’t know will not get you killed. Do you understand?

    This sentence is terrible.
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  • Profile picture of the author Erin Walsh
    Theoretically, PLR "should" have perfect grammar, but it usually doesn't (coming from a full time editor). It all depends on how much you sell the pack for.

    Coming from a full time woman, I'm still lmfao about the pick up lines.

    In fact, I joined Warrior Forum again just to read and comment on this.
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    • Profile picture of the author eslucky
      You might consider a new career choice. However, when I'm drunk I do especially go for men with smelly food on their face.
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  • Profile picture of the author CC
    Originally Posted by MagicAce View Post

    Hello guys,
    I just wrote an article to see what you guys think. It's my english good enough to write plr articles?

    Have you ever wondered why the people around you always seems to be in a relationship? Are you asking yourself why it is so easy for others to have conversations with the ladies and trying to figure it out so you can do it yourself? Are you always the best friend but not the lover?

    Listen. It is not your fault. Maybe you grew with only your mother around who taught you that you have to make the woman feel like she is the sweetest angel. Maybe you watched movies who told you that the geek can get the girl because that is what a girl wants. And the impulse that you have in your genes that sometimes tells you that if you talk to a woman you don't know something bad will happen.

    There are three things that you have to know in order to have a successful love life.

    1.You have to know that talking to women that you don't know will not get you killed. Do you understand? Women want you to talk to them. That is why they spend so much doing their make-up and shopping for clothes. They are not doing it only to be noticed.
    2.You have to know how to talk to the ladies.
    First of all you have to know how to naturally open a conversation with a woman. You don't necessarily have to go to bars or club to pick-up a woman. You can talk with any woman you see. For that you have to learn the art of spontaneity and humor. A woman can be opened naturally by using situational openers or humorous remarks.
    If you learn to use the humor that you are naturally born with it will become easier than ever to meet women. To improve your humor you can watch comedy series like Friends, Two and half a man or House for improving you sarcasm.
    When you talk with a woman always try to change subjects and talk on more story lines because a woman gets bored easily with the same subject and also when you talk on more story lines you assume familiarity,
    3. You have to be clean. Altough a woman is attracted more by your personality than your looks a woman will not sleep with you if you smell like a pig and you have food on your face. Only if she is very drunk.


    Here are some examples of situational humorous openers:
    1. Some woman wants to buy some kind of food.
    You: Don't buy that. It sucks. Better if you cook something at home for us.
    2. Some woman is waiting at a table.
    You:
    Come in a hurry, sit down an say: Sorry I'm late. I met with a friend from college. What a great gal. Anyway how have you been?
    3. On a stairway: We are both going down at the same time. What a situation...

    Remember you have to make jokes that are at your level of comfort and move up.

    Thanks for reading.

    I must say this really gave me some good giggles today..But you did not intend this to be funny did you?

    I do not think this would be good PLR .... a lot of people use PLR as is and
    I can see that a lot would have trouble using this.

    Where did you do your research for this??? No self respecting woman would ever fall for those pick up lines.

    Aside from the bad grammar and the way it is worded, one more thing to keep in mind is that it must be believable.

    I hope this helps you.

    Constance
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  • Profile picture of the author Mission0ps
    Need a bit more practice, keep going you'll get there
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  • Profile picture of the author BradCarroll
    Practice practice and -read- more articles written by native English speakers! This will give you a better idea of what sounds natural in an article.

    Also if you watch a little American tv, that should help. I normally wouldn't recommend television to anybody--but for picking up on how the language works (assuming you're marketing to the American crowd), it might be a good idea for you to watch an hour or so every day.
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    • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
      The writing is not terrible. Much of it is not written in American styl English. That might not be a bad thing, I cannot say that American syntax is any better or any worse than any other syntax, but American English is very prevalent on the internet.

      I have seen writing that matches American syntax less than your article that are for sale. I try not to buy it. Being able to sell articles written like this to people who have an American English background is probably not going to make you much money.

      I guess the answer is that yes, your writing is good enough to sell, but probably not for a lot of money. I have some background in teaching English to people as a second language and I am sure that your spoken language is excellent, your writing is pretty good, but writing for money is a lot different.
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      • Profile picture of the author MagicAce
        Hello guys,
        If I don't write good enough for plr than I assume that article marketing is not better for me either. Right?
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        • Profile picture of the author SamirSM
          Honestly, your written English is way better than most writers and bloggers I've read. But the problem is that you are way too straight forward. If you try and shorten the phrases a bit, I think you would be pretty good.

          SEO-oriented writing is child's play since your Grammar and Vocabulary are good enough.

          I'd say read some articles on popular sites like EzineArticles, eHow etc. and you are good to go!

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        • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
          Originally Posted by MagicAce View Post

          Hello guys,
          If I don't write good enough for plr than I assume that article marketing is not better for me either. Right?
          It would kind of depend on who is reading your article and what you want them to do as a result of reading your articles. if you are looking strictly for backlinks (which I know is not articel marketing, but a lot of people do it) your article as written is probably OK with a few corrections.

          Personally, I would try article marketing, it is a great way to market and get yourself known.

          If you don't already have one, I would also start a blog and write on it often.
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          • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
            Originally Posted by JMichaelZ View Post

            It would kind of depend on who is reading your article and what you want them to do as a result of reading your articles. if you are looking strictly for backlinks (which I know is not articel marketing, but a lot of people do it) your article as written is probably OK with a few corrections.

            Personally, I would try article marketing, it is a great way to market and get yourself known.

            If you don't already have one, I would also start a blog and write on it often.
            NO, NO, NO. Why in the world do people offer this advice? Even your response is filled with errors and you're advising this poor guy to just do it, if he's only seeking backlinks. That his writing is good enough. Uggh.

            It's advice like this, that is filling the internet up with CRAP articles that make no sense, are FULL of errors and add no value.

            Best wishes,
            Sylvia
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            • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
              Originally Posted by Sylvia Rolfe View Post

              NO, NO, NO. Why in the world do people offer this advice? Even your response is filled with errors and you're advising this poor guy to just do it, if he's only seeking backlinks. That his writing is good enough. Uggh.

              It's advice like this, that is filling the internet up with CRAP articles that make no sense, are FULL of errors and add no value.

              Best wishes,
              Sylvia
              Because it is not my job to police the internet. It may be the job of someone else, but it is not mine.

              After a lifetime of working with ESL students I can honestly say that in my experience orthographic regularity is one of the least valid predictors of value or intelligence. I could also say the same about sentence length, dangling participles, verb conjugation or almost any other grammatical construction.

              And because the internet is plenty big enough to handle any articles that Magic Ace writes. They may not meet your standards, but he/she is not you.

              But Magic Ace is actually a person taking action, in his/her own way, and I would be the last person to stand in his/her way toward doing something to start online.
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  • Profile picture of the author tpw
    Do I write good enough for plr?

    This would have offered more confidence:
    Do I write well enough for PLR?
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    • Profile picture of the author Truckster
      Originally Posted by tpw View Post

      This would have offered more confidence:
      Do I write well enough for PLR?
      Beat me to it!
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    • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
      Originally Posted by tpw View Post

      This would have offered more confidence:
      Do I write well enough for PLR?
      LMAO Bill. That was exactly my first thought that brought me into the thread.

      To the OP. Honestly, I would have to say no to PLR writing, as well as article marketing. That's not to say that eventually you won't be able to do it, but with your current skills (given the sample you provided) I would say no.

      Best wishes,
      Sylvia
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  • Profile picture of the author Sylvia Meier
    Chris just offered the perfect middle ground, that will allow you to write your articles, but still put out good quality in the end.

    Best wishes,
    Sylvia
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    • Profile picture of the author eslucky
      Sylvia, you are so right! I continually reject articles that are not written well. There are far too many high page rank sites with terrible English and make virtually no sense at all.
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      • Profile picture of the author alwaysready
        Sorry but i have found several mistakes , when you write an article , make sure you make no mistake no grammar no spelling errors ! don't stop trying writing , writing too much will make you learn more G.LuCk
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  • Profile picture of the author CyberSorcerer
    I'm not sure outsourcing his articles to cheap freelancers is the right answer either. More than likely, the articles he receives will end up as bad, or worse, than what he could do one his own.
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  • Profile picture of the author RevenueGal
    If you really do want to write...don't quit! Take some Grammar & English lessons. Other options are to outsource some work by hiring a proofreader or teaming up with a partner who has a better command on the English language.
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    • Profile picture of the author PLRgirl
      Hi,

      Your article is not that bad.

      It just needs a few tweaks and some editing, and you're good to go!

      There are a gazillion online courses that you could take up to brush up your English skills.

      I also agree with what another fellow warrior suggested - watch TV, preferably sitcoms and soaps so you may know what works and what doesn't; and exactly how certain phrases come to work together.

      These little trivialities matter when you're writing good web copy.

      Success to you.
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