Newbie please could someone review my site

adils29

14 years ago

Hi Jess:

impressive site but aren't you using a capture page?

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Inthehoof

14 years ago

It's my first site just trying everything out. Thought I would do it about something im interested in. Thank you so much for taking the time to have a look at my site. I'm going to become an affiliate of all horse based products. I'm going to have landing pages to encourage them to buy the products. Once again thank you so much for putting the time in to review my site

i appriciate it alot
jess

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scrofford

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Inthehoof

It's my first site just trying everything out. Thought I would do it about something im interested in. Thank you so much for taking the time to have a look at my site. I'm going to become an affiliate of all horse based products. I'm going to have landing pages to encourage them to buy the products. Once again thank you so much for putting the time in to review my site

i appriciate it alot
jess

I like the site! Why don't you consider creating your own info product of some kind on some subject on the horses? Do your research and find out what people in that market want and write away. Then you could either use it to give away while building a list or outright sell. I would build a list first though. Then create an even better product to sell.

addon: you might also want to change the font color in the breeds. I click on a breed and it takes me to the page ok, but the content is really hard to read because of the color. I would change it to black.

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Michael Shook

14 years ago

Looks pretty good. Loads up kind of slow, but not terribly slow.

It is kind of hard to read with the color font you have on that background color.

I am a little unclear on what the site is for.

Overall, it look spretty professional, but not so much that it does not seem like a personal site, that is a pretty good thing.

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brandon2664 14 years ago

Switch the neon green logo to red. Turn the dark greys to lighter grays. You site navigation is solid and clean. I like the whole site it just looks a little dark.
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- Inthehoof 14 years ago
  
  Ok thanks allot ill give that a try and see how it looks thanks so much for taking a look you guys are great
  
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PatriciaS

14 years ago

I LOVE IT! Well done!

I had no idea there were so many breeds (and you really do have to change that font color, OR the background color). I am quite taken with the Gypsy Vanner. Loved the videos. You've got quite a bit of content on there, and I think it's all really well done.

I think that chalk gray color for the theme is so refined. Unless you're really crazy about the green in your banner, consider a medium-dark cantaloupe orange, which can be really stunning with this smudgy gray.

Well done. I'm sending the link to my brother who loves horses. He'll enjoy it tremendously, as I did.

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

My site is for all horse lovers and just a general place for them to chat and learn about horses. I will attempt to make money through affiliate links with horse products as they are very pricey.

Thank you so much for your help and taking the time. Im changing all the things everyone has listed.
I didnt think i would get so much excellent feedback. Thanks EVERYONE so so much i cant say in words how much its appriciated.

Jess
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- Michael Shook 14 years ago
  
  It's already much esier to read. Looks really nice now and does not have that somber feeling like before. Do you have to change the colors on each page individually?
  
  It looks way better for your first site than a bunch of others I have seen from folks who have been making sites a long time.
  
  Congratulations.
  
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  NickySouthProductions 14 years ago
  
  Hello all,
  
  I am very new to this affiliate thing all together. I need your help! I am a music producer that makes instrumentals & Beats for artists on the internet. The market is literally booming right now. I do sell beats. What I am trying to figure out is how to have it setup where other affiliates sell my beats and I give them a huge commission. I do not know if I am in the right place, if not maybe you can point me in the right direction. Or would be great if anyone has some knowledge on this. My website that currently sells my products is NickySouthBeats, very simple site. I can not put the .com because the thread will not let me because im new. If I needed to make a better site I would. Any help is much APPRECIATED! Thanks,
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weatherforecast

14 years ago

It's a good site. But give us some details. This site is for what ? anyway pretty site . get traffic and do what you need with this site

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PatriciaS

14 years ago

Oh, no!!

Jess, I don't like this version nearly as much. I think your new header looks a bit cartoonish, and the overall design, while no longer "somber," is also no longer as sophisticated and elegant looking.

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packerfan 14 years ago

Looks like a pretty nice site. Lots of content, like the forum integrated on the site. One criticism... It's really hard to read for me, and little unorganized. The gray background and grayish text is tough on my eyes. I could never read an entire article with that layout.

But great job on your first site.
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JamesWilder

14 years ago

Looks great.

What did you use to make it?

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Ralph Moore

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Inthehoof

Hi this is my first site, could someone please just give me a quick review before I start advertising it. There are no adds at the moment

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inthehoof.com

That is a very nice start to what could be a great site.

I think you need to generally increase the font size overall on the entire site, even though that may change the formatting. Use Arial or Verdana as a standard font for reading on a pc.

Also, when you are formatting articles, be sure to limit the length of each paragraph to about three or four sentences at most, and leave a double space between paragraphs. It is much easier to read and encourages people to stay on the site.

You can probably increase the font size on the menu buttons without changing the size of many of the buttons since there is so much white space before and after the text.

Gotta love the content. Very nice.

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mycyberquest 14 years ago

Looks great... the next thing you need is traffic to your sites.
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internetsecretbook 14 years ago

You have a very nice site. It is user-friendly. The over-all design, lay-out and menus are all great! Congratulations!
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Brian Douglas

14 years ago

I like it, clean and fresh. Good luck I hope it works well for you.

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jaiganeshv

14 years ago

pics load very slow.. do they have too many pics in home page?

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Also the navigation links are comparatively small for me!! other than that it looks different and nice

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whiteshadow1890

Banned 14 years ago

Cool website, but your login or register link doesn't work. I am using Firefox 3.6.3.

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

Originally Posted by whiteshadow1890

Cool website, but your login or register link doesn't work. I am using Firefox 3.6.3.

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I just went on it and it lets me sign up? Im using internet explorer

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Inthehoof

14 years ago

Thank you all so much, i really do appriciate it. Im going to work on all the recommendations tonight and start writting articles to advertise it and hopefully make a little money from affiliate links. chi-whiz ive got rid of the cartoon grass
Jess

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Jim Hegarty

14 years ago

Nice site. I like the topic. I'd make the banner a little more "professional" It looks a little too much like a template site.

But a great start!

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

I dont know what to have on the banner, i had some cartoon grass but everyone said it stopped it looking professional and slick. That is what i need help on next i keep playing around with it but i dont think it looks right?

Thank you for the comment

Jess
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Shazia Mirza

14 years ago

It is a good site, for well a website standard.

But at the moment, it is nowhere close to seeing the day light of income.

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

Originally Posted by IMReview

It is a good site, for well a website standard.

But at the moment, it is nowhere close to seeing the day light of income.

What do you think i need to do.
Im open to any criticism at all I want it perfect before rushing out and advertising

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Michael Shook

14 years ago

Originally Posted by IMReview

It is a good site, for well a website standard.

But at the moment, it is nowhere close to seeing the day light of income.

This is not true at all.

Not only is the site put together by somoene who loves what they are doing, but the site itself is laid out well.

Inthehoof is an easy to navigate site with a good selection of topics of interest in the nav bar.

Eventually when the site gets monetized or starts list building, it would be good to replace the picture gallery above the fold with something that helps with those processes, but right now, it is very decent site.

@inthehoof Your website will be a constantly gowing and evolving project in your life. It will never be "perfect" but it iis certainly ready to start being advertised and written about in articles and pretty much anything you want to do with it.

You can also find out what people think about their own personal web designs by clicking on the links in their sig files. No offense intended, but in case you don't know what that is, it is the link just below their post that looks kind of like a little advertisement.

It isn't like you need to copy all the designs you see from those websites, but because all those links are supposed to be from your own personal sites you can get an idea, maybe, of what they think is important in web design.

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Inthehoof

14 years ago

thank you the z man. that has built my confidence up

ill have a look at the sig files, there was no offence taken, i didnt know what it was

thanks again
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Michael Shook

14 years ago

Originally Posted by Inthehoof

thank you the z man. that has built my confidence up

ill have a look at the sig files, there was no offence taken, i didnt know what it was

thanks again
jess

You are very welcome.

You might not like everybody's site designs, but you might be able to get some good ideas of what to do or not to do for your own site.

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Shiva

14 years ago

Great work as a newbie..keep it up! the site is professional and looks attractive!!

Color combination is good!

Now get alot of traffic..!

good luck..

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

Originally Posted by Shiva

Great work as a newbie..keep it up! the site is professional and looks attractive!!

Color combination is good!

Now get alot of traffic..!
good luck..

Thank you, im just looking up affiliate programmes now

jess
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adambr

Banned 14 years ago

Never saw a site like this, is it all made in flash, because it loads very fast.

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ekxstores

14 years ago

very nice horses site. very professional

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Inthehoof 14 years ago

Thank you is there anything you would recommend to improve??

thanks again for your comment

jess
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Inthehoof

14 years ago

Originally Posted by mygold

OK that's looking good. But you should some arrangement to this.

I dont understand lol

Jess

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nykn43866

14 years ago

Navigation and site content looks good but just a little slow to load...

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Inthehoof

14 years ago

Grrr i really dont know what to do with my headed/banner, ive tried everything any colour or arrangement suggestions anything welcome

Thanks nykn43866 i need to sort the front pics out so it doesnt slow everything down.

thanks again
jess

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