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How is my site? What next?

by ghepburn
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Hi everyone,
Just created my first site dcd775klcordlesspowerdrill.com and wondering if a few people could express their opinion on my site? Also what should I do next to try and get traffic to my site?
Thanks,
Graham
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  • Profile picture of the author jwardz
    I don't see your site Graham, but I must admit I am new and it make be posted somewhere. I know that you will have to have 15 posts in WF before they will let you put a link in a post. I am looking forward to viewing it.
    Joan
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    • Profile picture of the author ghepburn
      Originally Posted by jwardz View Post

      I don't see your site Graham, but I must admit I am new and it make be posted somewhere. I know that you will have to have 15 posts in WF before they will let you put a link in a post. I am looking forward to viewing it.
      Joan
      Thanks Joan I realise that now
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      • Profile picture of the author Michael Shook
        You made that on the 2010 theme? Nice.

        It is possible to make it prettier but you have it up and going, and that is a huge step. Nice that you have your amazon link on a redirect.

        The only thing that I might say is that up on the upper right hand corner where the wording is :
        Find The DEWALT DCD775KL 1/2-Inch 18-Volt Cordless Compact Lithium-Ion Hammer-Drill Kit For A Great Sale Price!

        Can you make that a live link?

        Overall, I have seen way worse sites and this one lets people click the link and buy the drill, which is what they are on your site for.

        Nice job.

        I hope you sell a lot of drills.
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        • Profile picture of the author FredJones
          Your site is okay, but your call for action probably can be improved to an extent. You have too many hyperlinks that reduces the readibility to an extent - the user's reading experience will not be great with it. Also, with the features, it would be nice to include some benefits of each of the features rather than only the features. Also, since this is a review, avoid words like "our" etc - or did you actually mean that it is yours?

          Good start overall but can be improved.
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