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What Do You Think : Good Or Bad

by yommys01
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I have just finished a mini site using niche list builder and I would like to know if you think it is good enough or bad. Please give me your views . Discover The Fastest Way To Lose Weight

This is my first site but I need to be sure I am doing the right thing.

To me, the site looks ugly and unattractive. I will be glad if someone on this forum can help me get better.
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  • Profile picture of the author MaskedMarketer
    I should not have to scroll down to opt in...
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  • Profile picture of the author Jared Alberghini
    Couple of things I noticed, your subheadline, 'secrett' should read 'secret'

    There is a bunch of space above and below your optin form that needs to be removed, or maybe put an eye catching graphic image about weight loss there...

    For something this simple, you should have your optin visible 'above the fold' so people don't have to scroll to get to your form.

    It says, Click the 'Instant Access' button below, there is no such button, it says 'Get more info' on the button...

    To be honest it needs a bit of work to look more professional... and make it stand out more...

    I would suggest some type of graphics to liven it up...

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  • Profile picture of the author Charann Miller
    Not sure about anyone else, or if it might be my browser but the size of optin box is too big, you should reduce the size of it, there is a little too much excess space.

    It's good that you kept your benefits above the fold to grab their attention but I would add more. Write as many as you can then weed out the ones that don't do anything for you. You have more choice and pick the best of the bunch that way.

    Also people are becoming quite savvy these days and are reluctant to part with their email addresses unless you give them a good enough reason to. Instead of getting them to opt in to look at your website, why not offer them a free report that is relevant and targeted to your offer? Give them some free weight loss tips with your affiliate link peppered throughout your report. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Lockwood
    In Firefox your yellow optin box is way too tall- lots of empty space. If you just remove the height parameter in your table, that should fix it.

    I give you credit for at least spelling "lose" right; too many people say "loose weight."
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