How I made $100 last month- Please review my Squeeze page

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I just made a squeeze page I plan on using to market myself.

In it I share exactly how I made money last month. This concerns me because I don't know if this is a sound option.

Iv'e heard the concept of "Moving the free line" from eben pagan but I have also heard this is a bunch of bunk.
People say to make people pay for your stuff.

Kinda Confused. Take a look, maybe its not even good enough to try to sell:confused:

Here is the link

Take action Roll the dice

Art
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  • Profile picture of the author scrofford
    Originally Posted by Art Peterson View Post

    I just made a squeeze page I plan on using to market myself.

    In it I share exactly how I made money last month. This concerns me because I don't know if this is a sound option.

    Iv'e heard the concept of "Moving the free line" from eben pagan but I have also heard this is a bunch of bunk.
    People say to make people pay for your stuff.

    Kinda Confused. Take a look, maybe its not even good enough to try to sell:confused:

    Here is the link

    Take action Roll the dice

    Art
    One thing off the bat is it seems your headline is missing a word. Your headline doesn't really draw me in and interest me to want to watch the video, so I didn't.

    A headline is supposed to at least attract attention. You need to come up with something that will snap people out of their zombie like state when they come to visit your site.
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  • Profile picture of the author Greg McKenzie
    Originally Posted by scrofford View Post

    One thing off the bat is it seems your headline is missing a word. Your headline doesn't really draw me in and interest me to want to watch the video, so I didn't.

    A headline is supposed to at least attract attention. You need to come up with something that will snap people out of their zombie like state when they come to visit your site.
    I totally agree - the missing word was the first thing I noticed!

    I'd go with a headline something like this....

    Who Else Would Like To Learn How To Make An Easy $100 For
    Less Than 20 Minutes Work? FREE Video Reveals All!


    I'd obviously spend more time than the 2 minutes I did on the example headline above!

    Originally Posted by Art Peterson View Post

    I just made a squeeze page I plan on using to market myself.

    In it I share exactly how I made money last month. This concerns me because I don't know if this is a sound option.

    Iv'e heard the concept of "Moving the free line" from eben pagan but I have also heard this is a bunch of bunk.
    People say to make people pay for your stuff.

    Kinda Confused. Take a look, maybe its not even good enough to try to sell

    Here is the link

    Take action Roll the dice

    Art
    Hi Art,

    In my opinion there is NO reason for them to give you their
    details. You are giving away the good stuff on the squeeze page.

    What do they get if they subscribe?

    I think the video on your squeeze page should be pre-selling
    the existing instructional video that you have on the squeeze page.

    I'd put a new video of you on the squeeze page saying...

    Hey thanks for visiting my website you are obviously here because
    you are looking for extra income!

    If you'd like to learn how to make the easiest $100 you are ever
    likely to make for less than 20 minutes real work

    Then....


    All you need to do right now, is enter your name and email address
    in the form on the right and I'll see you on the inside....

    I would expand on the above but it gives you an outline.

    Hope this helps!

    Greg
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    • Profile picture of the author DanTheSeoGuy
      Instead of that vid maybe you should put some bullet points describing what they'll get if they subscribe and definitely you need to change that title into something more eye catching (think numbers).

      Dan.
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