I know it is imperfect but at least I apply A.I.D.A
I'm not quite confident in my story though, I believe there are lot of grammar mistake and maybe sometimes sounds funny. That's because English isn't my first language.
So, what do you think awesome warrior? Especially you who experienced in copywriting.
Any advise will be greatly appreciated.
Oh, almost forgot... here is my sales letter. Blue (red) link to sales letter.