do you like this squeeze page template

by Trieu
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I purchased so many squeeze page templates, and now deciding which is the best one I should use.

At the moment I like this one

http://auctionblueprint.com/download/index_color.html

because, its slighty different from the most of the squeeze pages I've seen

What do you actually think of it? Do you think it will convert well?

This one is my new version

http://www.auctionblueprint.com/sque...dex_color.html
#page #squeeze #template
  • Profile picture of the author onera
    The page loading is very slow and it could not load the page.
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    • Profile picture of the author Trieu
      Originally Posted by onera View Post

      The page loading is very slow and it could not load the page.

      It loads fine from my end in both firefox and IE, so I'm not sure what the problem is. Some of my customers also had similar problems loading pages when I was running my wso. It could be the host I'm using. I need to check up on it
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  • Profile picture of the author Phil Weslow
    It loaded for me. The layout is very nice. That being said, I think you should work on the copy (text) for your name squeeze page.

    I get a feeling that you already know this as the text looks like it was just thrown together for as a skeleton for the design.

    Just in case you haven't already realized it, it should be "a part" instead of "Apart". And I would suggest "Discover why Most Online Business Owners Fail at Driving Traffic to their Site".
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    • Profile picture of the author Trieu
      Originally Posted by Phil Weslow View Post

      It loaded for me. The layout is very nice. That being said, I think you should work on the copy (text) for your name squeeze page.

      I get a feeling that you already know this as the text looks like it was just thrown together for as a skeleton for the design.

      Just in case you haven't already realized it, it should be "a part" instead of "Apart". And I would suggest "Discover why Most Online Business Owners Fail at Driving Traffic to their Site".
      The text is just there as an example, as this will eventually be edited out
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Loaded lightning fast. Very sharp looking page. Good Luck!
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      You forgot the opt-in form on the page, :confused:
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  • Profile picture of the author coco28
    Its a nice template - simple and not too 'salesy' looking. Had no problems loading it in Firefox.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Hill
    Very quick loading... Looks good! Did Dylan design that one?

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    • Profile picture of the author jdmitchell
      To answer your question:

      Conversion depends mostly on the copy, not the design. Nobody would even be able to give a remote prediction unless you actually test it's conversion. If ANYONE on this forum tells you it will do good or bad based on just looking at it, they are mad crazy. You never know unless you test. Some of the most promising looking pages convert like shit. And some of the ugliest underdogs convert like champions. Pick a design you like, make sure the copy is the best you can possibly get it (Outsource if you must), and then test test test.

      The design is just fine. The copy worries me though. I am sure you haven't started on that, as you were just choosing the design right?

      That said, real quick:

      1. The headline is weak
      2. Instead of repeating the same benefit 3 times, I would put 3 separate benefits. (although "You can download this report TODAY for FREE and get all of the super-charged strategies now" actually means nothing. It is empty, and vague AND repeated 3 times.)

      The copy in general is too vague, and there are too many useless words, and phrasing that are cluttering, confusing, and detracting from the main message.

      If you want some copy tips, and ideas for this squeeze page, just pm me. I do not sell my services, just think I could help.

      Hope this helps Teo : )

      JD
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    • Profile picture of the author Trieu
      Originally Posted by Mike Hill View Post

      Very quick loading... Looks good! Did Dylan design that one?

      Mike Hill
      Yes, that template is designed by Dylan
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  • Profile picture of the author Floyd Fisher
    Don't see why it won't.

    Polish it up, split test it with what you already have, and see what works better.
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  • Hey Teo

    Loads Lighting fast, awesome sqeeze page great job

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  • Profile picture of the author jazzyjeff
    Teo,

    This is a sharp squeeze page. Maybe if you can add more benefits for the user, then it could make the report seem more valuable.

    Jeff
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  • Profile picture of the author Charann Miller
    Very nice looking squeeze page, very slick presentation overall.
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  • Profile picture of the author dsmpublishing
    very good and loaded very fast for me!
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  • Profile picture of the author globalpro
    Teo,

    Looks great. I would work with different coloring for testing, but the design is clean and very appealing. Loads fine here on IE6 and FF3.

    Thanks,

    John
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  • Profile picture of the author jinmin
    That's nice but I think it would be great if you change to plain background...
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  • Profile picture of the author Trieu
    I made a few changes to my squeeze page from the original one. Do you think this one is better?

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    • Profile picture of the author Trieu
      Originally Posted by JJ Manning View Post

      Although it looks nice, personally I think the background is a distraction.

      Just my 2 cents.

      Cheers

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      I will remove the background to see the effect
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  • Profile picture of the author Anthony Smith
    Loaded right up and looks pretty solid to me!
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